chehre

[nonfictious]

na jayo is chehre pe
hamne bhi is chere se dhokha khaya hai
chehra dekh ke pyar kar bathe
par badle mein 'DEEP' judayi ka gam paya hai

 

[MaRjAnA]

Again a nice one!!!

 

[Sonia_Nz]

vah vah vah seriously very awesum shayeri keep it up n hope to see heaps n heaps of poems frm yer side

 

[Jango_Baba]

vadiya a amitra..keep it up

 

[P-a-r-d-e-s-i]

bohut hi nice................
likhya tusiiii

 

[P-a-r-d-e-s-i]

me bhi kuch likhna chahaga....

Sohni surat lut k lai gyi yaara nu,
Ranjhe warge jogi takht hzara nu,
Kudiya pichhe lag k jind barbad hi hundi a,
Sohni surat akhir dhokhebaj hi hundi a…!!!

 

[nonfictious]

kya bat hai ji

 

[P-a-r-d-e-s-i]

thnaks... ji

 

[amanNBN]

nice...tfs...

 

[Rajat]

tfs...

 

[jaggi633725]

nice.

 

[Und3rgr0und J4tt1]

thxxx

 

[.::singh chani::.]

nice tfs......