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Mera Dard

Hi Eh jo poem main post kar riha Haan.Eh sirf poem nahi hai.Meri jindagi da sachh hai.I hate myself. Main bada sanjoya dard apne nu Eh dard hun khindada janda .....


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Old 23-09-2007
Ravivir
 
Exclamation Mera Dard

Hi
Eh jo poem main post kar riha Haan.Eh sirf poem nahi hai.Meri jindagi da sachh hai.I hate myself.

Main bada sanjoya dard apne nu
Eh dard hun khindada janda hai
Eh bhet mera hun duniya aage
Holi-holi khulda janda hai
Hase khere change lagde nahi
Hun vain hi change lagde ne.
Eh naina de dariya hun
Bahnde hi change lagde ne.
Muk jane dariya de pani
Eh hanju mere mukne nahi.
Jo dite jakham is jindagi ne.
Oh maut to pehla sukne nahi
Malam ki lava jakhma te
Jad jine di koi aas nahi
Main haan oh darda da dariya
Jis da koi nikas nahi
dukh-takleefa-tangia di
Jis vich bani braash jihi
Koshish bahuti kiti hai
Kise sagar naal ja ralne di
Kise JEHLUM ya CHINAB di khukho
nava janam ik janne di
Par ki dasa ithe taan sab
Chhote-chhote nale ne
Rang hi surakh gulabi ne
Dil kale saah kale ne
RAVI ne taan mudh to hi
Dukha naal preet nibhayi hai
Lakha to mahangi jind apni
Kakha de mull gavayi hai


I love u all Plz pray 4 me

 
Old 23-09-2007
sonya gupta
 
Thumbs up Re: Mera Dard

Originally Posted by Ravivir View Post
Hi
Eh jo poem main post kar riha Haan.Eh sirf poem nahi hai.Meri jindagi da sachh hai.I hate myself.

Main bada sanjoya dard apne nu
Eh dard hun khindada janda hai
Eh bhet mera hun duniya aage
Holi-holi khulda janda hai
Hase khere change lagde nahi
Hun vain hi change lagde ne.
Eh naina de dariya hun
Bahnde hi change lagde ne.
Muk jane dariya de pani
Eh hanju mere mukne nahi.
Jo dite jakham is jindagi ne.
Oh maut to pehla sukne nahi
Malam ki lava jakhma te
Jad jine di koi aas nahi
Main haan oh darda da dariya
Jis da koi nikas nahi
dukh-takleefa-tangia di
Jis vich bani braash jihi
Koshish bahuti kiti hai
Kise sagar naal ja ralne di
Kise JEHLUM ya CHINAB di khukho
nava janam ik janne di
Par ki dasa ithe taan sab
Chhote-chhote nale ne
Rang hi surakh gulabi ne
Dil kale saah kale ne
RAVI ne taan mudh to hi
Dukha naal preet nibhayi hai
Lakha to mahangi jind apni
Kakha de mull gavayi hai


I love u all Plz pray 4 me
ssa ravi ji
bahot sohna likhia ebut esa kehra dard hai jo thoda picha nai shadda
sanu v kuch daso asi v thoda dard wandaan di puri koshish karage jii te thode lai dilo dua vi will wait for ur next poem tcccccccc

 
Old 23-09-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: Mera Dard

Thanks 4 reply
U want to share my sorrow,Think again it is not so easy
I telling u sadi taan sari umar hi ise tarah langi hai

Dhoke shikve hanju sab mere
janam din de tohfe ne,
main kade inha tofia nu
nahi gavaya
har ik dhokha har ik hanju
mere dil vich hai samaya
kade v koi jhuthi muskan
mere bhullan te na aayi hai
Main taan bachapan te jawani
hanjua sang bitayi hai

share taan kar sakde haan but darde haan
kite majan na ban jayiye.i have very soft heart
i am so senti
I think this is my week point

 
Old 24-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: Mera Dard

Originally Posted by Ravivir View Post
Hi
Eh jo poem main post kar riha Haan.Eh sirf poem nahi hai.Meri jindagi da sachh hai.I hate myself.

Main bada sanjoya dard apne nu
Eh dard hun khindada janda hai
Eh bhet mera hun duniya aage
Holi-holi khulda janda hai
Hase khere change lagde nahi
Hun vain hi change lagde ne.
Eh naina de dariya hun
Bahnde hi change lagde ne.
Muk jane dariya de pani
Eh hanju mere mukne nahi.
Jo dite jakham is jindagi ne.
Oh maut to pehla sukne nahi
Malam ki lava jakhma te
Jad jine di koi aas nahi
Main haan oh darda da dariya
Jis da koi nikas nahi
dukh-takleefa-tangia di
Jis vich bani braash jihi
Koshish bahuti kiti hai
Kise sagar naal ja ralne di
Kise JEHLUM ya CHINAB di khukho
nava janam ik janne di
Par ki dasa ithe taan sab
Chhote-chhote nale ne
Rang hi surakh gulabi ne
Dil kale saah kale ne
RAVI ne taan mudh to hi
Dukha naal preet nibhayi hai
Lakha to mahangi jind apni
Kakha de mull gavayi hai


I love u all Plz pray 4 me
Bhut hi dard hai veer tere dil vich .......

Tusi vi mere vaanj is beraham zindagi de sataye ho par ki kariye dear jinaa taan painda hi hai. Dear ek advice karda haan vada bharaa hon de naate kade enna dukhaan nu apne te haavi na hon dena... Mere vaan jadon dukh hadh ton vadh jave te GURU JI DI BAANI NU PADHNA MANN SHANT HO JAVEGA DEAR.. Eh zindagi badi kimiti hai te is zindagi di sade naalon nalon jayda sade parents nu lodh hai...... Thuvade chehre di ek muskaan layi unha sara jivan gavaya hai.... So dear dard da saamana karna .... Te main kise vi mudh te thuvade kam aa sakaan taan jarror dasna dear.. Par is zindagi to kade haar na manan ......

Rabb agey eh ardaas kardaan haan ki mere veer nu lakh khusiyaan milan . Udasiyaan ton oh door rave sada.....

Te eh lina mere zindagi naal vi mildiyaan ne......

Muk jane dariya de pani
Eh hanju mere mukne nahi.
Jo dite jakham is jindagi ne.
Oh maut to pehla sukne nahi

Malam ki lava jakhma te
Jad jine di koi aas nahi
Main haan oh darda da dariya
Jis da koi nikas nahi

 
Old 24-09-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: Mera Dard

really nice one.....

 
Old 25-09-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: Mera Dard

Thanks 4 ur advice
Mera dukh duniya to nirala hai
Nobody want to see me be happy
I lost my god, my friend,my mother
now i am alone in this crowdy world
But i thanks to people like u who share my sorrow
Main dukha to nahi darda
mera mera apni zindagi nu challenge hai
oh menu jina marji dard de deve but main duniya tu
to hass ke jayunga

 
Old 25-09-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: Mera Dard

Thanks 2 RANJIT BATHH
THANKS 4 REPLY

 
Old 25-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: Mera Dard

Originally Posted by Ravivir View Post
Thanks 4 ur advice
Mera dukh duniya to nirala hai
Nobody want to see me be happy
I lost my god, my friend,my mother
now i am alone in this crowdy world
But i thanks to people like u who share my sorrow
Main dukha to nahi darda
mera mera apni zindagi nu challenge hai
oh menu jina marji dard de deve but main duniya tu
to hass ke jayunga
I feel sad
but Dear Zindagi ton jitana hai apaan......
Eh bani naa gal veer zindagi nu chalange ..... Te veer kade kala na samjhi jad dil kare dukhaan nu saanjha kar layi .... Jass always with u and prey 4 u .

Zindagi zinda dil ka naam hai.....
Murda dil kya khaak jiyaa karte hai.....

Main is layi hi likhay si ....... apne purane thread vich .......
Gum aur bhi hai zindagi mein... Isq ke siva....
Kuj dard aise honde ne jo banda explain ne kar sakda ........

I know Zindagi be reham hai dear.........

Rabb sada apni mehar rakhe thuvade te ....

 
Old 25-09-2007
simar
 
Re: Mera Dard

nice one....
but dnt hate urself......

 
Old 27-09-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: Mera Dard

Thanks jass bhaji
Main hamesha ik bada 22 mangia si
so meri murad puri ho gayi lagdi
Thanks 4 ur kindness
be with me as a big brother

 
Old 27-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: Mera Dard

Originally Posted by Ravivir View Post
Thanks jass bhaji
Main hamesha ik bada 22 mangia si
so meri murad puri ho gayi lagdi
Thanks 4 ur kindness
be with me as a big brother
Bas veer samjh lavin ki vada bhara mil gaya.... Sub rabb di mehar hai dear....
Te thanks dhillon 22 ji da te other adminstators da jinaha karke apaan mile ......

Bas aaj ton Kala na samjhi... I am always with u..... Main vi bada kala si es jag vich apne bharvaan nu apne hathan vich khosa si .....

chalo chado always smile ....... Khus ravo te maujaan maano........


 
Old 03-10-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: Mera Dard

thanks 4 be with me as a brother jass
hun hukam karo 22 ji
ki kariye tuhade layi

 
Old 06-10-2007
smilly
 
Re: Mera Dard

Originally Posted by Ravivir View Post
thanks 4 be with me as a brother jass
hun hukam karo 22 ji
ki kariye tuhade layi
Bas khus ravo dear........

 
Old 06-10-2007
Ravivir
 
Re: Mera Dard

Hi jass bhaji
I am always try to be happy
now i quit to hear the sad son
I want to change my mind
life is price less

 
Old 09-10-2007
smilly
 
Re: Mera Dard

Originally Posted by Ravivir View Post
Hi jass bhaji
I am always try to be happy
now i quit to hear the sad son
I want to change my mind
life is price less

Gumaan di raat taan veer har kise de jeevan vich hondi hai. Par es ton bahar nikalan chahida hai.. Nahi taan eh asi gamaan di haneri chalandi hai ke pher bhar aan da rasta vi nahi labda.. Main eh vekh hai apni life vich..

Gamman ch khoye rehan te, Eh raah kabraan te mukda hai...
Gamman naal lad ke apaan es jeevan nu behtar bana sakde hai...

Khus ravo veer eh kali badli gamaan di door ho jani ek din...


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