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Tera mera pyar Tere mere pyar di kahani ban jave na. hasa kite akhian da pani ban jave na. karde haan pyar jina hasya nu tere asi. ohi hasa naina .....


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Old 01-02-2008
darveshpreet
 
Tera mera pyar

Tera mera pyar

Tere mere pyar di kahani ban jave na.
hasa kite akhian da pani ban jave na.
karde haan pyar jina hasya nu tere asi.
ohi hasa naina di radak ban jave na.

chum lavan ghund wicho nain jede jhakde ne.
darda haan jag de nazar lag jave na.
deed jede akhian da ishq sawardaa.
darda haan ishq sabar ban jave na.

ratan nu main uth uth yaad jinu karda haan.
darda haan kal kite mainu bhul jave na.
karda haan pyar jinu zindagi to wadh ke main.
darda haan dil de tadap ban jave na.

likh davan naam tera dil di kitab ute.
darda haan saha di ravani ruk jave na.
karda hai preet kina pyar tere yaad nu.
darda haan akhan wicho hanju ban aave na.


 
Old 01-02-2008
V € € R
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

nice aa ji............. tfs

 
Old 01-02-2008
toorboys
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

22 g bhoot wadyaa keep it up

 
Old 01-02-2008
grewalsandy
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

Bahoot vadiya veer ji....


Keep it up...


Rabb kare kise da v pyaar kade sabar na bane...

 
Old 01-02-2008
TaRaN.rbk
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

wah darveshpreet g............bot wadiya likhya hai ....

 
Old 01-02-2008
darveshpreet
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

Shukriya sandy,
Koshish mitra nu pasand ayi bas oh safal ho gai.
veer dua da vi bahut ehsanmand haan veer par jo lekha ch likhya onu kon taal sakya. Baki rabb diyan kheda ne.

Originally Posted by grewalsandy View Post
Bahoot vadiya veer ji....


Keep it up...


Rabb kare kise da v pyaar kade sabar na bane...

 
Old 01-02-2008
darveshpreet
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

Shukriya taran veere.

Originally Posted by taran.rbk View Post
wah darveshpreet g............bot wadiya likhya hai ....

 
Old 01-02-2008
darveshpreet
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

Thank you Rupinder.
Originally Posted by toorboys View Post
22 g bhoot wadyaa keep it up

 
Old 01-02-2008
darveshpreet
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

Dhanwaad Darshan veer
Originally Posted by veer View Post
nice aa ji............. tfs

 
Old 01-02-2008
grewalsandy
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

Originally Posted by darveshpreet View Post
Shukriya sandy,
Koshish mitra nu pasand ayi bas oh safal ho gai.
veer dua da vi bahut ehsanmand haan veer par jo lekha ch likhya onu kon taal sakya. Baki rabb diyan kheda ne.
Sab to pehla eh kehna chavanga k 22 naam barha kaim laggea tera....

Baki likhde ta tusi ho hi vadiya.... keep up the good work ....and hope to read many more from you...

 
Old 01-02-2008
sunny240
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

bhaut wadyiea ji.............

 
Old 02-02-2008
jas_jøgåñ
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

nice one ...thanx

 
Old 05-02-2008
darveshpreet
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

Originally Posted by sunny240 View Post
bhaut wadyiea ji.............
Thank you sunny veere

 
Old 05-02-2008
darveshpreet
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

Originally Posted by jas_jøgåñ View Post
nice one ...thanx
Shukriya Jas ji!!

 
Old 05-02-2008
toorboys
 
Re: Tera mera pyar

bhoot wadyaa yaar


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