sachian gallan....

jas_sandhu · Mar 10, 2007

Gallan karniyan bdiyan sokhian
Puganiyan koi koi janda...

La tah har koi lenda ,
Niboniyan koi koi janda...

Ghar apne hon sheshe de, duje lai pathar nai chukida,
Rah jandi kudi wal kdi mada nai takida....

Yaari jethe layeiye jan var ke nibaidi,
jigri yaaran nal kdi dga nai kamaidi...

Je samaj na ave agla varka nai thulida,
kita hoya ehsaan kdi kisi da nai bhulida....

Yaari vich paisa kdi nai laida,
Dusman nu milan khali hath nai jayeda....

Rah jande nal bohti dosti nai payidi,
Yaari dosti ch kdi kudi nai leaidi..

Mapiyan da keha kdi nai modida,
Bhul k v sajna da dil nai todida...

SANDHU

SHauKeeN GaBRu · Mar 10, 2007

sandhu saab
badi dungi soch

❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤ · Mar 10, 2007

bohat vadiaaaa.....thxxxx

Gabru_Gulab_Varga · Mar 11, 2007

Nice one brother! Keep it up Jas...

Niki_Grewal · Mar 11, 2007

gr8 work....kaash sare idhan sochan..but last line hi kade kade panga pa jaandi

pps309 · Mar 11, 2007

gud one 22 ji.....................

jas_sandhu · Mar 11, 2007

SHauKeeN GaBRu said:
sandhu saab
badi dungi soch

thankju veere......
soch de sir te ta hun tak duniya kaim aa...

jas_sandhu · Mar 11, 2007

JaSmInA said:
bohat vadiaaaa.....thxxxx

thankju jasmina ji ..tusi pasand kiti...

jas_sandhu · Mar 11, 2007

DangerouslyJatt said:
Nice one brother! Keep it up Jas...

thankju veer......
je tenu vad ghat bol gya hovan tah veer maff kri.
tusi 22 os thread da hun tak reply ni kita....minu rahuga vei tu aje v naraj ah.

Pardesan Punjaban · Mar 11, 2007

wow nice work ji
mere students kaafi improve kar rahe :gig

jas_sandhu · Mar 11, 2007

Niki_Grewal said:
gr8 work....kaash sare idhan sochan..but last line hi kade kade panga pa jaandi

thnkju niki ji....
hanji bhut vadya hove je sare idhan sochan te fir ehna lines da koe matlab hi na rhe...
te tuhanu te ek line panga pandi hai minu 3 ne panga paya

Rah jandi kudi wal kdi nai takida

ashqi marde time kudi tah vekhi hi hundi... :an

Je samaj na ave agla varka nai thulida,

je mian eh line puganda fir topper hunda apne colg da.

Bhul k v sajna da dil nai todida...

hun es barre tah tusi appe samajdar ho..... :gig

jas_sandhu · Mar 11, 2007

Pardesan Punjaban said:
wow nice work ji
mere students kaafi improve kar rahe

thankju guru ji.. :gig

tuhadi hi leeh te chalda peya tuhada shigird..

bas tuhada hath sir te rehna chahida hamesha

Pardesan Punjaban · Mar 11, 2007

jas_sandhu said:
thankju guru ji..
tuhadi hi leeh te chalda peya tuhada shigird..
bas tuhada hath sir te rehna chahida hamesha

heheeheh

oops
mainu hasa rahe
agge mera stomac dukhda pia aa has has ke :an

saari banh thude sir te aa ji :an

jas_sandhu · Mar 11, 2007

pps309 said:
gud one 22 ji.....................

thankju vadde veer...tusi pasand kiti ena bhut ah

jas_sandhu · Mar 11, 2007

Pardesan Punjaban said:
heheeheh

oops
mainu hasa rahe
agge mera stomac dukhda pia aa has has ke

saari banh thude sir te aa ji

....
hanji tuhade hath ne likhan laya c banh ne gane gann lah dena...bas hun meri new album da intjar kroo.. :roll

vese tuhanu ena hasa keo ah reha.....mian tah apne vallon serious gallan likhan c badiyan.. :an

Pardesan Punjaban · Mar 11, 2007

jas_sandhu said:
....
hanji tuhade hath ne likhan laya c banh ne gane gann lah dena...bas hun meri new album da intjar kroo..

vese tuhanu ena hasa keo ah reha.....mian tah apne vallon serious gallan likhan c badiyan..

as i recived da coment kise kol kee main normal gal te inna hasdi fer hasan vaalia galla te kee kardi aa?
:an