Asin vich suay de paani

[Mukesh Sharma]

Asin vich suay de paani vangu pta nahi kad veh jana,
keete ehsaan jo tu mere te bojj sir sade te reh jana,
bhare joban vich “Muesh” ne alvida tenu keh jana,
tenu mur k sajjan nahi labhne sada naa hi chete reh jana.....

 

[$hokeen J@tt]

nice one

plz go through poetry rules at once

https://www.unp.me/f30/rules-poetry-section-106023/

 

[preet_singh]

 

[#m@nn#]

nice......