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maut nu v tarpha ditta

bulbula utheya zindagi ch dukh da, main kamjor ghabraa geya, karna c jis dukh da muqabla, main khud hi ohnu appna yaar bana leya, nasheyan de changul vich khud nu .....


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Old 01-04-2008
babbu*a*rex
 
maut nu v tarpha ditta

bulbula utheya zindagi ch dukh da,
main kamjor ghabraa geya,
karna c jis dukh da muqabla,
main khud hi ohnu appna yaar bana leya,
nasheyan de changul vich khud nu phasa dita,
"PREET" di maut tan pehlan v attal hi c,
par ehna nasheyan ne maut nu v tarpha ditta

 
Old 01-04-2008
Lily
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

nice 1.....thanx for sharing....

 
Old 01-04-2008
Loveye
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

tfs.....................

 
Old 01-04-2008
HoneY
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

nice........

 
Old 02-04-2008
babbu*a*rex
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

Originally Posted by honey View Post
nice........
nice aa but phir v kasak dil di puri bahar ni kadh sakeya.
anyway thanx 4 ur compliments

 
Old 02-04-2008
babbu*a*rex
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

Originally Posted by lily View Post
nice 1.....thanx for sharing....
zindagi de kujh pal share kar ke intresting ban jande ne. thx jee.

 
Old 02-04-2008
smilly
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

Nice one dear....... Ek dard jeha hai es vich.......

 
Old 02-04-2008
babbu*a*rex
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

Originally Posted by smilly View Post
Nice one dear....... Ek dard jeha hai es vich.......
thanx jee dard da tan nazara jee eh tan appna pakka friend aa.
kade sath ni chadda. anyway hasde vasde raho.

 
Old 04-04-2008
rimpy_alone
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

Maana ke aapki nazaron main kuch nahin hain hum.....
Magar unse jakar puchiye jinhein hasil nahi hain hum

 
Old 07-04-2008
grewalsandy
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

SSA preet.....

Vadiya likhea hai veere... tfs....

par aa nasheya wala kam ni jachda mainu.... Pyaar nahi milea ta esda matlab eh ta nahi k apna aap rol lavo....

tutte dil ch athah energy(shakti) hundi aa... je change pase lavo ta banda kite da kite pahunch janda... te je marhe pase lagna ta veere ehdi lorh hi nahi... baki tu aap samajhdaar aa..

Ha te tera signature bahla kaim lageya mainu...

 
Old 09-06-2008
babbu*a*rex
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

Originally Posted by grewalsandy View Post
SSA preet.....

Vadiya likhea hai veere... tfs....

par aa nasheya wala kam ni jachda mainu.... Pyaar nahi milea ta esda matlab eh ta nahi k apna aap rol lavo....

tutte dil ch athah energy(shakti) hundi aa... je change pase lavo ta banda kite da kite pahunch janda... te je marhe pase lagna ta veere ehdi lorh hi nahi... baki tu aap samajhdaar aa..

Ha te tera signature bahla kaim lageya mainu...
yeh ur right brother....but kayi vaari sanu pata v hunda k agge raste vich gara hai par phir v oss de vichon langhna peh janda..anyway thanx 4 ur sweat reply mitra...hasda vasda reh.....

 
Old 10-06-2008
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

bahut vadiya ji........tfs

 
Old 10-06-2008
amani23
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

very nice dard ta thudaa jalahk reha hai

 
Old 10-06-2008
babbu*a*rex
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

Originally Posted by Konvicted_Jatt View Post
bahut vadiya ji........tfs
thanx 4 ur comments mitra...tc...

 
Old 10-06-2008
babbu*a*rex
 
Re: maut nu v tarpha ditta

Originally Posted by amani23 View Post
very nice dard ta thudaa jalahk reha hai
dard ni aeh tan mitran di khushi jhalkdi aa....dard nu khushi bana ke peen da nazara hi hor aa........


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