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saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

ban na sakya kangan teriyan baahvan da... reta ban wichhya ha teriyan raahvan da... ehna wich kai sogg saambhke rakhhe main, ki laina tu lekha karke chaavan da? wekh! hijar .....


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Old 30-04-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Talking saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

ban na sakya kangan teriyan baahvan da...
reta ban wichhya ha teriyan raahvan da...

ehna wich kai sogg saambhke rakhhe main,
ki laina tu lekha karke chaavan da?

wekh! hijar ne mainu hasti hai bakhshi,
tu vi chhadd raah takkna kaalyan kaavan da....

raat di hikk te geet khhuachke hass pya,
hull koi nahi hunda yaar shudaavan da...

kidda tainu seena paad dikha deva? hun...
nahi bharosa aundeyan jaandeyan saahvan da...

ho sakdae kujh akhhaan ajje udeekdian,
haaye! kujh ta matlab hona ehna raahvan da?

'simmy' dhur ton mathhe kaafir rutba paaya,
saade wargeyan te na asarr duaavan da.......

 
Old 30-04-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

ten views and no reply.. hmmm... les wait..

 
Old 30-04-2007
arpita
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

sohni likhi eh veere es always chakkte phattay

 
Old 30-04-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

gud hai 22g,, gr888888888,,,

 
Old 30-04-2007
punjaban920
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

Simmy ji..Tusi te kher bohot he wadiya likheya hona..bas ik mein aa..jinu samaj nhi aundi...Bas o na menu tusi das dena...fer mein samaj jawangi..
Waise te tusi oudha v gallan achi karde aa..Zahir aa..likheya v kazab da hona ..

urz
Poo =)

 
Old 30-04-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

Originally Posted by arpita View Post
sohni likhi eh veere es always chakkte phattay
thanku arpu..

Originally Posted by Ronny View Post
gud hai 22g,, gr888888888,,,
thanks bai ji.. tuhanu pasand aayee eh boht hai..

Originally Posted by punjaban920 View Post
Simmy ji..Tusi te kher bohot he wadiya likheya hona..bas ik mein aa..jinu samaj nhi aundi...Bas o na menu tusi das dena...fer mein samaj jawangi..
Waise te tusi oudha v gallan achi karde aa..Zahir aa..likheya v kazab da hona ..

urz
Poo =)
koi na.. tere lai main saari poem da meaning v post kar dau..

 
Old 30-04-2007
punjaban920
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

Originally Posted by gorakhnathdatilla View Post


koi na.. tere lai main saari poem da meaning v post kar dau..
Aww so sweet of you..rendo..mere palle kuch nhi pena..... Je menu samaj v naa aya naa Simmy i kno..ke tusi jo v likeya howega...it wud b rli nice!..Thuanu jann chukki aa...yaar ur a poet...fer obviously acha he likheya hona...!

 
Old 30-04-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

Originally Posted by punjaban920 View Post
Aww so sweet of you..rendo..mere palle kuch nhi pena..... Je menu samaj v naa aya naa Simmy i kno..ke tusi jo v likeya howega...it wud b rli nice!..Thuanu jann chukki aa...yaar ur a poet...fer obviously acha he likheya hona...!
na .. main ta karu hi karu hun.. main nai hattda..

and thanks for the compliment...

 
Old 30-04-2007
punjaban920
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

Originally Posted by gorakhnathdatilla View Post
na .. main ta karu hi karu hun.. main nai hattda..

and thanks for the compliment...
Haye theek aa..jiven thuadi marzi .. Jidha thuanu theek aa..tusi oudha karo..je thuanu koi takleef nhi aa..fer hehe dasdo eda matlab ki aa...

 
Old 30-04-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

for those who can not understand tuff words i have used in this poem.. i am giving the meaning of tuff words as well as explaining what i have tried to reflect in the ghazal sheyar by sheyar.. hope u guys wud appreciate

tuff words pehla -
Originally Posted by gorakhnathdatilla View Post
ban na sakya kangan teriyan baahvan da...
reta ban wichhya ha teriyan raahvan da...

ehna wich kai
sogg saambhke rakhhe main,
ki laina tu lekha karke chaavan da?

wekh! hijar ne mainu hasti hai bakhshi,
tu vi chhadd raah takkna kaalyan kaavan da....

raat di hikk te geet khhuachke hass pya,
hull koi nahi hunda yaar shudaavan da...

kidda tainu seena paad dikha deva? hun...
nahi bharosa aundeyan jaandeyan saahvan da...

ho sakdae kujh akhhaan ajje udeekdian,
haaye! kujh ta matlab hona ehna raahvan da?

'simmy' dhur ton mathhe kaafir rutba paaya,
saade wargeyan te na asarr duaavan da.......
meanings
:

kangan - bangle

reta - Sand

wichhya - laid

raahvan -Paths

sogg - sorrows

saambhke - maintained

lekha - calculation

chaavan - joys

hijar - Pain of Separation

hasti - Status

bakhshi - Bestowed

takkna - to behold

kaalyan kaavan - Black Crows

hikk - Breast

khhuachke - Scribble

hull - Cure

Shudaavan - insanity

seena - Breast

Paad - To tear open

dhur ton - Since begining

Mathhe - In my destiny

Kaafir - infidel

Rutba - Title

asarr - affect

Duaavan - Prayers


now the full meaning of the ghazal -
ban na sakya kangan teriyan baahvan da...
reta ban wichhya ha teriyan raahvan da...

i cud nt be the bangle in ur arms...but,
at least i have become the sand of ur paths!

ehna wich kai sogg saambhke rakhhe main,
ki laina tu lekha karke chaavan da?

i have maintained many sorrows in them,
what will you get calculating my joys?

wekh! hijar ne mainu hasti hai bakhshi,
tu vi chhadd raah takkna kaalyan kaavan da....

see! the pain of ur separation has given me a status,
you also leave waiting for ur beloved, beholding black crows...

raat di hikk te geet khhuachke hass pya,
hull koi nahi hunda yaar shudaavan da...


i laugh, as i scribble this song on the breast of night,
there is no cure of insanity
on this earth...

kidda tainu seena paad dikha deva? hun...
nahi bharosa aundeyan jaandeyan saahvan da...

how can i tear open my breast to you? now..
i have no faith left even on my own breath...

ho sakdae kujh akhhaan ajje udeekdian,
haaye! kujh ta matlab hona ehna raahvan da?

may be some eyes are waiting there for me...
ohh.. there should be some meaning of these pathways!

'simmy' dhur ton mathhe kaafir rutba paaya,
saade wargeyan te na asarr duaavan da.......

'simmy' has got the status of infidel in his destiny since begining...
so.. there is no affect of any prayers on his sorrows..


enjoy frens..











 
Old 01-05-2007
jimmi
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

wow bahut hi sohna te vadhiya likhiya ji tussi

 
Old 01-05-2007
punjaban920
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

OMG.....Simmyy thnk you thuada bohot bohot...hehhe hun menu samaj aa gaye aa.! well je poori nhi the atleast 80% hehhe....
mein te thuanu keha si rendo...lekin tusi v kithe hatna si naa?...:P
chalo thnks again...
and its

very very good!

 
Old 01-05-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

Originally Posted by jimmi View Post
wow bahut hi sohna te vadhiya likhiya ji tussi
thanks jimmi ji

Originally Posted by punjaban920 View Post
OMG.....Simmyy thnk you thuada bohot bohot...hehhe hun menu samaj aa gaye aa.! well je poori nhi the atleast 80% hehhe....
mein te thuanu keha si rendo...lekin tusi v kithe hatna si naa?...:P
chalo thnks again...
and its

very very good!
hehehe.. u r welcome ji..

chalo.. hauli hauli poora samjh pain lagg jauga..

oh ta hai.. main hattan wala ta nahi ha.. pange lainda rehnda ha..

and thanks for the appreciation ji..

 
Old 01-05-2007
punjaban920
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

Originally Posted by gorakhnathdatilla View Post
hehehe.. u r welcome ji..

chalo.. hauli hauli poora samjh pain lagg jauga..

oh ta hai.. main hattan wala ta nahi ha.. pange lainda rehnda ha..

and thanks for the appreciation ji..
Hanji hauli hauli ao samaj menu..par saachi thnks a million...i really appreciate it..shows me ke how good of a friend u are!


Aho thuade pange mein kardi aa band..hehehe:P:P..

Poo

 
Old 01-05-2007
gorakhnathdatilla
 
Re: saade wargeyan te na asar duaavan da...

haaye pange band na karyo.. nai ta maza nai auna..
Originally Posted by punjaban920 View Post
Hanji hauli hauli ao samaj menu..par saachi thnks a million...i really appreciate it..shows me ke how good of a friend u are!


Aho thuade pange mein kardi aa band..hehehe:P:P..

Poo


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