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Teri tasveer to tera haal puchde haan Kive bhull gaeo sada pyarr puchde haan Kade akhde si tere bina nhiyo sarna Ajj sar gya kive ae sawal puchde haan Galat .....


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Old 08-05-2007
Loveye
 
teri tasveer

Teri tasveer to tera haal puchde haan
Kive bhull gaeo sada pyarr puchde haan
Kade akhde si tere bina nhiyo sarna
Ajj sar gya kive ae sawal puchde haan


Galat jagah te layi
galti sadi c
uto kiti laparwahi
galti sadi c
ohda ta koi saath nibhaun da wada nai c
dil nu jhuti aas jagai
galti sadi c

kade takde si do nain sanu chori chori
ajj oh nain hor ho gaye
pehla dil kita sada chori
hun oh sade chit chor ho gaye
sade bin jo kadi na lainde si saah
ajj ohna layi asi gair ho gaye
sadi ek hasi nal jina de jalde si chirag
uhna layi ajj asi benoor ho gaye
main pucheya kyo ayye sadi jindgi ch tusi
oh ek sorry keh k bilkul bekasoor ho gaye


==loveneet==

 
Old 08-05-2007
•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤°
 
Re: teri tasveer


very nice..

 
Old 08-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: teri tasveer

Originally Posted by LoVeNeeT View Post
Teri tasveer to tera haal puchde haan

Kive bhull gaeo sada pyarr puchde haan
Kade akhde si tere bina nhiyo sarna
Ajj sar gya kive ae sawal puchde haan


Galat jagah te layi
galti sadi c
uto kiti laparwahi
galti sadi c
ohda ta koi saath nibhaun da wada nai c
dil nu jhuti aas jagai
galti sadi c

kade takde si do nain sanu chori chori
ajj oh nain hor ho gaye
pehla dil kita sada chori
hun oh sade chit chor ho gaye
sade bin jo kadi na lainde si saah
ajj ohna layi asi gair ho gaye
sadi ek hasi nal jina de jalde si chirag
uhna layi ajj asi benoor ho gaye
main pucheya kyo ayye sadi jindgi ch tusi
oh ek sorry keh k bilkul bekasoor ho gaye


==loveneet==
bohut sohna dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 08-05-2007
Preeto
 
Re: teri tasveer

wow bohat vadyia likhyia sis............keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Old 08-05-2007
J_Pannu
 
Re: teri tasveer

bohat sohna likhea sachhi very nice

 
Old 10-12-2007
grewalsandy
 
Re: teri tasveer

Kyaa baat hai ji bahoot hi vadiya likheya hai ji

 
Old 10-12-2007
pawangrewal8
 
Smile Re: teri tasveer

bahut hi wadhia likhea tusi.......................

 
Old 14-12-2007
grewalsandy
 
Re: teri tasveer

Reshmi rumaal jaise, hijjara de kandea na, tere picho channa leero leer ho gaye.
Jaan lagga de geyo c 1 tasveer mainu, dekh dekh ohnu tasveer ho gaye.

Sohnea yara rondi hoyee di 1 tasveer banai.
o jithe aasahk gaddi charde mainu os jagah te layi.

 
Old 21-12-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: teri tasveer

wah loveneet...bahut wadiya likheya aa....tfs

 
Old 21-12-2007
Maxsteel
 
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sahi hai,,,likh dena chahida jo dil ch ave,,bahut sahi lagda hai.2-3 vaar padeyo jo likheya hor v vadiya lagega.

Tension jayada na layo...ahh uncommon ho ke common ho gayiyan ne.

[CENTER]Eho jahiyan satta ajj kal loki aam khate hai.
fer sade varge yaar roz milke mehfil jamaude hai.
[CENTER]Jindagi sirf ethe nahi rukdi.
1000,crore di abadi ch ghato ghat 15-16 pyar ate hai


 
Old 21-12-2007
sunny240
 
Re: teri tasveer

nice one........thnx 4 sharing.........

 
Old 12-07-2008
Loveye
 
Re: teri tasveer

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Old 12-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: teri tasveer

nice.


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