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yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor... kirda kirda kir gya.. muthhi cho ek yaar hor.. aadat jahi hai ho gai hun lutt jaan ke rovan di... .....


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Old 10-05-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...
kirda kirda kir gya.. muthhi cho ek yaar hor..

aadat jahi hai ho gai hun lutt jaan ke rovan di...

shayad kar baithha main kade fir koi pyaar hor...

jis lai tu mukkrya oh ek hona teri umar wich...

mere warge mil jaange tainu kai hazaar hor...

inteha ho gai... seh hunda nai maithho eh dard...

maaf kar deo main challya.. hokey bezaar hor...

unjh ta tu pehla hi dil bhar lya hona ae yaar...

je kasar hai ta laa lavi ilzaam do chaar hor...

boht mashoori hai teri... qatilaan di jooh andar...

aapne ferhrisat-e-shikar kar lai 'simmy' shumar hor...

 
Old 11-05-2007
arpita
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

ghaint kavita likhi eh veere it's really good...well written n feelings well expressed...though I feel k shayad tussi kisse nu ghalt samajh rahe ho...better to clear the air with that person...anyways keep sharing ur kavitas

 
Old 11-05-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

lol.. main jo samjhna si samjh chukka ha arpi.. baaki.. rabb jaanda.. thanks for appreciation

 
Old 11-05-2007
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

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Old 14-05-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

thanks sandoz..

 
Old 14-05-2007
saaina
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

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Old 14-05-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

Originally Posted by saaina View Post
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thanks saaina.. for ur understanding..

 
Old 14-05-2007
saaina
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

Originally Posted by gorakhnathdatilla View Post
thanks saaina.. for ur understanding..
.....
ah poem kyon parrhi main

 
Old 14-05-2007
Loveye
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

baut wadiya likhi a.....sachi//////////

 
Old 14-05-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

Originally Posted by saaina View Post
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ah poem kyon parrhi main
chal.. hun ta padh lai.. hun ki ho sakda..

Originally Posted by LoVeNeeT View Post
baut wadiya likhi a.....sachi//////////
thanks ji ..

 
Old 20-05-2007
Ramni
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

bohat nice aa ji

 
Old 22-05-2007
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Smile Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te ek war hor...

GOOOOOOOOOOD WORK FRIEND

 
Old 17-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te

nice.

 
Old 19-02-2009
Rajat
 
Re: yakeen kar baithhe si... asi kise te

vadiya..


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