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Supneyaan di maut

kal rat mere supnya nu maut aa gayi. udnaa chahunde si ohvi uchiyaan havaavaan ch. jeena chahunde si zindagi, khushiyaan mannanaa chahunde si. ohna nu v si haq k oh .....


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Old 19-09-2007
coolyad
 
Supneyaan di maut

kal rat mere supnya nu maut aa gayi.
udnaa chahunde si ohvi uchiyaan havaavaan ch.
jeena chahunde si zindagi, khushiyaan mannanaa chahunde si.
ohna nu v si haq k oh hakeekat ban sakan
dekhan ujala din da , roshni kar sakan.
par, supne taan kade pure nahin hunde.
oh taan bane hunde ne tutan layi.
jiven manaave kisse nu koi fir aap russan layi.
jiven hove zindagi ch khalot aa gayi.
kal raaat mere supnya nu maut aa gayi.

 
Old 20-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: Supneyaan di maut

Nice one dear......

Dear is topic te main vi likh reha si te post karan vala si ....... Par vekh ke changa laga ki tusi Sohna likhaya hai.......

Dear main phere kade pavanga ....... Kyun ki dear zindagi vich kade
Supneyaan di maut ni honi chahid. Jis de supneyaa di maut ho jaave oh insaan pathar ho janda hai te Oh ek laash ban janda hai.........

Tusi vade ton vada supna vekho te us nu pura jaror karo ....
Eh meri dua hai ......

Main vekh ne kuj aise supne ....
Aaj mere unha Supneya di maut ho gayiii......
Lokaan layi main jeenda reha, hasda reha , Khedda reha ....
Sach eh hai ,ki Zinde ji hi Meri maut ho gayi .........

Saada khus ravo dear.........Bas eh dua hai

 
Old 22-09-2007
sonya gupta
 
Re: Supneyaan di maut

Originally Posted by smilly View Post
Nice one dear......

Dear is topic te main vi likh reha si te post karan vala si ....... Par vekh ke changa laga ki tusi Sohna likhaya hai.......

Dear main phere kade pavanga ....... Kyun ki dear zindagi vich kade
Supneyaan di maut ni honi chahid. Jis de supneyaa di maut ho jaave oh insaan pathar ho janda hai te Oh ek laash ban janda hai.........

Tusi vade ton vada supna vekho te us nu pura jaror karo ....
Eh meri dua hai ......

Main vekh ne kuj aise supne ....
Aaj mere unha Supneya di maut ho gayiii......
Lokaan layi main jeenda reha, hasda reha , Khedda reha ....
Sach eh hai ,ki Zinde ji hi Meri maut ho gayi .........

Saada khus ravo dear.........Bas eh dua hai
ssa ji
han ji
supne jaroor dekho kyu k supne tutan de dar naal koi supne dekhne te nai shad dinda so be happy n strong like mee
tccccccccc

 
Old 22-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: Supneyaan di maut

Originally Posted by sonya gupta View Post
ssa ji
han ji
supne jaroor dekho kyu k supne tutan de dar naal koi supne dekhne te nai shad dinda so be happy n strong like mee
tccccccccc
Ssa dear,,,,,
Tusin sahi keh rahe ho supne ni kade mukne chahide....... Supne muke taan jeen da ki faida..... Supne hi agey vadhana sikhande ne.....

Mere Supne na thodin ve rabb .......
Jadon tak mere saah chalde ne......



 
Old 23-09-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: Supneyaan di maut

Vo galat hai jo kehte hai
Ki sapne aakhon se dekhe jate hai
Sach to jeh hai ki
jo dil ki chahat ho
vo sapne ban jate hai

 
Old 23-09-2007
sonya gupta
 
Re: Supneyaan di maut

Originally Posted by smilly View Post
Ssa dear,,,,,
Tusin sahi keh rahe ho supne ni kade mukne chahide....... Supne muke taan jeen da ki faida..... Supne hi agey vadhana sikhande ne.....

Mere Supne na thodin ve rabb .......
Jadon tak mere saah chalde ne......

han ji
theek kiha mai o wowwwwwwww tusi samajh gaye
ye hoi na kuch bahduro wali baat hihihiihihihihihhikeep it up

 
Old 24-09-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: Supneyaan di maut

bahut sohna likhia hai ji..... keep it up.....

 
Old 25-09-2007
jas_jøgåñ
 
Re: Supneyaan di maut

Bahut sohna likheya haiga n i agree wid sonya di n smilly veer supne hi zindgi nu jeen da maksad dinde ne .. saanu supne dekhde rehna chahida ae te poore vi karna chahida ae...tc

 
Old 25-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: Supneyaan di maut

Originally Posted by jas_jøgåñ View Post
Bahut sohna likheya haiga n i agree wid sonya di n smilly veer supne hi zindgi nu jeen da maksad dinde ne .. saanu supne dekhde rehna chahida ae te poore vi karna chahida ae...tc
Hanji jas dear.... Main vi eho kehdaan hai te sochda haan jo supne ni vekhda oh pathar vaang honda hai. Ate rabba sub de supne pure kare supne jin da adhaar sikhande ne..... Ek taakat bakshde ne .......

So supne vekhde ravo ..........

 
Old 16-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: Supneyaan di maut

nice.


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