Badi choti umar ch sajna sada pyar mar gya

[SHEREPUNJAB]

SSA dosto ik kavita likhi hae .........umeed hae tuhanu pasand ayegi na vee ayi tan apnae comments suggestions jaroor dae dena .........


Badi choti umar ch sajna sada pyar mar gya,
kiven eni waddi sat nu mera dil jar gya
waqt dee haneri lae gayi mere saare haasae hoonjh ke,
peedan da chandra baddal kyun mere te war gya

main roj rati apne pyar dee maut tae hanju wahaundi haan,
main moi mohabbat dae layi nit waen paundi han
main dub gayi es gan ch te tu has ke tar gya
Badi choti umar ch sajna sada pyar mar gya.......

bhar joban ch pair c rakhia saadae pyar nae,
navishwash naam dee bimari ohnu la tee sansaaar nae
tenu kee gam tera tan mere bin sar gya
Badi choti umar ch sajna sada pyar mar gya.......

kuch saade pyar nu maaran wich tera v kafi dosh c,
main samji na kae tu jismani nashae ch madhosh c
jad samajh ayi odon maut nu labh c saadae pyar da ghar gya
Badi choti umar ch sajna sada pyar mar gya.......

main kamli nae har heela keeta GURSHARAN mardae pyar nu bachaun da,
labhia na koi tareeka jaandian nu mod lyun da
mere pyar da kaatil mehboob mera kinni safayi nal eh katal kar gya
Badi choti umar ch sajna sada pyar mar gya.......

 

[SherDil™]

sohni kavita

 

[smilly]

Bhot vadiyaa dear......

 

[SHEREPUNJAB]

thxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx veero

 

[Ravivir]

22 ji pyar kade nahi marda
Pyar taan amar bel di tarah hunda
bhaven is nu phook devo phir v hari ho jandi hai
pyar taan shah de vyaj varga
ik vaar kar levo taan vadada hi janda hai

 

[simarsingh]

last line te ah ke tou mundeya kehar kar dita
bohat wadiya likheya :D
keep it up :D

 

[simar]

wadhiya wa..........

 

[SHEREPUNJAB]

Thx 4 appreiciating friends ... pyar bohut kuvh hundae pat ethe tusi situatuion nae dekhi k kee hae je koi tuhade pyar nu tadpada chad jaye te kite hor dil laga lave tan pyar mar handae ...............hope u got it ....dubara padna veer dhayn nal

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

very nice dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 

[SHEREPUNJAB]

Thx..........................

 

[nonfictious]

Gur bahot vadhiya apne dil de hav bhav pech keete ne
thnks for sharing

 

[V € € R]

really nice................. keep itt upp

 

[SHEREPUNJAB]

Thx for appreciating

 

[jaggi633725]

Re: Badi choti umar ch sajna sada pyar m

nice.

 

[Sonyjatt]

Nice.

Hello ji, mai tuhadi likhi kavita padi bahut changi laggi, mainu ek gall dasoge maivi shayri te geet likhda haan, mainu eh dasso ki mai kavita nu kithe chhapawa jehde loki meri likhi kavita pad sakan, plz reply

 

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