na ro maayen, andar waddke

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Dec 31, 2007

• #1

tarinjhana de wich kattan sahellian-
guddiyan naal guddiyan jod---
na ro maayen, andar waddke-
dhee nu sohreen torr---

hath pooniyan daak te charcha-
mein lammi pooni kattan challi---
kadh de mooh cho ladh chunni da maayen-
aaiwen naa jhanjod---

berdi poor trinjhan diyan kuddiyan-
sababb naal hundiyan kathiyan---
pyar mein laike challi dil wich-
kujh nahi laina hor---

kyon rondi maa andar waddke-
dhee nu sohreen torr​

 

amani23

Member

• Dec 31, 2007

• #2

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so sweet and touching..........keep it up sis

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Dec 31, 2007

• #3

thnxxxxxx dearest,,,,,,

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Dec 31, 2007

• #4

very nice uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupninder ji

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Dec 31, 2007

• #5

,,thnx a lot ravi ji

 

Maxsteel

~*~AbStRusE~*~

• Dec 31, 2007

• #6

Sweet and Touchy...Hope to hear more 4m u..Keep up the good work.

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Dec 31, 2007

• #7

,,,,,thnxxxx a lot maxsteel ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 

SHEREPUNJAB

Elite

• Dec 31, 2007

• #8

Good job...really touching

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Dec 31, 2007

• #9

thnxx a lot SHEREPUNJAB ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 

sunny240

Elite

• Jan 1, 2008

• #10

bhaut wadyiea ji hamesha de tarah,,,,,,,,,,,
mainu ve shakha do likhna..really gudd.........

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Jan 1, 2008

• #11

sunny240 said:

bhaut wadyiea ji hamesha de tarah,,,,,,,,,,,
mainu ve shakha do likhna..really gudd.........

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haha,,, thnxx dear,,,,,,,,,,, shiry sikhne layee,, sade6 saal pehlaan rauna painda,,,,,,,,,,, dil ch gam lai ke,,,,,,, rab na kare tuhanu kade rauna pave,,,,

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Jan 1, 2008

• #12

bahut sohna likheya aa apninder..tfs

 

smilly

VIP

• Jan 1, 2008

• #13

Bhut sohan likhaya dear........

Ki aakhan main teri tarif vich...
Tarif layi teri , akhraan di thood ji pai jandi ae.....

Khus ravo dear......

 

sunny240

Elite

• Jan 1, 2008

• #14

reshmi_mutiyar said:

haha,,, thnxx dear,,,,,,,,,,, shiry sikhne layee,, sade6 saal pehlaan rauna painda,,,,,,,,,,, dil ch gam lai ke,,,,,,, rab na kare tuhanu kade rauna pave,,,,

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ena ta assi halle koi gam ne layea........lagda syari auni ne sannu.........
challo koi na ........rabb tuhanu bhaut sarryiea khusyiea dewe te tusi eve hi likhde raho.............

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 2, 2008

• #15

bahoot hi wadiya....

dil khubnvia galla ne

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Jan 2, 2008

• #16

kudi_patole_wargi said:

bahut sohna likheya aa apninder..tfs

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,,,thnxxx didi ji,,,,

smilly said:

Bhut sohan likhaya dear........
Ki aakhan main teri tarif vich...
Tarif layi teri , akhraan di thood ji pai jandi ae.....
Khus ravo dear......

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,,,ssa dear ki haal chaal aa,,thnx for the compliments

sunny240 said:

ena ta assi halle koi gam ne layea........lagda syari auni ne sannu.........
challo koi na ........rabb tuhanu bhaut sarryiea khusyiea dewe te tusi eve hi likhde raho.............

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,,,hahaha, nahi ji jaroor aa sakdi aa,, bass shiry padh ke parerna liya karo, te kujh v pehlaan rhymes banaya karo, te fir dekhia karo, ki dard bhare alfaaz ohna rhymes ch kithe fit ho sakde, urdu de alfaaz shiry layee jada sohne hunde .,,,

grewalsandy said:

bahoot hi wadiya....

dil khubnvia galla ne

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,,,thnxx dear,

 

sunny240

Elite

• Jan 2, 2008

• #17

,,,ssa dear ki haal chaal aa,,thnx for the compliments





,,,hahaha, nahi ji jaroor aa sakdi aa,, bass shiry padh ke parerna liya karo, te kujh v pehlaan rhymes banaya karo, te fir dekhia karo, ki dard bhare alfaaz ohna rhymes ch kithe fit ho sakde, urdu de alfaaz shiry layee jada sohne hunde .


thnx ji.........fer ta urdu ve shikhni paini................urdu shikhan ly kinne ku saala da gham hona chahida mtlb requirement...............lolllsss...........

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Jan 2, 2008

• #18

sunny240;358545 [SIZE=5 said:

fer ta urdu ve shikhni paini................urdu shikhan ly kinne ku saala da gham hona chahida mtlb requirement.....[/SIZE].....

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,,,hahahahahahahahaha,,,,,,,,,,,,

 

jaggi633725

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• Feb 16, 2009

• #19

nice.