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ALONE

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• May 15, 2007

• #1

my punjabi is not so gud but i tried my bst,,,
1 raat si mere ishq wargi,1chhan si uhdi shakal warga.
1 badal si opera jiha,1 tara si mere dil warga.
badal ne akhir nu chhan lako liye, us tare da kise ne sajjan kho liya.
chhan jadon badal de wich luk gaya,bina chhanni toh akhir oh tara tut gaya.
holi holi kar k phir raat muk gayi, mere vi ishq di kahani muk gayi.
hun wi oh chhan kinaya nu apni chhanni sutda hai, par afsos roz 1 tara tutda hai...smirk

 

R

Ramni

Member

• May 20, 2007

• #2

nice ... thxxx

 

ALONE

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• Jul 13, 2007

• #3

Ramni said:

nice ... thxxx

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i know its not so gud but i tried,, thnx 4 ur comment

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Jul 13, 2007

• #4

K.R. 4 kewl_ronit​

 

ALONE

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• Jul 13, 2007

• #5

reshmi_mutiyar said:

K.R. 4 kewl_ronit​

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nd apninder

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Jul 13, 2007

• #6

bahut sohna likheya hai ronit..lagda nahin ki thonu punjabi nain aundi...but realli bahut sohna likheya aa

 

ALONE

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• Jul 13, 2007

• #7

kudi_patole_wargi said:

bahut sohna likheya hai ronit..lagda nahin ki thonu punjabi nain aundi...but realli bahut sohna likheya aa

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thnx a lot dear

 

jaggi633725

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• Feb 16, 2009

• #8

nice.