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[Faizullapuria-Rai]

 

[*Amrinder Hundal*]

jehre baaki gaand pone ne pehlaa ohna nu kho ...........aate di chiri sharry ne likhea te baaki yenkne varge te kudia te bussan ve hor riter daaaaaaaa

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

mein aithe kujh zaroor kehna chawanga,, kyuki mein wi likhan da thoda shaunk rakhda haan,, m not a poet/writer/lyricist .... par pher wi thoda shaunk rakhda tan shayad eh ehsaas samjh sakda haan

1. har nazam/geet/kavita ch ikk alag topic ikk alag soch hundi hai.. har song/kavita nu dujji naal compare naa karo
2. jado writer kujh likhda tan oh ikk particular topic te soch k likhda,,, zaroori nhi ki kudiyan di burai karke banda dujji poem/song ch kudiyan baare changa likhan da haqq nhi rakhda
3. sab nu pta kudiyan ch wi buraiya ne ajjkal,, te jado eho jeha writer de dimag ch aaonda tan oh eh sab likhda hai,,, sirf ikk lesson den lyi samaaj nu, te sach nu muhre rakhan lyi.
4. baaki bai g, bande da dimag kdo ikk topic te soche,,, kujh nhi keha jaa sakda,, har writer koshish krda ki oh har topic nu cover kre....

 

[Arun Bhardwaj]

22 har writter oh likhna pasnd krda hai jo janta nu changa lage, jis nal ohda janta de dila ch ek mukam ban ske, is lai oh janta ki sochdi hai oh ki sunna pasnd kregi oh is nu dhyan ch rkh ke hi likhda hai.. waise v je koi chiz changi nhi lagi tn janta kol ohnu reject krn da option hai, oh na sune ohde songs..

 

[Faizullapuria-Rai]

i agree with you all buddies

 

[Ravivir]

likhiya wadia hai par main nahi sochda sharry mann ne kujh essa gaya hove jis naal kise kudi di dignity hurt hoyi hove.
eh department yoyo shehad singh da aa

 

[#m@nn#]

gaane vadya hunde ehde..par last song ne thoda disapnt kita..fark bade ne yankne ni... us vich jdo kehnda fark bade ne purjya .. boht e ghatya ja lagda... i thnk je eh word geet vich na vartya hunda tn vadya rehnda....

 

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