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Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Ohdiyaan yaadan da dard kade mukda ni....... Eh aise zakham hai dosto, jo kade sukda ni Laakh sochyaa chad davaan enaa dardan nu ... Par mera dard taan yaaro, kade .....


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Old 11-08-2007
smilly
 
Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Ohdiyaan yaadan da dard kade mukda ni.......
Eh aise zakham hai dosto, jo kade sukda ni
Laakh sochyaa chad davaan enaa dardan nu ...
Par mera dard taan yaaro, kade mukda ni......


Hun taan sochaan ch piya, mera dil vi...
Eh dard-e-dil kaaton rukda ni ...
Roj mar-mar ke zinda ja reha haan..
Saan mera hun katon mukada ni...


Hun taan mere apne vi ,chadh door hoge ne..
Dardaan-di-gali vich taan koi rukda ni ...
Main taan kandeyaan-bhari-taali, ban ke reh gaya..
Te kandeyaan vich taan koi Dhukda (aunda) ni...


Koi dava daso mere dard di yaroo..
Meriyaan akhaan chon neer kade sukde ni...
Maut hi je meri dava hai taan..
Eh saan "jass" da kyun mukda ni.......


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Old 11-08-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Bahut vadia jass 22
Yaar maut hi kyon mangde haan aasi lok
maut di gall v karde haan te jina v chahunde haan
Mainu nahi lagda tuhanu ishq vich dhokha hoya
eh taan koi hor dard lagda

 
Old 11-08-2007
smilly
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

thanx dear Ravi .......

Tusin sahi keh rakhe ho isq vich thokha taan koi badi gal ni par dear eh taan kadva sach hi hai . dard aur bhi hai isq ke siva...
Zindagi vich kuch aise dukh vekhe ki oh har vele mere saamne rehde ne te meri bebasi te hasde rehde ne...

Unha di dava Likh ke labda rehda haan... Par mainu pata hai unha da koi ilaaj vi nahi.... Shayad meri maut hi unha nu mere te hasana band karva sakhdi hai... Rondiyaa akhaan , Siskiyaan , te har aan vale tayohaar te ek maatam da mahol mere ghar vich ..... ...

Chalo ji shayad Rabb ji nu mere layi eh hi manjor si...

Usda bhana mitha lage........ Rabb diyaan Rabb jane...

Main apni kalam rahi sub dard mukaa dena chahunda hai..... Shayad aisa hoye......

Vaise veer main bhut zinda dil ensaan haan dear...

 
Old 11-08-2007
Sonia_Nz
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

mind blowin shayeri ahhh jiii
baut sohniiii dil tooh likhi lagdii

 
Old 11-08-2007
smilly
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Originally Posted by Sonia_Nz View Post
mind blowin shayeri ahhh jiii
baut sohniiii dil tooh likhi lagdii
thanx dear.......

Dil te lagiyaan ne dear ......
Taanhiyoon dilon likhi hai.......

 
Old 11-08-2007
Sonia_Nz
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Originally Posted by smilly View Post
thanx dear.......

Dil te lagiyaan ne dear ......
Taanhiyoon dilon likhi hai.......
oh teh thodi shayeri tooh pataa hi chall rihaaaa ahhh
parrr ehnee dukhi naa rihaa karoooo

 
Old 11-08-2007
smilly
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Originally Posted by Sonia_Nz View Post
oh teh thodi shayeri tooh pataa hi chall rihaaaa ahhh
parrr ehnee dukhi naa rihaa karoooo
thanx dear....

Kosish tan karda haan khush reh di ......
Kambakht dard-e-gum pich ni chada......


 
Old 11-08-2007
Sonia_Nz
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Originally Posted by smilly View Post
thanx dear....

Kosish tan karda haan khush reh di ......
Kambakht dard-e-gum pich ni chada......
i totally agreee jii
usssi nai soch sakdeee ki kihnaa dard ahhh
eh teh ohi jandaa jirraa dard vich hoveee
firrr viii koshish karooo

 
Old 11-08-2007
smilly
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Originally Posted by Sonia_Nz View Post
i totally agreee jii
usssi nai soch sakdeee ki kihnaa dard ahhh
eh teh ohi jandaa jirraa dard vich hoveee
firrr viii koshish karooo
thanx dear...

Koshis taan karda haan te karda rahaan ga...
Main vi te vekhana hai dukhaan di hadh ki hai....

Har nave dard da intzaar karda haan...
Roj jeenda haan , Te roj marda haan....

Zindagi..... Bereham hai rovandi vi hai... Hasundi vi hai...

 
Old 11-08-2007
Sonia_Nz
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

dukh naa milaan teh apppan nu khushi di importance naa paataa chaleee
parr kadde kaddee dukh sajaa hi bann jandee neee

 
Old 11-08-2007
smilly
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Originally Posted by Sonia_Nz View Post
dukh naa milaan teh apppan nu khushi di importance naa paataa chaleee
parr kadde kaddee dukh sajaa hi bann jandee neee
Hanji dear .......

Dukh taan kai baar saja ban jande ne.....
Te ek de piche hi pai jande ne hath thoo ke ......

Jadon thoda ja vi oh khus hove taan dukh aa gher lende ne.....

Eh hi life hai dear........

 
Old 11-08-2007
Sonia_Nz
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Originally Posted by smilly View Post
Hanji dear .......

Dukh taan kai baar saja ban jande ne.....
Te ek de piche hi pai jande ne hath thoo ke ......

Jadon thoda ja vi oh khus hove taan dukh aa gher lende ne.....

Eh hi life hai dear........

baut na insaafi ahhh ki ek bandeee nu hi ehnee dukh mill jandee nee
life is not fair.....after all ek bandaa ehnee dukh kidda seh sakdaaa
specially jeh kisi naal share naa karrr sakeyy
inside hi ghutdaa rehandaaaa

 
Old 11-08-2007
smilly
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Originally Posted by Sonia_Nz View Post
baut na insaafi ahhh ki ek bandeee nu hi ehnee dukh mill jandee nee
life is not fair.....after all ek bandaa ehnee dukh kidda seh sakdaaa
specially jeh kisi naal share naa karrr sakeyy
inside hi ghutdaa rehandaaaa

Haanji dear ........

Ghut ghut ke mar jande ne ... Jayada dukhan vale...
Unha da anth te akhri manzil maut hi hundi hai...

So dear Life taan fair hai hi nahi .... par ki kariye
Main te vekhaya hai ki jado vi thoda jaadon vi khusi ayyi mere dar te taan aane vale bhut bade gum da sunehaa naal lai ke hi aayi ..

Rabb di raja nu taan manana hi painda ....

 
Old 11-08-2007
Sonia_Nz
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

ehnaaa dukhhhh naaa layeooo...
ehnaaa rite vi naaa doh kisi nu ki ohh thonu ehnaa dukh deh kee chalaa jayee
khush rehanaaa chaidaaaa life is beautiful toooo
jirreee thonu khush naa rakhee sakke ohnaaa nu yaad kar karr keee keu apnee aap nu dard deyi janaaaa

 
Old 11-08-2007
smilly
 
Re: Ohdiyaan yaadan .........

Originally Posted by Sonia_Nz View Post
ehnaaa dukhhhh naaa layeooo...
ehnaaa rite vi naaa doh kisi nu ki ohh thonu ehnaa dukh deh kee chalaa jayee
khush rehanaaa chaidaaaa life is beautiful toooo
jirreee thonu khush naa rakhee sakke ohnaaa nu yaad kar karr keee keu apnee aap nu dard deyi janaaaa
Dear kaash aisa ho sakda.... Ke jo chale gaye ya jo dukh de karan ne ohna nu bhulaya ja sake...

Har hanju meri aakh da unhaa nu yaad karda hai...
eh dil Har khusi vele vi, unha nu milan di fariyaad karda hai....

Kuj apneyaa da te kuj parayaan da sataya hoya haan..
Eh hanere ni meri zindagi vich, Ena hanereyaan ch main apnayaa da laya hoya haan...






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