AkhAn bhAr k wekh lyA kAr menu...

[Sukhmeet_Kaur]

Tu e tA khndA c k AkhAn bhAr k wekh lyA kAr menu...
Hun tere chAd jAn bAd Akh tA bhAr ondi AA...
PAr tu kite v nAzAr nhiO ondA...!!!

 

[ลgǝи†.47]

whats wrong with your keyboard mate ?

 

[Sukhmeet_Kaur]

whats wrong with your keyboard mate ?

It's style

 

[Parv]

Tu e tA khndA c k AkhAn bhAr k wekh lyA kAr menu...
Hun tere chAd jAn bAd Akh tA bhAr ondi AA...
PAr tu kite v nAzAr nhiO ondA...!!!

Sukhmeet kaur ...serious matter lgda...

 

[ลgǝи†.47]

It's style

makes it hard to read , changes the perception of what you are trying to convey in your poem/poetry

 

[Black Cat]

Sukhmeet kaur ...serious matter lgda...

Serious matter hi ta haiga....

Hna @Sukhmeet_Kaur

 

[Parv]

Serious matter hi ta haiga....

Hna @Sukhmeet_Kaur

Heiga aa ...akhraan ch byan ho rya...

 

[KARAN]

nazar check krva leni c

 

[→ ✰ Dead . UnP ✰ ←]

Akhan Bhar ke dehkya ta dundla dissu...

 

[Sukhmeet_Kaur]

Serious matter hi ta haiga....

Hna @Sukhmeet_Kaur

Tenu ta sab pta e aa @~Kamaldeep Kaur~

 

[Singh-a-lion]

Akhan Bhar ke dehkya ta dundla dissu...

Oh kehnda hi taan c k akha bhar k dekh taan jo dundla disse te oh nikal jave
End wali line cha kudi aap khendi hun kite disda ni

La gaya pattu skeem

 

[Black Cat]

Tenu ta sab pta e aa @~Kamaldeep Kaur~

Aaho...

 

[Parv]

Oh kehnda hi taan c k akha bhar k dekh taan jo dundla disse te oh nikal jave
End wali line cha kudi aap khendi hun kite disda ni

La gaya pattu skeem