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na ro maayen, andar waddke

tarinjhana de wich kattan sahellian- guddiyan naal guddiyan jod--- na ro maayen, andar waddke- dhee nu sohreen torr--- hath pooniyan daak te charcha- mein lammi pooni kattan challi--- kadh de .....


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Old 31-12-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
na ro maayen, andar waddke

tarinjhana de wich kattan sahellian-
guddiyan naal guddiyan jod---
na ro maayen, andar waddke-
dhee nu sohreen torr---

hath pooniyan daak te charcha-
mein lammi pooni kattan challi---
kadh de mooh cho ladh chunni da maayen-
aaiwen naa jhanjod---

berdi poor trinjhan diyan kuddiyan-
sababb naal hundiyan kathiyan---
pyar mein laike challi dil wich-
kujh nahi laina hor---

kyon rondi maa andar waddke-
dhee nu sohreen torr

 
Old 31-12-2007
amani23
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so sweet and touching..........keep it up sis

 
Old 31-12-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

thnxxxxxx dearest,,,,,,

 
Old 31-12-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

very nice uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupninder ji

 
Old 31-12-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

,,thnx a lot ravi ji

 
Old 31-12-2007
Maxsteel
 
Smile Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

Sweet and Touchy...Hope to hear more 4m u..Keep up the good work.

 
Old 31-12-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

,,,,,thnxxxx a lot maxsteel ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 31-12-2007
SHEREPUNJAB
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

Good job...really touching

 
Old 31-12-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

thnxx a lot SHEREPUNJAB ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 01-01-2008
sunny240
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

bhaut wadyiea ji hamesha de tarah,,,,,,,,,,,
mainu ve shakha do likhna..really gudd.........

 
Old 01-01-2008
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

Originally Posted by sunny240 View Post
bhaut wadyiea ji hamesha de tarah,,,,,,,,,,,
mainu ve shakha do likhna..really gudd.........
haha,,, thnxx dear,,,,,,,,,,, shiry sikhne layee,, sade6 saal pehlaan rauna painda,,,,,,,,,,, dil ch gam lai ke,,,,,,, rab na kare tuhanu kade rauna pave,,,,

 
Old 01-01-2008
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

bahut sohna likheya aa apninder..tfs

 
Old 01-01-2008
smilly
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

Bhut sohan likhaya dear........

Ki aakhan main teri tarif vich...
Tarif layi teri , akhraan di thood ji pai jandi ae.....

Khus ravo dear......

 
Old 01-01-2008
sunny240
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

Originally Posted by reshmi_mutiyar View Post
haha,,, thnxx dear,,,,,,,,,,, shiry sikhne layee,, sade6 saal pehlaan rauna painda,,,,,,,,,,, dil ch gam lai ke,,,,,,, rab na kare tuhanu kade rauna pave,,,,

ena ta assi halle koi gam ne layea........lagda syari auni ne sannu.........
challo koi na ........rabb tuhanu bhaut sarryiea khusyiea dewe te tusi eve hi likhde raho.............

 
Old 02-01-2008
grewalsandy
 
Re: na ro maayen, andar waddke

bahoot hi wadiya....

dil khubnvia galla ne


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