minu v thoda hega shonk likhan da.............

jas_sandhu

JaTT kaiM ThoNu KOi VeHm?
Sat shri akal ji sariyan nu........ah 2-4 line jodiian ne..,suru tah kuj soch ke kita c par ponch kete hor hi gya....hun tusi hi daseoo kiddan da lagya .......................




Hun minu pind de oh din yaad ande ne.
Ekate c jdo kheed de oh din yaad ande ne.....



mumy roj jgana sanu pola dapka jeha mar ke,
soonde c pind jdo manjiaan kothe otte chaad ke.....



Khulle tarriyan di shave sute bda chir ho gya.,
hun ja tarre ne gawach gye,Khohre sonn da rawaz hor ho gya...



Dita jo bebe ne oh pyar ni pulda,
aj v eh soch neer akhian cho dulda..



Kut ke churri sanu roj khavandi c,
bapu ji di marr toh v bebe hi bachandi c...



Bapu ji toh sikhya c kenchi cycle chalana main,
Bapu ji mere lai tah aj v niana main....



Aj vaadi bheehn toh khadi maar yaad andi ah.
Aj bheehn meri door bethi ohdi yaad bdi anndi ah....



Asi c niane dasi soch v niani c,
sade lai pind toh bahr sari duniya anjani c.,



chote hunde kitiyan jo shrartan minu yaad ne.
Payian bapu toh jo chidhkan ohvi minu yaad ne..



Tod de c ammbian teh bair dle mar mar ke,
Pajde c ghar nu lokan diyan kiyariyan ujaad ke...



Pind diyan budian de ulambe roj ande c,
Asi pind vich lammbadan de vigde javak kahunde c ...



wakat jeven khalota c, khalota jeven pani hove..
Pind di yaad naiho jandi, Pahve jinni marji purani hove............
 
Very good Jaz, well executed. Keep it up bro!

Sando: C'mon jo vi mind vich aounda bas likh de. Anything that turns you on. How about something you miss, like your sis?
 

jas_sandhu

JaTT kaiM ThoNu KOi VeHm?
Very good Jaz, well executed. Keep it up bro!

Sando: C'mon jo vi mind vich aounda bas likh de. Anything that turns you on. How about something you miss, like your sis?

thanks djatt bro for appreciation......................
 
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