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wo tum na thy eik KHAYAL tha neri soch ka hi KAMAL tha wo MUHABBATAIN wo CHAHTAIN meri ULJHANO ka hi jal tha mery DIL main thi jo RONAQAIN wo .....


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Old 16-09-2008
yugi
 
MISAAL

wo tum na thy eik KHAYAL tha

neri soch ka hi KAMAL tha

wo MUHABBATAIN wo CHAHTAIN

meri ULJHANO ka hi jal tha

mery DIL main thi jo RONAQAIN

wo tera hi HUSAN O JAMAL tha

jawab jis ka milla nahi

wo essa hi eik SAWAL tha

wo aj milla to youn laga

jessy yehi tu hay jis ka INTEZAR tha

usay YAD kessy na kary koi

usay BHOLNA tu muhal tha

ab us ki kia main MISAL don

wo tu apni MISAL aap tha

 
Old 16-09-2008
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: MISAAL

nice,,,tfs
sorry to say bt bt there are sum mistakes lagda 'A' and 'O' naal koi purani dushmani hai jo bahut ghat use keeta ehna nu.. like KAMAL--kamaal,,
jal--jaal,,JAMAL--jamaal,,YAD--yaad,, BHOLNA--bhoolna,,muhal--muhaal,,MISAL--misaal,, don--doon..

 
Old 16-09-2008
yugi
 
Re: MISAAL

hmmm sahi kiya janab ne kah sakde oh galti hegi lakin aksar ey word use kite jande ne mein vi kar ley

 
Old 16-09-2008
amanwadhwa
 
Wink Re: MISAAL

nice lyrics but there are many spelling mistakes.

 
Old 16-09-2008
yugi
 
Re: MISAAL

thanks

 
Old 16-09-2008
Royal_Punjaban
 
Re: MISAAL

nyc.........

 
Old 17-09-2008
yugi
 
Re: MISAAL

thanks

 
Old 17-09-2008
V € € R
 
Re: MISAAL

nice aa.........
tfs

 
Old 17-09-2008
yugi
 
Re: MISAAL

THANKS

 
Old 17-09-2008
P-a-r-d-e-s-i
 
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Old 18-09-2008
yugi
 
Re: MISAAL

thanks

 
Old 13-01-2009
amanNBN
 
Re: MISAAL

nice ............tfs...

 
Old 13-01-2009
Rajat
 
Re: MISAAL

tfs ...

 
Old 12-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: MISAAL

nice.


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