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mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

dosto, ih english poem meri ni aa, ik dost ne likhi aa jihna da naam "µÐêêkåñ" urf reet aa,, per iss poem di story mere naal 100% mildi aa, karke .....


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Old 17-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

dosto, ih english poem meri ni aa, ik dost ne likhi aa jihna da naam "µÐêêkåñ" urf reet aa,, per iss poem di story mere naal 100% mildi aa, karke my dad died in my arms may 11th 2001,, when i was still 16,,, iss layee REET sis g di ih poem mein chori ker layee,, all your credit MUST go to REET SIS,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,THNXXXXXXXX



I knew this man
Who is dear to my heart,
Suddenly one day
It was torn all apart.

This man taught me everything
I needed to know,
But I never really listened
...Until he had to go.

He gave me love
And touched my life,
It's all over now
He know longer has to fight.

He tried to teach me
Right from wrong,
The day he left
I wasn't that strong.

He is gone now
It is hard to believe,
This man is MY DAD
Who I will never see.

But, I will see him again
This I know,
The day will come
When it's time for me to go.

So, I'll hold him dear
And close to my heart,
'Cause the day we meet

I know we'll never be torn apart!

I miss you :- (

__________________

♥ღDoor ne jehre akhan kolo,
Oh nerre dil de rehnde ne.♥ღ



 
Old 17-06-2007
Sonia_Nz
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

awwwww reshuuu its a very touchy poem
i feeel so sad now

 
Old 17-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

yes sis g , mein v bohut royee ih padh ke,,, thnx 2 reet sis,, it's a lovely poem

 
Old 17-06-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

suchi bahut lovely n touching poem aa

 
Old 17-06-2007
SehaJ
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET



Apninder here is a hug for ya

 
Old 17-06-2007
jattpunjabi
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

i miss you dad s..........bahut vadhia poem aa ji padh ke asha lagia

 
Old 17-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

on behalf of REET sis,,,, thnx KPW didi ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 17-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

thnx for the hug sehaj dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 17-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

thnxxxx jattpunjabi dear,, tuhadi v aakh bhar hayee, khush riha karo,,, nirash hone naal jaane wale di aatma nu dukh jaroor hunda hoy ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 18-06-2007
Swashbuckling
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

Originally Posted by reshmi_mutiyar View Post
thnxxxx jattpunjabi dear,, tuhadi v aakh bhar hayee, khush riha karo,,, nirash hone naal jaane wale di aatma nu dukh jaroor hunda hoy ga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i don't know if i have the right to say this or not but i can't control ....... doosreyan nu keh rahe oon, parr tusin v taan khush reha karo sister ji.........kayeee vaari tuhadiyan posts and replies padiyan iss karke keh rehan kyon ke je apne layee ni jaan apne loved ones layee ni taan apne dad layee taan zaroor khush reha karo kyon ke oh kade ni chaunge ki ohna di princess kade v udaas hoye ISS LAYEE TRY TO BE HAPPY ALL THE TIME OK

 
Old 18-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

Sukhbir Singh,,,,,,,,,,,,THNXXX SUKHBIR JI, ISSE LAYEE KIHA C,, KI MEIN BOHUT RO KE DEKHIYA,, KUJH NI MILDA,,, DAD TE WAPIS AAUNDE NAHI,,, RO KE TE ASSIN APNE MANN NU TASSALI DE LAINDE AA,,, DIL TE AJJ V BOHUT KARDA RON NU,,,, PER KI KARAAN

 
Old 18-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

Its Nice And Touching.....

 
Old 18-06-2007
karansidhu_jatt
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

apninder ji ur a brave girl ......kadi vi udaas na hona kyonki u know ur dad must be seeing u from heavens and he cant c his daughter sad.........and kissi da birth ya death kehda apne control ch aa taan uss te rona theek nahi............and u even mentioned it in the last line of the poem..tussi taan fer milna hi aa.

take care

 
Old 18-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

yes thnxxxxxx jass dear,,,, it is very touching

 
Old 18-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: mY dAD ,,,,,,,,,,,by "µÐêêkåñ" urf REET

yes karan ji, tusin bilkul thikk kehnde aa,,, parmatma mere dad di atma nu sada hi apne charna ch rakhe


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