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Old 11-02-2008
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Hey guyz..... hea nother lines m presentin 2 all of u bt i cnt understand wats da suitable title 4 itt......... so read dis & suggest a gudd title 4 dis poem....???
Thnxxx.........

I miss your smile...
I miss your laugh...
I miss everything about you...
I don't see you anymore...
When i really want to talk to you....
i care so much for you...
I don't understand- what did i do?
I thought something was going
to happen between us...
You were sweet and charming
with the words you said...
But something happened, i don't know...
what went wrong?
I cried so much just laying on my bed...
I say i'm over you... but i really know...
I can't forget you and i never will...
I want you to be there...
And you don't even know

 
Old 11-02-2008
grewalsandy
 
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Very nice dear....



Title: Love Life

 
Old 11-02-2008
smilly
 
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Dil diyaan galan ne mitra...... Bhut vadiyaa.....

 
Old 12-02-2008
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Originally Posted by grewalsandy View Post
Very nice dear....



Title: Love Life
yupp gudd title.........
thnx 4 likin itt

 
Old 12-02-2008
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Originally Posted by smilly View Post
Dil diyaan galan ne mitra...... Bhut vadiyaa.....
dil diyaa gall dil hi jaane.......... dujja koi na jaane....
22 ji bt ki kar sakde aa.........

 
Old 13-02-2008
Lily
 
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Originally Posted by veer View Post
Hey guyz..... hea nother lines m presentin 2 all of u bt i cnt understand wats da suitable title 4 itt......... so read dis & suggest a gudd title 4 dis poem....???
Thnxxx.........

I miss your smile...
I miss your laugh...
I miss everything about you...
I don't see you anymore...
When i really want to talk to you....
i care so much for you...
I don't understand- what did i do?
I thought something was going
to happen between us...
You were sweet and charming
with the words you said...
But something happened, i don't know...
what went wrong?
I cried so much just laying on my bed...
I say i'm over you... but i really know...
I can't forget you and i never will...
I want you to be there...
And you don't even know
Nice One...........thanx for sharing 22 ji.....

 
Old 13-02-2008
darveshpreet
 
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[quote=veer;375927]Hey guyz..... hea nother lines m presentin 2 all of u bt i cnt understand wats da suitable title 4 itt......... so read dis & suggest a gudd title 4 dis poem....???[quote]
How about I Miss You

 
Old 14-02-2008
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[quote=darveshpreet;377117][quote=veer;375927]Hey guyz..... hea nother lines m presentin 2 all of u bt i cnt understand wats da suitable title 4 itt......... so read dis & suggest a gudd title 4 dis poem....???
How about I Miss You
yupp agree aa main vi.......... I Miss U title shona hai ji.........

 
Old 14-02-2008
TaRaN.rbk
 
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Nice one ......thnx

 
Old 14-02-2008
sunny240
 
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nice one ,,,,,,tfs........

 
Old 14-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
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nice.

 
Old 14-02-2009
Rajat
 
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nice..


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