saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

arpita said:

sohni likhi eh veere es always chakkte phattay

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thanku arpu..

Ronny said:

gud hai 22g,, gr888888888,,,

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thanks bai ji.. tuhanu pasand aayee eh boht hai..

punjaban920 said:

Simmy ji..Tusi te kher bohot he wadiya likheya hona..bas ik mein aa..jinu samaj nhi aundi...Bas o na menu tusi das dena...fer mein samaj jawangi..
Waise te tusi oudha v gallan achi karde aa..Zahir aa..likheya v kazab da hona ..

urz
Poo =)

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koi na.. tere lai main saari poem da meaning v post kar dau..

gorakhnathdatilla said:

koi na.. tere lai main saari poem da meaning v post kar dau..

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punjaban920 said:

Aww so sweet of you..rendo..mere palle kuch nhi pena..... Je menu samaj v naa aya naa Simmy i kno..ke tusi jo v likeya howega...it wud b rli nice!..Thuanu jann chukki aa...yaar ur a poet...fer obviously acha he likheya hona...!

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na .. main ta karu hi karu hun.. main nai hattda..

and thanks for the compliment...

gorakhnathdatilla said:

na .. main ta karu hi karu hun.. main nai hattda..

and thanks for the compliment...

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for those who can not understand tuff words i have used in this poem.. i am giving the meaning of tuff words as well as explaining what i have tried to reflect in the ghazal sheyar by sheyar.. hope u guys wud appreciate

tuff words pehla -

gorakhnathdatilla said:

ban na sakya kangan teriyan baahvan da...
reta ban wichhya ha teriyan raahvan da...

ehna wich kai sogg saambhke rakhhe main,
ki laina tu lekha karke chaavan da?

wekh! hijar ne mainu hasti hai bakhshi,
tu vi chhadd raah takkna kaalyan kaavan da....

raat di hikk te geet khhuachke hass pya,
hull koi nahi hunda yaar shudaavan da...

kidda tainu seena paad dikha deva? hun...
nahi bharosa aundeyan jaandeyan saahvan da...

ho sakdae kujh akhhaan ajje udeekdian,
haaye! kujh ta matlab hona ehna raahvan da?

'simmy' dhur ton mathhe kaafir rutba paaya,
saade wargeyan te na asarr duaavan da.......​

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meanings

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kangan - bangle

reta - Sand

wichhya - laid

raahvan - Paths

sogg - sorrows

saambhke - maintained

lekha - calculation

chaavan - joys

hijar - Pain of Separation

hasti - Status

bakhshi - Bestowed

takkna - to behold

kaalyan kaavan - Black Crows

hikk - Breast

khhuachke - Scribble

hull - Cure

Shudaavan - insanity

seena - Breast

Paad - To tear open

dhur ton - Since begining

Mathhe - In my destiny

Kaafir - infidel

Rutba - Title

asarr - affect

Duaavan - Prayers

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now the full meaning of the ghazal -

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ban na sakya kangan teriyan baahvan da...
reta ban wichhya ha teriyan raahvan da...

i cud nt be the bangle in ur arms...but,
at least i have become the sand of ur paths!

ehna wich kai sogg saambhke rakhhe main,
ki laina tu lekha karke chaavan da?

i have maintained many sorrows in them,
what will you get calculating my joys?

wekh! hijar ne mainu hasti hai bakhshi,
tu vi chhadd raah takkna kaalyan kaavan da....

see! the pain of ur separation has given me a status,
you also leave waiting for ur beloved, beholding black crows...

raat di hikk te geet khhuachke hass pya,
hull koi nahi hunda yaar shudaavan da...

i laugh, as i scribble this song on the breast of night,
there is no cure of insanity on this earth...

kidda tainu seena paad dikha deva? hun...
nahi bharosa aundeyan jaandeyan saahvan da...

how can i tear open my breast to you? now..
i have no faith left even on my own breath...

ho sakdae kujh akhhaan ajje udeekdian,
haaye! kujh ta matlab hona ehna raahvan da?

may be some eyes are waiting there for me...
ohh.. there should be some meaning of these pathways!

'simmy' dhur ton mathhe kaafir rutba paaya,
saade wargeyan te na asarr duaavan da.......

'simmy' has got the status of infidel in his destiny since begining...
so.. there is no affect of any prayers on his sorrows..

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enjoy frens..









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jimmi said:

wow bahut hi sohna te vadhiya likhiya ji tussi

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thanks jimmi ji

punjaban920 said:

OMG.....Simmyy thnk you thuada bohot bohot...hehhe hun menu samaj aa gaye aa.! well je poori nhi the atleast 80% hehhe....
mein te thuanu keha si rendo...lekin tusi v kithe hatna si naa?...:P
chalo thnks again...
and its

very very good!

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hehehe.. u r welcome ji..

chalo.. hauli hauli poora samjh pain lagg jauga..

oh ta hai.. main hattan wala ta nahi ha.. pange lainda rehnda ha..

and thanks for the appreciation ji..

gorakhnathdatilla said:

hehehe.. u r welcome ji..

chalo.. hauli hauli poora samjh pain lagg jauga..

oh ta hai.. main hattan wala ta nahi ha.. pange lainda rehnda ha..

and thanks for the appreciation ji..

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haaye pange band na karyo.. nai ta maza nai auna..

punjaban920 said:

Hanji hauli hauli ao samaj menu..par saachi thnks a million...i really appreciate it..shows me ke how good of a friend u are!


Aho thuade pange mein kardi aa band..hehehe:P:P..

Poo

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gorakhnathdatilla said:

haaye pange band na karyo.. nai ta maza nai auna..

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changa ji jimen tuhada hukam.. waise pangeyaan to mera matlab ladaii nai haiga.. fun shun aa ji..

punjaban920 said:

No..No

Ethe no pange shange allowed....sowwie!...:P

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gorakhnathdatilla said:

changa ji jimen tuhada hukam.. waise pangeyaan to mera matlab ladaii nai haiga.. fun shun aa ji..

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punjaban920 said:

Ok theek aa..karo pange punge:P..fer as long as no fighting shighting invovled:D...okie dokes?

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naaw ji.. hun nai ladna.. hun ta bhangre paune aa..

achha poo.. kall nu mera ban khatam ho jana.. morning wich.. hehehehe.. u tell me.. main sabh to pehla kehde thread wich java.. ooops i am so excited about it..

kall nu aapa pz te..

gorakhnathdatilla said:

naaw ji.. hun nai ladna.. hun ta bhangre paune aa..

achha poo.. kall nu mera ban khatam ho jana.. morning wich.. hehehehe.. u tell me.. main sabh to pehla kehde thread wich java.. ooops i am so excited about it..

kall nu aapa pz te..

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