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~NEIL aa gya valait~

Daddy ne kiha reh ja india kam karin koyi apna nahin daddy main bahar hain jana pura karan ik sapna aa kay ithay diharian keetian, har hurdle pya hai tapna .....


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Old 09-12-2005
neil
 
~NEIL aa gya valait~

Daddy ne kiha reh ja india kam karin koyi apna
nahin daddy main bahar hain jana pura karan ik sapna

aa kay ithay diharian keetian, har hurdle pya hai tapna
reh gayiyan sariyaan khwayishaan dub kay, choor ho gya sapna

hun yaad aande ne oh din jadon aishaan si assi luttiyaan
hun das das panne sign karne penday len layi do chhutiyaan

ihnu hi agar life ne kehnday assi nahin hai jini
kismatan futt jandiyaan inna kam karke daaru pehndi fer pini

india wapis kadon hai jana uddi assi karde wait
ki ho gya life de naal now we cant even contemplate

bahar aan da bhoot aisa hai utriyaa a gaye najar ne taare
hun pta lagga bahar aan nu bewaqufi kyon kehnde ne saare

anyway its all good keh kay kariye is poem da end
kisi nu halle wee koyi doubt hai tey saanu email kariya je send

 
Old 09-12-2005
full_taur
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

Balle Neil bai.. yaar tu vi.. shayari kran lag peya... yaar khich ta kamm tu vi.. chal good bai... BUt yaar few things after reading ur poem..

1. Like me, u r also depserate to go back to India... and waiting for time when you will be able to go back to india...

2. Like me, Tainu vi apne desh de te apne punjab di importance pata laggi... and now u miss punjab & ur home and uh galiyan jithe ghumde see..

3. LIke me, y ou also think at times.. ki sala kyu agya mein valiet... (as we dnt have any problems whatsoever in India, too)

Bai no offences... vaise hi mainun laga te saying it...

But BAi jo marji keh le... PUnjab dee koi Rees nai.. sala haje vi uthe jake mann jeha lagda hai.. and feels like aaho yaar yeh apni dharti hai...what say Bai..

 
Old 11-12-2005
Some1
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

erd

 
Old 11-12-2005
neil
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

how about u explain, what is weird and why.......
hmm

ig ig

Originally Posted by JaY
erd

 
Old 12-12-2005
GeNie_iN_a_boTtLe
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

kyaa baat hai aa te shero shayeri v karda....main te socheya c enu sirf peena hi aunda .....badi wadiya poem likhi aa........vry true shrue.....

 
Old 12-12-2005
neil
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

HMM
TRUE AA EH..
HOR KEE HUNDA...JO JO MERE NAAL HUNDA GIYA, MAIN LIKHI GIYA,

and still main INTERNATIONAL STUDENTS de life te koi chanan nee paya,

oh ve ek alag ee experience aa,



Originally Posted by GeNie_iN_a_boTtLe
kyaa baat hai aa te shero shayeri v karda....main te socheya c enu sirf peena hi aunda .....badi wadiya poem likhi aa........vry true shrue.....

 
Old 16-12-2005
GeNie_iN_a_boTtLe
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

Originally Posted by neil
HMM
TRUE AA EH..
HOR KEE HUNDA...JO JO MERE NAAL HUNDA GIYA, MAIN LIKHI GIYA,

and still main INTERNATIONAL STUDENTS de life te koi chanan nee paya,

oh ve ek alag ee experience aa,

bilkul internaional students di life taan add hi hundi aa...........chalo fer hun ode baare v likh dao kuch........

 
Old 17-12-2005
Zailldaar
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

Originally Posted by neil
Daddy ne kiha reh ja india kam karin koyi apna
nahin daddy main bahar hain jana pura karan ik sapna

aa kay ithay diharian keetian, har hurdle pya hai tapna
reh gayiyan sariyaan khwayishaan dub kay, choor ho gya sapna

hun yaad aande ne oh din jadon aishaan si assi luttiyaan
hun das das panne sign karne penday len layi do chhutiyaan

ihnu hi agar life ne kehnday assi nahin hai jini
kismatan futt jandiyaan inna kam karke daaru pehndi fer pini

india wapis kadon hai jana uddi assi karde wait
ki ho gya life de naal now we cant even contemplate

bahar aan da bhoot aisa hai utriyaa a gaye najar ne taare
hun pta lagga bahar aan nu bewaqufi kyon kehnde ne saare

anyway its all good keh kay kariye is poem da end
kisi nu halle wee koyi doubt hai tey saanu email kariya je send

gUd oNe bAi...sAdkE terE

 
Old 17-12-2005
neil
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

p.s. I am cuttin down on my drinking.

Originally Posted by GeNie_iN_a_boTtLe
kyaa baat hai aa te shero shayeri v karda....main te socheya c enu sirf peena hi aunda .....badi wadiya poem likhi aa........vry true shrue.....

 
Old 17-12-2005
GeNie_iN_a_boTtLe
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

Originally Posted by neil
p.s. I am cuttin down on my drinking.
o really....is dat so?????????????????????????????ig ig ig

 
Old 17-12-2005
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

Originally Posted by neil
Daddy ne kiha reh ja india kam karin koyi apna

nahin daddy main bahar hain jana pura karan ik sapna

aa kay ithay diharian keetian, har hurdle pya hai tapna
reh gayiyan sariyaan khwayishaan dub kay, choor ho gya sapna

hun yaad aande ne oh din jadon aishaan si assi luttiyaan
hun das das panne sign karne penday len layi do chhutiyaan

ihnu hi agar life ne kehnday assi nahin hai jini
kismatan futt jandiyaan inna kam karke daaru pehndi fer pini

india wapis kadon hai jana uddi assi karde wait
ki ho gya life de naal now we cant even contemplate

bahar aan da bhoot aisa hai utriyaa a gaye najar ne taare
hun pta lagga bahar aan nu bewaqufi kyon kehnde ne saare

anyway its all good keh kay kariye is poem da end
kisi nu halle wee koyi doubt hai tey saanu email kariya je send

That is so true.....................bahut theek likhia

 
Old 17-12-2005
neil
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

je sick ho taa ve doctor ton likhwayo....g.r.r.r.

i hate this..


 
Old 17-12-2005
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

Originally Posted by neil
je sick ho taa ve doctor ton likhwayo....g.r.r.r.

i hate this..
But at my work
can take a 2 days of without doc certificate

 
Old 18-12-2005
bunty
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

WAH JI WAH
THAT's really trueee

 
Old 09-02-2006
Guest33
 
Re: ~NEIL aa gya valait~

wah oye neele....yaar aah taan bahli sahi gal kahi hai.....main ajj hi jaan nu tiyar haan fer sochi haan 5 saal gaal laye kion sukki hi mud java ik hor option leke ji jaungi......yaar ik mithi jail ih taan......

hun ik international student te vilikh hi deo kuch..........main taan ihi keh sakdi haan ki ik INternational Student di zindagi vi ki zindagi hai.... main taan zindagi toon hatash aayi pai haan........


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