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Takda jedha rehnda si

Takda jedha rehnda si oh meino takda rhenda si guadian da munda apne khiyalan ich gawacha khawre ki labdha rehnda si jithey vi mein jaawan us toon luk nah pawan .....


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Old 27-04-2007
jimmi
 
Takda jedha rehnda si

Takda jedha rehnda si
oh meino takda rhenda si
guadian da munda
apne khiyalan ich gawacha
khawre ki labdha rehnda si
jithey vi mein jaawan
us toon luk nah pawan
tandoori te roti landian
ya chule agg balaindian
kapde dhondi howan
ya mein waal apne sukhandi howan
oh aas paas rehnda wang parchawan
akhan ich ohdey sawal si
banda oh vi kamal si
muhno oh kujh nah kehnda si
bas tik tik takda rehnda si .
vailey noon khab lag gay
assan vi apni sochan ich pe gay
kadi kadi uss da khiyal vi awanda si
keh iss munde noon ki hoya
gawachiya rehnda hey
te meinoo takda rehnda ey
pata te lage ki chahnda ey
sochan sochn ich kai varhey lang gae
assan apne aap tun vi sangan lag pae
kadi kadi mein vi sochdi saan
takda oh meino rahway
mein kiun eh chawndi aan
mere kol te iss da koi jawab nahein si
kadi kita apne naal vi hisab nahin si
ik din akhan merian meinh varsaiya
dooje din meri doli jani si te
mein pehli war usnoo kol bulaya
us noon keha kal mein chali jawangi
bit bit takdian us di akhon do hanjo digge
mein hanju poojhdiya hoiya kehiya tu kiun ronda ein
mein kujh dinna baad fir awangi.
tak ke meino oh hassiya
kadi tussi takiya hoey
akhon jehda roe
muhon hassiya hoey
ohdey hanjo te oh hassa
meri samjh ich nahein si aaya.
mein khud rondi saan
ki deindi us noon dilasa
doli chaddhiya mein unhon si labhiya
meino te *** paas oh nahein si disiya
ajje vi mein sochdi aan
jande vari uss kamle ne
mar jaane jeun joge nein
meino kiun nahein si takiya
varhey lang gay ajje vi dil ich mein rakhiya
meino jandi vari kiu nahein si uss ne takiya.
jehdha har vele takda meino rehnda si

 
Old 28-04-2007
Preeto
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

wow...pretty long but bohat vadyia.............

 
Old 30-04-2007
bhuchowala
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

gr8 work bai ji... bahut sohna likhea hai

 
Old 01-05-2007
jimmi
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

Originally Posted by Namani View Post
wow...pretty long but bohat vadyia.............
thnk you very much

 
Old 01-05-2007
jimmi
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

Originally Posted by bhuchowala View Post
gr8 work bai ji... bahut sohna likhea hai
bahut bahut dhanvaad ji .

 
Old 03-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

Originally Posted by jimmi View Post
Takda jedha rehnda si
oh meino takda rhenda si
guadian da munda
apne khiyalan ich gawacha
khawre ki labdha rehnda si
jithey vi mein jaawan
us toon luk nah pawan
tandoori te roti landian
ya chule agg balaindian
kapde dhondi howan
ya mein waal apne sukhandi howan
oh aas paas rehnda wang parchawan
akhan ich ohdey sawal si
banda oh vi kamal si
muhno oh kujh nah kehnda si
bas tik tik takda rehnda si .
vailey noon khab lag gay
assan vi apni sochan ich pe gay
kadi kadi uss da khiyal vi awanda si
keh iss munde noon ki hoya
gawachiya rehnda hey
te meinoo takda rehnda ey
pata te lage ki chahnda ey
sochan sochn ich kai varhey lang gae
assan apne aap tun vi sangan lag pae
kadi kadi mein vi sochdi saan
takda oh meino rahway
mein kiun eh chawndi aan
mere kol te iss da koi jawab nahein si
kadi kita apne naal vi hisab nahin si
ik din akhan merian meinh varsaiya
dooje din meri doli jani si te
mein pehli war usnoo kol bulaya
us noon keha kal mein chali jawangi
bit bit takdian us di akhon do hanjo digge
mein hanju poojhdiya hoiya kehiya tu kiun ronda ein
mein kujh dinna baad fir awangi.
tak ke meino oh hassiya
kadi tussi takiya hoey
akhon jehda roe
muhon hassiya hoey
ohdey hanjo te oh hassa
meri samjh ich nahein si aaya.
mein khud rondi saan
ki deindi us noon dilasa
doli chaddhiya mein unhon si labhiya
meino te *** paas oh nahein si disiya
ajje vi mein sochdi aan
jande vari uss kamle ne
mar jaane jeun joge nein
meino kiun nahein si takiya
varhey lang gay ajje vi dil ich mein rakhiya
meino jandi vari kiu nahein si uss ne takiya.
jehdha har vele takda meino rehnda si
hahahahahhahhaha,,, jimmi, ih guandiyan da munda, was in love

bohut sohna likhiya

 
Old 05-05-2007
jimmi
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

Originally Posted by reshmi_mutiyar View Post
hahahahahhahhaha,,, jimmi, ih guandiyan da munda, was in love

bohut sohna likhiya
tussi dasso agar oh munda was in love te fir bolda kun nahein ci dil di gal . oh buzdil ci ya fir love ne uno buzdil bana dita ci .
ik or gal , oh ajj tak ro reha uss piyar lai , te uss kudi de 2 niyane vi ho gay, ajj tak oh uss noon bhuk nahein sakiya.kadi oh vi sukh pa sako ga . eh tussi te dooje sathi dassan te koi mashwara dein ji .

 
Old 05-05-2007
karan4web
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

waah oa....UNP wale ta gaah pai jande ne sare jane...

 
Old 05-05-2007
Loveye
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

Originally Posted by jimmi View Post
Takda jedha rehnda si
oh meino takda rhenda si
guadian da munda
apne khiyalan ich gawacha
khawre ki labdha rehnda si
jithey vi mein jaawan
us toon luk nah pawan
tandoori te roti landian
ya chule agg balaindian
kapde dhondi howan
ya mein waal apne sukhandi howan
oh aas paas rehnda wang parchawan
akhan ich ohdey sawal si
banda oh vi kamal si
muhno oh kujh nah kehnda si
bas tik tik takda rehnda si .
vailey noon khab lag gay
assan vi apni sochan ich pe gay
kadi kadi uss da khiyal vi awanda si
keh iss munde noon ki hoya
gawachiya rehnda hey
te meinoo takda rehnda ey
pata te lage ki chahnda ey
sochan sochn ich kai varhey lang gae
assan apne aap tun vi sangan lag pae
kadi kadi mein vi sochdi saan
takda oh meino rahway
mein kiun eh chawndi aan
mere kol te iss da koi jawab nahein si
kadi kita apne naal vi hisab nahin si
ik din akhan merian meinh varsaiya
dooje din meri doli jani si te
mein pehli war usnoo kol bulaya
us noon keha kal mein chali jawangi
bit bit takdian us di akhon do hanjo digge
mein hanju poojhdiya hoiya kehiya tu kiun ronda ein
mein kujh dinna baad fir awangi.
tak ke meino oh hassiya
kadi tussi takiya hoey
akhon jehda roe
muhon hassiya hoey
ohdey hanjo te oh hassa
meri samjh ich nahein si aaya.
mein khud rondi saan
ki deindi us noon dilasa
doli chaddhiya mein unhon si labhiya
meino te *** paas oh nahein si disiya
ajje vi mein sochdi aan
jande vari uss kamle ne
mar jaane jeun joge nein
meino kiun nahein si takiya
varhey lang gay ajje vi dil ich mein rakhiya
meino jandi vari kiu nahein si uss ne takiya.
jehdha har vele takda meino rehnda si
DEDICATED 2 AKHIL>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

 
Old 05-05-2007
karan4web
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

Originally Posted by LoVeNeeT View Post
DEDICATED 2 AKHIL>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
oh kaun aa hun??

 
Old 05-05-2007
Loveye
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

Originally Posted by karan4web View Post
oh kaun aa hun??
hun ni....... sada c......te sada rahuga.........

 
Old 05-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

Originally Posted by jimmi View Post
tussi dasso agar oh munda was in love te fir bolda kun nahein ci dil di gal . oh buzdil ci ya fir love ne uno buzdil bana dita ci .
ik or gal , oh ajj tak ro reha uss piyar lai , te uss kudi de 2 niyane vi ho gay, ajj tak oh uss noon bhuk nahein sakiya.kadi oh vi sukh pa sako ga . eh tussi te dooje sathi dassan te koi mashwara dein ji .
jimmi g , je mein munda hundi te uss de dill di jaroor dass dindi,,,but he was definitaly in love with her,,,, my guess is he respected he too much,,darda c ki je kudi nu dassan te rejection mil gayee te kudi de dil andar oss de layee nafrat paida ho jayegi,,, te oss to kudi di nafrat te rejection sehan ni kar honi,,,,,

baki iss da juwaab munde mere to vehtar de sakde aa

 
Old 01-09-2007
jimmi
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

Oh Resho kithe chali gai tu .. badeddinna bad mein vi aaya per tussi pata nahein kithe
chale ge .

 
Old 02-09-2007
simar
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

..........................

 
Old 03-09-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: Takda jedha rehnda si

wow dats gr8 work........


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