sajjan payare.......................

roopishwar kaur

Well-known member

• Aug 8, 2007

• #1

kinu kina chaheya,
je eh bol k das dita,
kide lai sara din vich canteen de lagaeya,
je lokan nu saire aam das dita....
fer kada ohnu dil ch waseya,
je dil khol k hi das dita...


je ajj ohnu kich hove gi sade payar di,
kade na kade gal yaad aave gi ohnu kite ekrar di....

ohdiyan akhan vich ki deya,
te sari rat akhan ch hi lang gayi....

aaj bade door baithe han,
hoye majboor baithe han.....
lakhan hi gunah kar,
soch de han k aasi tan bekasoor baithe han.... delete

 

SHauKeeN GaBRu

Chardi Kala

• Aug 8, 2007

• #2

nice likheya ae


but ae delete kyon

 

smilly

VIP

• Aug 8, 2007

• #3

roop@punjaban said:

kinu kina chaheya,
je eh bol k das dita,
kide lai sara din vich canteen de lagaeya,
je lokan nu saire aam das dita....
fer kada ohnu dil ch waseya,
je dil khol k hi das dita...


je ajj ohnu kich hove gi sade payar di,
kade na kade gal yaad aave gi ohnu kite ekrar di....

ohdiyan akhan vich ki deya,
te sari rat akhan ch hi lang gayi....

aaj bade door baithe han,
hoye majboor baithe han.....
lakhan hi gunah kar,
soch de han k aasi tan bekasoor baithe han.... delete

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ssa dear.....

Bhut hi vadiyaa,....

Lagiyaan dilaan diyaa ne........
Jo hanju ch beh janiyaa......
Laakh bhaaj lo yaadan ton...
Eh hor nede aan giyaan.....

 

Johal

ChArDi KaLaN

• Aug 8, 2007

• #4

bahut wadiya likhiaaa.

 

jas_sandhu

JaTT kaiM ThoNu KOi VeHm?

• Aug 8, 2007

• #5

bada sohna lkhya ji...

lagda apni had biti dasni chahi a tusi..
bhot kuj keh gye tusi 4 linean ch...

 

roopishwar kaur

Well-known member

• Aug 8, 2007

• #6

ssa sareyan nu
haanji hadd vitti hi aakh lo
thnks tuhade sareyan da

 

Konvicted_Jatt

S@RP@NCH

• Aug 10, 2007

• #7

gud1 ji.......

 

roopishwar kaur

Well-known member

• Aug 12, 2007

• #8

ssa ji
thnks ji tuhada

 

jaggi633725

***********

• Feb 16, 2009

• #9

nice.