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sachian gallan....

Gallan karniyan bdiyan sokhian Puganiyan koi koi janda... La tah har koi lenda , Niboniyan koi koi janda... Ghar apne hon sheshe de, duje lai pathar nai chukida, Rah jandi .....


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Old 10-03-2007
jas_sandhu
 
sachian gallan....

Gallan karniyan bdiyan sokhian
Puganiyan koi koi janda...

La tah har koi lenda ,
Niboniyan koi koi janda...

Ghar apne hon sheshe de, duje lai pathar nai chukida,
Rah jandi kudi wal kdi mada nai takida....

Yaari jethe layeiye jan var ke nibaidi,
jigri yaaran nal kdi dga nai kamaidi...

Je samaj na ave agla varka nai thulida,
kita hoya ehsaan kdi kisi da nai bhulida....

Yaari vich paisa kdi nai laida,
Dusman nu milan khali hath nai jayeda....

Rah jande nal bohti dosti nai payidi,
Yaari dosti ch kdi kudi nai leaidi..

Mapiyan da keha kdi nai modida,
Bhul k v sajna da dil nai todida...



SANDHU

 
Old 10-03-2007
SHauKeeN GaBRu
 
Re: sachian gallan....

sandhu saab
badi dungi soch

 
Old 10-03-2007
❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤
 
Re: sachian gallan....

bohat vadiaaaa.....thxxxx

 
Old 11-03-2007
Gabru_Gulab_Varga
 
Re: sachian gallan....

Nice one brother! Keep it up Jas...

 
Old 11-03-2007
Niki_Grewal
 
Re: sachian gallan....

gr8 work....kaash sare idhan sochan..but last line hi kade kade panga pa jaandi

 
Old 11-03-2007
pps309
 
Re: sachian gallan....

gud one 22 ji.....................

 
Old 11-03-2007
jas_sandhu
 
Re: sachian gallan....

Originally Posted by SHauKeeN GaBRu View Post
sandhu saab
badi dungi soch

thankju veere......
soch de sir te ta hun tak duniya kaim aa...

 
Old 11-03-2007
jas_sandhu
 
Re: sachian gallan....

Originally Posted by JaSmInA View Post
bohat vadiaaaa.....thxxxx
thankju jasmina ji ..tusi pasand kiti...

 
Old 11-03-2007
jas_sandhu
 
Re: sachian gallan....

Originally Posted by DangerouslyJatt View Post
Nice one brother! Keep it up Jas...

thankju veer......
je tenu vad ghat bol gya hovan tah veer maff kri.
tusi 22 os thread da hun tak reply ni kita....minu rahuga vei tu aje v naraj ah.

 
Old 11-03-2007
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: sachian gallan....

wow nice work ji
mere students kaafi improve kar rahe

 
Old 11-03-2007
jas_sandhu
 
Re: sachian gallan....

Originally Posted by Niki_Grewal View Post
gr8 work....kaash sare idhan sochan..but last line hi kade kade panga pa jaandi
thnkju niki ji....
hanji bhut vadya hove je sare idhan sochan te fir ehna lines da koe matlab hi na rhe...
te tuhanu te ek line panga pandi hai minu 3 ne panga paya


Rah jandi kudi wal kdi nai takida

ashqi marde time kudi tah vekhi hi hundi...
Je samaj na ave agla varka nai thulida,

je mian eh line puganda fir topper hunda apne colg da.
Bhul k v sajna da dil nai todida...

hun es barre tah tusi appe samajdar ho.....

 
Old 11-03-2007
jas_sandhu
 
Re: sachian gallan....

Originally Posted by Pardesan Punjaban View Post
wow nice work ji
mere students kaafi improve kar rahe
thankju guru ji..
tuhadi hi leeh te chalda peya tuhada shigird..
bas tuhada hath sir te rehna chahida hamesha

 
Old 11-03-2007
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: sachian gallan....

Originally Posted by jas_sandhu View Post
thankju guru ji..
tuhadi hi leeh te chalda peya tuhada shigird..
bas tuhada hath sir te rehna chahida hamesha
heheeheh

oops
mainu hasa rahe
agge mera stomac dukhda pia aa has has ke

saari banh thude sir te aa ji

 
Old 11-03-2007
jas_sandhu
 
Re: sachian gallan....

Originally Posted by pps309 View Post
gud one 22 ji.....................
thankju vadde veer...tusi pasand kiti ena bhut ah

 
Old 11-03-2007
jas_sandhu
 
Re: sachian gallan....

Originally Posted by Pardesan Punjaban View Post
heheeheh

oops
mainu hasa rahe
agge mera stomac dukhda pia aa has has ke

saari banh thude sir te aa ji
....
hanji tuhade hath ne likhan laya c banh ne gane gann lah dena...bas hun meri new album da intjar kroo..

vese tuhanu ena hasa keo ah reha.....mian tah apne vallon serious gallan likhan c badiyan..


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