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***piyase nain***

kisse ne menu gal naal ni laya, sabh ne thokkar layee-e, kul duniya di peeda, mere hi hisse aayee-e, *** pyar da bhukha dil hai mera, mere nain piyase ne, .....


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Old 07-11-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
***piyase nain***



kisse ne menu gal naal ni laya,
sabh ne thokkar layee-e,
kul duniya di peeda, mere hi hisse aayee-e,
***
pyar da bhukha dil hai mera,
mere nain piyase ne,
mein dukhan wich hassdi gaava, mere geet uddaase ne,
***
meri rooh di rooh de andar,
ik mandir hai geetan da,
mann pujari chir tau baitha, bhukha pyar preetan da,
***
akh kholi jis daali utte,
ful na uthe beh sakiya,
patta patta dekh ke roya, muhon kujh na keh sakiya,
***
ful samajh ke pani paya,
kandhe bangaye vekh ke rauna aya,
dil nu dil ne raj samjhaya, aina apna aap khapaya,
***
aundi jaandi dharkan dindi,
dekho roj dilaase ne,
bhauraan de jhurmat vekhe, mein apne chaare aase paase ne,
mein dukhan wich hassdi gaava,
mere geet uddaase ne,

 
Old 07-11-2007
Swashbuckling
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

ajj taan tusin kamaal hi karti ............. main kehna fatte chakke hi ni sago ,,,,,, fatte chakk ke parre vi sitt ditte

 
Old 07-11-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

Originally Posted by Swashbuckling View Post
ajj taan tusin kamaal hi karti ............. main kehna fatte chakke hi ni sago ,,,,,, fatte chakk ke parre vi sitt ditte
thnx a lot dear,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 08-11-2007
smilly
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

Ki aakhana koi labaz ni mere kolo ........Bhot Bhot sohan likhayaa dear

 
Old 11-11-2007
Jass-DS
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

Very Nice Ji....Thanks 4 Sharing....

 
Old 27-12-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

Originally Posted by smilly View Post
Ki aakhana koi labaz ni mere kolo ........Bhot Bhot sohan likhayaa dear
,,,,,,,,,,thnxxx jass dear,,,,








Originally Posted by Jass-DS View Post
Very Nice Ji....Thanks 4 Sharing....
,,,,,,,,,, another jass,,,,, thnxxxx dear,

 
Old 27-12-2007
sunny240
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

sacchi words hai nhi mere kol ve really gr88888888........

 
Old 27-12-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

,,thnx a lot sunny dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 27-12-2007
hoshiarpur
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

Hi,

i am new member. This is realy from rite bottom of ur heart.......Koi inna wadiya kiddan likh sakda hai....

Mein v Kuch likhan di gustakhi karan laggan;

Eh pyar mohobbat wafa te waade,jihda dil tutta ohnu pooch ke vekh,
lok kehnde teri jaan bewafa nikali, jehda rabb rusiyya ohnu pooch ke vekh,
ik wari ohnu bolan de, eh pyar di guthi kholan de,
fer jo chahe bhaavein keh layin, par ik wari ohnu pooch ke vekh..

 
Old 27-12-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

Originally Posted by hoshiarpur View Post
Hi,
i am new member. This is realy from rite bottom of ur heart.......Koi inna wadiya kiddan likh sakda hai....
thnx a lot dear,,,, AND WELCOME TO UNP

 
Old 28-12-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

kamal karti apninder....but tu aida kyun sochdi aa ke tu kalli aa asi sare marr gaye aa ki?...vasie bahut sohna likheya aa

 
Old 28-12-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

Originally Posted by kudi_patole_wargi View Post
kamal karti apninder....but tu aida kyun sochdi aa ke tu kalli aa asi sare marr gaye aa ki?...vasie bahut sohna likheya aa
ahhhhhhhh didi tusi bohut piyare aa,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 16-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: ***piyase nain***

nice.


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