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Ah Sun,i mean dekh lao mere dukh vi: Rog ishqe da te JaSmIn di ghama de naal yarri... neend raatan di udd gaii "JaSmIn" di... na bhuk lage na he .....


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Old 30-03-2007
❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤
 
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Ah Sun,i mean dekh lao mere dukh vi:

Rog ishqe da te JaSmIn di ghama de naal yarri...
neend raatan di udd gaii "JaSmIn" di...
na bhuk lage na he pyaas....
sunn ne pende ne Tane sab duniya de...
penda hasna "JaSmIn" nu bhave dukh lage...

JaSmIn BINA TA SoHnEa TU EK PAL BHI NAI REHNDA HUNDA SI....
AAJ KIDA "JaSmIn" BINA LA LEYA TU APNA JEE VE....
SANU SADAA APNI "JAAN" KEHAN WALEA...
HUN KIDA GEA AH TU "JaSmIn" NU BHULA VE...
TERE BINA SADDI SOHNEA JIND MUK JAU...
HOR NA TU SANU TADPA ...


Das kehra kehra dukh dassa...
JaSmIn nu ta SoHnEa dukh bohat ne....
SaTT ishqe de kha kha assi hun ta andro haare haa...
Tu ta bhul gea sannu...
par AsSi SoHnEa tainu bhulna nai chaunde....


Tere bina marna bhi sadde naseeb vich nai....
Dukh Judaiya wale seh bhi hun sakde nai...
Tere bina Jeena bohat aukha ah...
Tere bina kalli "JaSmIn" reh bhi hun sakdi ni....
Na mar hove na jee hove,,,,,
Raaba kehre karma di Saza mainu diti ah....
na jee hove "JaSmIn" kolo na he tu mangan te maut mainu diti ah....


JaSmIn KaUr

 
Old 30-03-2007
karan4web
 
Re: +*+MeRe DuKh+*+

bouhat sohna likhya g...very nice work done...isi karke menu reply nahi c kar rahe??

 
Old 30-03-2007
karan4web
 
Re: +*+MeRe DuKh+*+

saari saari raat mai jaagda te neend tohadi udi pai aa...waah oa kudiyea...

 
Old 30-03-2007
munda_wakhre_type_da
 
Re: +*+MeRe DuKh+*+

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

tu karun koi kaara kudiyeee...

kede gam lag ge tenu..

sukh ta hai sab kuch?

 
Old 30-03-2007
SherDil™
 
Re: +*+MeRe DuKh+*+

Originally Posted by JaSmInA View Post
Ah Sun,i mean dekh lao mere dukh vi:

Rog ishqe da te JaSmIn di ghama de naal yarri...
neend raatan di udd gaii "JaSmIn" di...
na bhuk lage na he pyaas....
sunn ne pende ne Tane sab duniya de...
penda hasna "JaSmIn" nu bhave dukh lage...

JaSmIn BINA TA SoHnEa TU EK PAL BHI NAI REHNDA HUNDA SI....
AAJ KIDA "JaSmIn" BINA LA LEYA TU APNA JEE VE....
SANU SADAA APNI "JAAN" KEHAN WALEA...
HUN KIDA GEA AH TU "JaSmIn" NU BHULA VE...
TERE BINA SADDI SOHNEA JIND MUK JAU...
HOR NA TU SANU TADPA ...


Das kehra kehra dukh dassa...
JaSmIn nu ta SoHnEa dukh bohat ne....
SaTT ishqe de kha kha assi hun ta andro haare haa...
Tu ta bhul gea sannu...
par AsSi SoHnEa tainu bhulna nai chaunde....


Tere bina marna bhi sadde naseeb vich nai....
Dukh Judaiya wale seh bhi hun sakde nai...
Tere bina Jeena bohat aukha ah...
Tere bina kalli "JaSmIn" reh bhi hun sakdi ni....
Na mar hove na jee hove,,,,,
Raaba kehre karma di Saza mainu diti ah....
na jee hove "JaSmIn" kolo na he tu mangan te maut mainu diti ah....


JaSmIn KaUr

kihra chadd gayu tenu Jassu

 
Old 30-03-2007
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: +*+MeRe DuKh+*+

sohna aa
lagda tahno vi isqe da bhera rog lagia

 
Old 30-03-2007
SHauKeeN GaBRu
 
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beebiji ....

 
Old 30-03-2007
Bhavneet Singh
 
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Bahut sohna likheya hai ji...............

 
Old 30-03-2007
Preeto
 
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bohat sohna sis........aap likhe sab?

 
Old 30-03-2007
karansidhu_jatt
 
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Tuhanu ki ho gaya jasmine ji ,khush reha karo....

 
Old 30-03-2007
jas_sandhu
 
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woooww.
bahut vadya ji.......

 
Old 30-03-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
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bahut hee jada vadiya likhia jass ji,,,
par ik gal dasso tuhanu ah rog kadon lagia,,,,
te kee ah tusi app likhia jan mere vang chori keeta hai,,,,

 
Old 30-03-2007
SHauKeeN GaBRu
 
Re: +*+MeRe DuKh+*+

jasmina hassi kyon....main te hounsla ditta c

 
Old 30-03-2007
nav-3
 
Re: +*+MeRe DuKh+*+

balle bada wadhiya likhiya ,dekhiya mere te gayi aa




















by da way kihde naal ishq hogia ,mere ton bina

 
Old 30-03-2007
❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤
 
Re: +*+MeRe DuKh+*+

lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz......ohoooo sunn lao saare frnd mere.....mainu koi ishq vishq ni hoyaa.....eh ta waise hi time paas ah.....hehe
sareaaa nuuu dhanwaad,te shukkariyaa reply karrn da....


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