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!!!....My creations....!!!

Dukh chelan di aadat pa gayi hove jis nu.. kade kuch ni ho sakda us nu.......... LOki ta khende ne ki saanu koi khushi mile.. mai khenda bathere dukh vekhe .....


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Old 05-01-2006
Jango_Baba
 
!!!....My creations....!!!

Dukh chelan di aadat pa gayi hove jis nu..
kade kuch ni ho sakda us nu..........
LOki ta khende ne ki saanu koi khushi mile..
mai khenda bathere dukh vekhe ne...
jheda dekheya na hove, koi eho jeha dukh mile

<<< Jango>>>

 
Old 05-01-2006
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

awwwwwwwwww
kinna sohna likhia
bhala tusi kion dukh mang rahe ho

 
Old 06-01-2006
Jango_Baba
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

Puchde ho haal unha da,
mushkil ho gaya jeena jihna da....
asi ta dua karange ki tusi hamesha hasde raho,
is jahan de andar tusi sukh naal vasde raho.....
khushi hovegi sanu je tuhade made vhehle asi kam aavange,
sada ki aa, asi ta apna dukh kise nu bina dase hi ik din jag to tur javange..

 
Old 06-01-2006
Some1
 
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OMG

 
Old 07-01-2006
Jango_Baba
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!


lokaan layi ta sawera hoyeya, sade layi ta raat hoyi hai......
na jaane sade naal eho jehi bewafayi kyu hoyi hai....

kise te milan te lokaan nu ta khushi hoyi hai...
jhede amanat de saare jee reha si mai, uh amanat aa mere to juda hoyi hai...

lokaan di kismat bhave roz jaagdi hove..
sade kismat ta har vhele soyi hai.......

na jaane mere naal eho jehi bewafayi kyun hoyi hai ...

<< Jango >>



 
Old 07-01-2006
ALONE
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

bhudu sahi jaa raha hai,
keep it up.
mainu pata hi nahin c k tu ina vadiya likh sakda hai

 
Old 07-01-2006
Pardesan Punjaban
 
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Old 17-01-2006
Jango_Baba
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

Vekheya jado kal chand mai, udaas mai fer ho gaya,
kihna nede hunda se mere phela, kihna dur hun ho gaya..

jado si nede mere, zindagi meri vich nera nahi si chaunda,
hun eho jeha door hoyeaa ki zindagi vich chan na nahi aaunda.

chand nu takna tad tak ni chadna , jad tak uh mere nal nazra ni milayuga,
rahanga vekhda uhnu, jad tak uh amabar nu chad ke mere kol ni aayuga...


<< JANGO>>

 
Old 17-01-2006
Roop Dhillon
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

Jango, Good Work Bro.........

 
Old 18-01-2006
Ramin
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

jango 22 bahu sohna likhya a 22..bahut sohni likhi a keep it p bro ...
Originally Posted by Jango_Baba
Vekheya jado kal chand mai, udaas mai fer ho gaya,
kihna nede hunda se mere phela, kihna dur hun ho gaya..

jado si nede mere, zindagi meri vich nera nahi si chaunda,
hun eho jeha door hoyeaa ki zindagi vich chan na nahi aaunda.

chand nu takna tad tak ni chadna , jad tak uh mere nal nazra ni milayuga,
rahanga vekhda uhnu, jad tak uh amabar nu chad ke mere kol ni aayuga...


<< JANGO>>

 
Old 18-01-2006
Heer
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

hey really touchy buh amazing and kewl poems

 
Old 18-01-2006
Jango_Baba
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

Originally Posted by Heer
hey really touchy buh amazing and kewl poems
thnxx juu

 
Old 18-01-2006
Jango_Baba
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

Originally Posted by Ramin
jango 22 bahu sohna likhya a 22..bahut sohni likhi a keep it p bro ...
thnxxx

 
Old 18-01-2006
Jango_Baba
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

Originally Posted by RuPy
Jango, Good Work Bro.........
thnxx 22ji

 
Old 18-01-2006
desi
 
Re: !!!....My creations....!!!

Originally Posted by Jango_Baba
Dukh chelan di aadat pa gayi hove jis nu..
kade kuch ni ho sakda us nu..........
LOki ta khende ne ki saanu koi khushi mile..
mai khenda bathere dukh vekhe ne...
jheda dekheya na hove, koi eho jeha dukh mile

<<< Jango>>>
is jug di bas ohi jaane..
asin ta bas usde niyaanee..
waqt to pehla mangea dukh v ni milda..
kehge gal sachian siyaaanee...



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