Mera Dard

Hi
Eh jo poem main post kar riha Haan.Eh sirf poem nahi hai.Meri jindagi da sachh hai.I hate myself.

Main bada sanjoya dard apne nu
Eh dard hun khindada janda hai
Eh bhet mera hun duniya aage
Holi-holi khulda janda hai
Hase khere change lagde nahi
Hun vain hi change lagde ne.
Eh naina de dariya hun
Bahnde hi change lagde ne.
Muk jane dariya de pani
Eh hanju mere mukne nahi.
Jo dite jakham is jindagi ne.
Oh maut to pehla sukne nahi
Malam ki lava jakhma te
Jad jine di koi aas nahi
Main haan oh darda da dariya
Jis da koi nikas nahi
dukh-takleefa-tangia di
Jis vich bani braash jihi
Koshish bahuti kiti hai
Kise sagar naal ja ralne di
Kise JEHLUM ya CHINAB di khukho
nava janam ik janne di
Par ki dasa ithe taan sab
Chhote-chhote nale ne
Rang hi surakh gulabi ne
Dil kale saah kale ne
RAVI ne taan mudh to hi
Dukha naal preet nibhayi hai
Lakha to mahangi jind apni
Kakha de mull gavayi hai


I love u all Plz pray 4 me
 
Hi
Eh jo poem main post kar riha Haan.Eh sirf poem nahi hai.Meri jindagi da sachh hai.I hate myself.

Main bada sanjoya dard apne nu
Eh dard hun khindada janda hai
Eh bhet mera hun duniya aage
Holi-holi khulda janda hai
Hase khere change lagde nahi
Hun vain hi change lagde ne.
Eh naina de dariya hun
Bahnde hi change lagde ne.
Muk jane dariya de pani
Eh hanju mere mukne nahi.
Jo dite jakham is jindagi ne.
Oh maut to pehla sukne nahi
Malam ki lava jakhma te
Jad jine di koi aas nahi
Main haan oh darda da dariya
Jis da koi nikas nahi
dukh-takleefa-tangia di
Jis vich bani braash jihi
Koshish bahuti kiti hai
Kise sagar naal ja ralne di
Kise JEHLUM ya CHINAB di khukho
nava janam ik janne di
Par ki dasa ithe taan sab
Chhote-chhote nale ne
Rang hi surakh gulabi ne
Dil kale saah kale ne
RAVI ne taan mudh to hi
Dukha naal preet nibhayi hai
Lakha to mahangi jind apni
Kakha de mull gavayi hai


I love u all Plz pray 4 me
ssa ravi ji:nail
bahot sohna likhia ebut esa kehra dard hai jo thoda picha nai shadda
:bhajosanu v kuch daso asi v thoda dard wandaan di puri koshish karage jii te thode lai dilo dua v:wai will wait for ur next poem tcccccccc
 
Thanks 4 reply
U want to share my sorrow,Think again it is not so easy
I telling u sadi taan sari umar hi ise tarah langi hai

Dhoke shikve hanju sab mere
janam din de tohfe ne,
main kade inha tofia nu
nahi gavaya
har ik dhokha har ik hanju
mere dil vich hai samaya
kade v koi jhuthi muskan
mere bhullan te na aayi hai
Main taan bachapan te jawani
hanjua sang bitayi hai

share taan kar sakde haan but darde haan
kite majan na ban jayiye.i have very soft heart
i am so senti
I think this is my week point
 

smilly

VIP
Hi
Eh jo poem main post kar riha Haan.Eh sirf poem nahi hai.Meri jindagi da sachh hai.I hate myself.

Main bada sanjoya dard apne nu
Eh dard hun khindada janda hai
Eh bhet mera hun duniya aage
Holi-holi khulda janda hai
Hase khere change lagde nahi
Hun vain hi change lagde ne.
Eh naina de dariya hun
Bahnde hi change lagde ne.
Muk jane dariya de pani
Eh hanju mere mukne nahi.
Jo dite jakham is jindagi ne.
Oh maut to pehla sukne nahi
Malam ki lava jakhma te
Jad jine di koi aas nahi
Main haan oh darda da dariya
Jis da koi nikas nahi
dukh-takleefa-tangia di
Jis vich bani braash jihi
Koshish bahuti kiti hai
Kise sagar naal ja ralne di
Kise JEHLUM ya CHINAB di khukho
nava janam ik janne di
Par ki dasa ithe taan sab
Chhote-chhote nale ne
Rang hi surakh gulabi ne
Dil kale saah kale ne
RAVI ne taan mudh to hi
Dukha naal preet nibhayi hai
Lakha to mahangi jind apni
Kakha de mull gavayi hai


I love u all Plz pray 4 me

Bhut hi dard hai veer tere dil vich .......

Tusi vi mere vaanj is beraham zindagi de sataye ho par ki kariye dear jinaa taan painda hi hai. Dear ek advice karda haan vada bharaa hon de naate kade enna dukhaan nu apne te haavi na hon dena... Mere vaan jadon dukh hadh ton vadh jave te GURU JI DI BAANI NU PADHNA MANN SHANT HO JAVEGA DEAR.. Eh zindagi badi kimiti hai te is zindagi di sade naalon nalon jayda sade parents nu lodh hai...... Thuvade chehre di ek muskaan layi unha sara jivan gavaya hai.... So dear dard da saamana karna .... Te main kise vi mudh te thuvade kam aa sakaan taan jarror dasna dear.. Par is zindagi to kade haar na manan ......

Rabb agey eh ardaas kardaan haan ki mere veer nu lakh khusiyaan milan . Udasiyaan ton oh door rave sada.....

Te eh lina mere zindagi naal vi mildiyaan ne......

Muk jane dariya de pani
Eh hanju mere mukne nahi.
Jo dite jakham is jindagi ne.
Oh maut to pehla sukne nahi

Malam ki lava jakhma te
Jad jine di koi aas nahi
Main haan oh darda da dariya
Jis da koi nikas nahi
 
Thanks 4 ur advice
Mera dukh duniya to nirala hai
Nobody want to see me be happy
I lost my god, my friend,my mother
now i am alone in this crowdy world
But i thanks to people like u who share my sorrow
Main dukha to nahi darda
mera mera apni zindagi nu challenge hai
oh menu jina marji dard de deve but main duniya tu
to hass ke jayunga
 

smilly

VIP
Thanks 4 ur advice
Mera dukh duniya to nirala hai
Nobody want to see me be happy
I lost my god, my friend,my mother
now i am alone in this crowdy world
But i thanks to people like u who share my sorrow
Main dukha to nahi darda
mera mera apni zindagi nu challenge hai
oh menu jina marji dard de deve but main duniya tu
to hass ke jayunga

I feel sad
but Dear Zindagi ton jitana hai apaan......
Eh bani naa gal veer zindagi nu chalange ..... Te veer kade kala na samjhi jad dil kare dukhaan nu saanjha kar layi .... Jass always with u and prey 4 u .

Zindagi zinda dil ka naam hai.....
Murda dil kya khaak jiyaa karte hai.....

Main is layi hi likhay si ....... apne purane thread vich .......
Gum aur bhi hai zindagi mein... Isq ke siva....
Kuj dard aise honde ne jo banda explain ne kar sakda ........

I know Zindagi be reham hai dear.........

Rabb sada apni mehar rakhe thuvade te ....
 

smilly

VIP
Thanks jass bhaji
Main hamesha ik bada 22 mangia si
so meri murad puri ho gayi lagdi
Thanks 4 ur kindness
be with me as a big brother

Bas veer samjh lavin ki vada bhara mil gaya.... Sub rabb di mehar hai dear....
Te thanks dhillon 22 ji da te other adminstators da jinaha karke apaan mile ......

Bas aaj ton Kala na samjhi... I am always with u..... Main vi bada kala si es jag vich apne bharvaan nu apne hathan vich khosa si .....

chalo chado always smile ....... Khus ravo te maujaan maano........

 
Hi jass bhaji
I am always try to be happy
now i quit to hear the sad son
I want to change my mind
life is price less
 

smilly

VIP
Hi jass bhaji
I am always try to be happy
now i quit to hear the sad son
I want to change my mind
life is price less


Gumaan di raat taan veer har kise de jeevan vich hondi hai. Par es ton bahar nikalan chahida hai.. Nahi taan eh asi gamaan di haneri chalandi hai ke pher bhar aan da rasta vi nahi labda.. Main eh vekh hai apni life vich..

Gamman ch khoye rehan te, Eh raah kabraan te mukda hai...
Gamman naal lad ke apaan es jeevan nu behtar bana sakde hai...

Khus ravo veer eh kali badli gamaan di door ho jani ek din...
 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary
Tusi dove ghaint bande ho...

Specially Jass 22 tusi jis tarah Ravi nu hosla ditta hai kamal hai yaar.

Te Ravi veere dukha to ghabrauna nahi, jad kadi v down feel karo u can always contact Jass 22 g and ofcourse me too(if u feel like)

Khush raho te mauja mano
 

smilly

VIP
Tusi dove ghaint bande ho...

Specially Jass 22 tusi jis tarah Ravi nu hosla ditta hai kamal hai yaar.

Te Ravi veere dukha to ghabrauna nahi, jad kadi v down feel karo u can always contact Jass 22 g and ofcourse me too(if u feel like)

Khush raho te mauja mano

Thanx veer sandy enna maan den layi .... Veer actually ravi mere veer nu vi apne saath di lodh hai........ Mainu pata hai dukhaan de pal langaune bade aukhe honde ne...

Baaki veer eh taan sub
rab di raza hai ki oh ek dukh denda hai ... Te maraham vi denda hai...
Hor main taan nimaana jeha banda haan..Eh taan rab hai jo sanu ek duje da saath den nu prerit karda hai..

Eh zindagi vich apaan je kise de kam na aa sake taan apne es jag vich aan da ki faida...

Banda bande da vaairi ethe ......
Banda bande da saathi ........

Khush ravo dear...... Te mere veer ravi layi vi khusiyaan di dua karo... Jine dukh vekhe us ne. Us ton laakh guna zayada sukh milan us nu..... Meri taan rabb ton sada eh dua hai......


 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary
Thanx veer sandy enna maan den layi .... Veer actually ravi mere veer nu vi apne saath di lodh hai........ Mainu pata hai dukhaan de pal langaune bade aukhe honde ne...

Baaki veer eh taan sub
rab di raza hai ki oh ek dukh denda hai ... Te maraham vi denda hai...
Hor main taan nimaana jeha banda haan..Eh taan rab hai jo sanu ek duje da saath den nu prerit karda hai..

Eh zindagi vich apaan je kise de kam na aa sake taan apne es jag vich aan da ki faida...

Banda bande da vaairi ethe ......
Banda bande da saathi ........

Khush ravo dear...... Te mere veer ravi layi vi khusiyaan di dua karo... Jine dukh vekhe us ne. Us ton laakh guna zayada sukh milan us nu..... Meri taan rabb ton sada eh dua hai......

Meri ta ruh sada hi ohna sab vaste duavan kardi hai jehre dukh vich ne, te sahi keha tusi banda hi bande de kam aunda hai.

Te Ravi veere vaste special request hai rabb nu.

Khush ravo ji
 
Thanks Grewal bhaji & Jass bhaji
Mere kol koi lafz nahi thuhade layi
Bas ji karda thuhade hath chum leva
Tusi veera ne jo mere layi rabb nu duaa kiti si mere layi
oh kabul ho gayi.
Mere mann da ik bahut bada bhoj lah gaya
I feel relax now
bas main taan eh hi kahunga

Menu yaar mere japde,khuda warge
Kise aallah de fakeer di dua varge
Jithe javan chalde ne wang saye de
Eh taan aaunde jande saah warge

Thanks a Lot.....................
 
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