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udaasi.................

Kehnde barri benoor jehi rehandi aa, kithe gaye ehde haase ne? Kinjh rahan mein hasdi, jad saade sajjan aap udaase ne. Zindagi ik darya ajeha, jisde dukh hi dove paase .....


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Old 15-07-2007
roop@punjaban
 
Arrow udaasi.................

Kehnde barri benoor jehi rehandi aa, kithe gaye ehde haase ne?
Kinjh rahan mein hasdi, jad saade sajjan aap udaase ne.
Zindagi ik darya ajeha, jisde dukh hi dove paase ne.
Jinni naini asan madhosh ho dubna c, oh taan yaaro aap pyaase ne.....

 
Old 15-07-2007
sukkha
 
Re: udaasi.................

Bohat wadiya sheyar ate oss to vi wadiya tuada signature.

 
Old 15-07-2007
roop@punjaban
 
Re: udaasi.................

ssa ji
thnks sukh ji

 
Old 15-07-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: udaasi.................

ghaint hai ji,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 15-07-2007
roop@punjaban
 
Re: udaasi.................

ssa ji
welcome ji

 
Old 15-07-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: udaasi.................

kYUN PAYIYA PREETA SADE NAAL
JE DHOKE HI SANU DENE SI
JE HASE NAHI SANU DE SAKIA
TAAN HANJU VI NAHI DENE SI...


 
Old 15-07-2007
roop@punjaban
 
Re: udaasi.................

ssa ravivir ji
eh te hai
but ki kariye dukh te palle de geya mere
j pyar na sahhi
mainu ehhi sogaat bhut aa

 
Old 16-07-2007
prinzdude
 
Re: udaasi.................

very nice, swaad aa gaya

 
Old 16-07-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: udaasi.................

realli nice..bahut sohna likheya aa roop

 
Old 16-07-2007
smilly
 
Re: udaasi.................

Originally Posted by roop@punjaban View Post
Kehnde barri benoor jehi rehandi aa, kithe gaye ehde haase ne?
Kinjh rahan mein hasdi, jad saade sajjan aap udaase ne.
Zindagi ik darya ajeha, jisde dukh hi dove paase ne.
Jinni naini asan madhosh ho dubna c, oh taan yaaro aap pyaase ne.....
Bhut vadiyaa likhay.dear.. Ek gehara dard ja hai is vich....

Zindagi taan Khusiyaan da samandar vi hai...
Meri kismat vich kyun udaasiyaa ne rabba......

 
Old 18-07-2007
Bhullar
 
Re: udaasi.................

Dar si sanu samundaran da..
Dob dita sanu kinareyan ne..
Dhup ton dardeyan asi rat labi..
Jakhmi kar dita sanu TARREAN nesmirk smirk smirk

 
Old 18-07-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: udaasi.................

[quote=roop@punjaban;286701]
Kehnde barri benoor jehi rehandi aa,



Kehnde barri benoor jehi rehndi aa
aaj kal kidhar eh hoor rehndi aa
Roopm jhalia nahi si janda majajan da
Aaj kal koi message vi nahi aayia ROOP PUNJABAN da


 
Old 19-07-2007
❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤
 
Re: udaasi.................

bohat vadiaaa ji..tankuuuu

 
Old 19-07-2007
Fakkar Jatt
 
Re: udaasi.................

Originally Posted by roop@punjaban View Post
Kehnde barri benoor jehi rehandi aa, kithe gaye ehde haase ne?
Kinjh rahan mein hasdi, jad saade sajjan aap udaase ne.
Zindagi ik darya ajeha, jisde dukh hi dove paase ne.
Jinni naini asan madhosh ho dubna c, oh taan yaaro aap pyaase ne.....
Bahut Vadhya Kuryiee

 
Old 08-08-2007
roop@punjaban
 
Re: udaasi.................

ssa ji
thanbaad saareyan da


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