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mannaa layi da

Ruthe jo yaar taan aape mannaa layi da.. Apnaa aap nu aape hi samjaa layi da..... pata ni kadon aa jave shaam zindagi di...... begaaneyaa nu vi gal naal laa .....


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Old 06-06-2007
smilly
 
mannaa layi da

Ruthe jo yaar taan aape mannaa layi da..
Apnaa aap nu aape hi samjaa layi da.....
pata ni kadon aa jave shaam zindagi di......
begaaneyaa nu vi gal naal laa layi da......

Milde ne lakhaan log es zindagi di gaddi vich yaroo......
Har naal dil nahi vata layi da.....
Mul pyaar da paan bada aukha mitro......
Pyaar vich apnaa app mitaa layi da........

Layi hove je saanj umaraan kisi naal....
taan saahn akhri tak saath nibha layi da........
hussan,javaani,maape te yaar mudh nahi labhne.....
Enaa saareyaa nu dilon naal chaah layi da........

---------- pyar ghoodha te sacha pa liyi da ------------------------------------ Sajnaa nu gal la layi da--------------------




 
Old 06-06-2007
•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤°
 
Re: mannaa layi da


tooo gudd

 
Old 06-06-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: mannaa layi da

bahut sohna likheya te share karan li thx

 
Old 07-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: mannaa layi da

Originally Posted by •°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤° View Post


tooo gudd
thanx ji........

 
Old 07-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: mannaa layi da

Originally Posted by kudi_patole_wargi View Post
bahut sohna likheya te share karan li thx
thanx ji.......

 
Old 07-06-2007
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: mannaa layi da

very nice aa g

 
Old 07-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: mannaa layi da

Originally Posted by Pardesan Punjaban View Post
very nice aa g
thanx ji......

 
Old 07-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: mannaa layi da



Milde ne lakhaan log es zindagi di gaddi vich yaroo......
Har naal dil nahi vata layi da.....


dil kambakht,, ik vaar vatt ke doosre de kol jana hi nahi chonda,,,,,,,,,,,,



bohut sohna likhiya dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,vakiya hi- kabil-e tareef hai

 
Old 07-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: mannaa layi da

Originally Posted by reshmi_mutiyar View Post

Milde ne lakhaan log es zindagi di gaddi vich yaroo......
Har naal dil nahi vata layi da.....


dil kambakht,, ik vaar vatt ke doosre de kol jana hi nahi chonda,,,,,,,,,,,,



bohut sohna likhiya dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,vakiya hi- kabil-e tareef hai
thanx dear.........

BUT EH SACH HAI DIL EK NAAL HI VATADA HAI...

JIS TARAH HAR HATH MILAON VALA DOST NAHI HONDA....

USI TARAH PYAAR BAAR BAAR NAHIN HUNDA

MERE KOLE LIKHAN NU BHUT KUCH HAI KITHE SHABAD NAHIN MILDE , KADE WAQT NAHIN HONDA...... OH TOUCH NAHIN AUNADA JO MAIN LIKHNA CHAHUNDA HAAN.....


BUT UR SHAAYRI AND WORD R VERY TOUCHING ...

ONCE AGAIN THANX........

 
Old 07-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: mannaa layi da

smilly
BUT UR SHAAYRI AND WORD R VERY TOUCHING ...


tusi sohna likhde ho,, bass koshish kari jaoo,, thnx 4 complimenting me too dear

 
Old 07-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: mannaa layi da

Originally Posted by reshmi_mutiyar View Post
smilly
BUT UR SHAAYRI AND WORD R VERY TOUCHING ...


tusi sohna likhde ho,, bass koshish kari jaoo,, thnx 4 complimenting me too dear
ACTUALLY MERE KOL WAQT KAM HUNDA HAI.... MAIN EK MEDIA GROUP(PRESS) VICH HAAN ATE .IN MEDIA TIME HI NAHIN HUNDA .... IS LAYI JADOON TIME MILDA HAI JO DIL VICH AUNDA HAI US VELE HI LIKH JANDA HAAN.....

APPAN TAAN BAS LIKHDE HAAN ..... SOHNA TAAN TUSI ATE BAAKI MEMBERS LIKHDE HO..........


smirk smirk smirk

 
Old 07-06-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: mannaa layi da

nahin hi eho jehi koi gal nahin tusi v bahut sohna likheya aa...te jado media to time milda aa udo ithe aa jaya karo

reshu sohna likheya aa

 
Old 08-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: mannaa layi da

thanx Simran ....

thuvanu mera likihaya changa lagya.....
vaise main savere ek vaar agar office aana haan taan jaroor unp te anaa haan... because ehte mehak hai punjab di.....

unp de sare dostan te rabb diyaan meharan rehan......

te ache ton acha likhan ehte aa ke acha vi lagda hai.....

......

 
Old 17-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: mannaa layi da

nice.


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