***dass rabba hun oh kihde layi sukha sukhdi hai.***

[Talli_ji]

Kade mere halaan vich oh rehandi si,
hun kade kade haal mera oh puchdi hai.
Kade apni har gal sanjhi kardi si,
hun tawiin tawiin gal puchdi hai,
Kade ik pal vich russ ke mann jandi si,
hun lagda jive zindagi bhar lai rus gayi hai,
Rabba ik gal menu sachi dassin,
ki tere to mera haal kade puchdi hai?
kise hor de rang vich ta nahi rangi gayi,
na oh kujh puchdi hai te na kuch dassdi hai,
RICKY nu pata tere dar te oh hun vi aundi hai,
par tu hi sach dassi ke kihde lai sukha sukhdi hai.........

 

[mast malang]

bahot sohna likhiya 22...
hor suna ki haal aa..

 

[Talli_ji]

haal vire gud ne, bus chali jandi zndgi, dhakka start jehi...........hor tusi kida?.....mai yaar nava ethe..........

bahot sohna likhiya 22...
hor suna ki haal aa..

 

[Talli_ji]

hanji, menu ikk gal zaror pata lag gayi ethe, ke es site te ah poetry nu koi nahi parrda, fer es column ( poetry, shayari, intezar) nu banan da ki fayda.............sirf mere hi nahi , horan de vi likhe shayer nu koi nahi parrda, kise kol tym nahi............so appa ta ajjto , than leya ke ethe koi shayer nahi likhna , bakki gappan jiniyan marzi maralo...........rabb rakha jii..........

 

[jattpunjabi]

hanji, menu ikk gal zaror pata lag gayi ethe, ke es site te ah poetry nu koi nahi parrda, fer es column ( poetry, shayari, intezar) nu banan da ki fayda.............sirf mere hi nahi , horan de vi likhe shayer nu koi nahi parrda, kise kol tym nahi............so appa ta ajjto , than leya ke ethe koi shayer nahi likhna , bakki gappan jiniyan marzi maralo...........rabb rakha jii..........

nai veer eho jo koi gall nahi.main ta sarian de poetry pardhda haan infact main sarian posts hi pardhda haan te reply v karda haan......ih gall vakhjri hai ke ajkal jyadatar lok sirf ohi pardhde jo unha noo changa lagda......nahi veer tu sohna likhda te jaroor likh.......give damn to those who dont dare to read urs......

 

[Talli_ji]

na veer dekh hi leya..........tere to siva ethe kihne darshan ditta a........chalo koi ni...tym sab da aunda.........hehe

 

[❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤]

bohat vadia jiii.......thxxxxxxx

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

nice poem its so true

 

[jaggi633725]

Re: ***dass rabba hun oh kihde layi sukh

nice.

 

[.::singh chani::.]

nice tfs......