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****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

dosto ih kavita mere ik net dost nu arpan ki pata si iss tarah apne paraye honn-ge, bhenna de qaatil, apni hi maa de jaaye honn-ge, mehak di hai ih .....


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Old 08-01-2008
reshmi_mutiyar
 
****tutte dil nahi judd-de****


dosto ih kavita mere ik net dost nu arpan



ki pata si iss tarah apne paraye honn-ge,
bhenna de qaatil, apni hi maa de jaaye honn-ge,
mehak di hai ih hawaa, mausam taahi rangeen hai,
jaapda hai, oh v ajj, kite muskraye honn-ge,

ih ghatta chup chaap taahi warr rahi hai dosto,
iss ne v mere waang, gamm dil wich shupaye honn-ge,
ih kadon maloom si uss waqat, ki jhakad jhullna,
ful jadon iss baag de mehkaan ch aye honn-ge,

ussde dil wich v kadi ta, uthda howega toofaan,
uss nu v beete zamaane yaad aye honn-ge,
arash te jo chan taare hun chamakde dosto,
rab ne mere uss yaar di nakal karke banaye honn-ge,

ih jo ful tahni to tutt ke rull rahe ne jai,
ihna ne v meri tarah, suphne sajaye honn-ge,



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Old 08-01-2008
sunny240
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

bhaut wadyiea ji.....i have no words 2 express....
oh saare bhaut lucky ne jina nu tuhade warga frnd milyea.......

 
Old 09-01-2008
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Talking Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

Bohut sohna likhya ...............i dont have words to prise .......Ise tarah likhdae raho

 
Old 09-01-2008
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

,thnxxx sunny dear,,,, tusi sift jada hi ker dinde aa,,,,,

 
Old 09-01-2008
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

thnxxxxx a lot sherepunjab ji,,,,,

 
Old 09-01-2008
Kav
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

very well worded......... good work...............

 
Old 09-01-2008
smilly
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

Bhot vadiyaa dear.......

Tutte dil nahi judd de ....

 
Old 10-01-2008
sunny240
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

Originally Posted by reshmi_mutiyar View Post
,thnxxx sunny dear,,,, tusi sift jada hi ker dinde aa,,,,,

galti ta tuhadi hai tusi sohna hi ena likhkde ho assi ki karyea..........

 
Old 10-01-2008
grewalsandy
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

Aha maja aa gaya ji.
Ki likhea hai, bahoot hi vadiya.

Hun main os bande nu ki akha jis ne tohade varge dost di kadar nahi kiti. Nasamjh hai janda nahi ki khuss reha hai ohde to.

Par likhea bahoot hi vadiya hai. tfs... keep it up

 
Old 14-01-2008
sadda Rab Janda
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

Dear bahut hi sohna likhaya hai...................waise tuhada taan harek kamm hi bda sohna hunda hai.................No words for praising...................Bas bahut hi wadiya hai

 
Old 14-01-2008
V € € R
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

sacchhi main ina saareya naa agree aa ki bahot hi shona likheya aa ji..........
thnx 4 sharin itt........ ur frnds r sooo lucky dear.........

 
Old 14-01-2008
arpita
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

asi lucky sige reshmi sis sade life ch aaye
bohot sohna likhde c

 
Old 15-01-2008
Jass-DS
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

Nice Ji...Bahut Wadiya Presentation Diti...Superb...

 
Old 16-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: ****tutte dil nahi judd-de****

nice.


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