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Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Dosto ek maa jis da putar bade salan ton pardesh gaya hai.Put nu ghar vapas aan nu keh rahi hai... Main apne labja vich maa de dard nu bayan kar .....


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Old 14-11-2007
smilly
 
Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Dosto ek maa jis da putar bade salan ton pardesh gaya hai.Put nu ghar vapas aan nu keh rahi hai... Main apne labja vich maa de dard nu bayan kar reha haan.... Plz eh kise vi mere Pardesi dost nu hurt karan layi nahi likhi.Agar kise nu Kuj changa na lage taan plz maaf kar dena...
(Mainu vi pata hai ki roji roti layi.Es zindagi vich bhut kuj karan painda hai. Par dosto maa taan maa hi hondi hai. Te oh sirf dil ton hi sochdi hai)


Bathi bhoohe te udeek di maa ve teri..
kadon putta pardesiyaa ghar aveinga...


Udeekaan vich vagde ne, teri maa de hanju ...
Kadon ena hanjuan nu ,tun ann ke mukavenga...


Ek arsaa hoya put nu nazar bhar vekhe..
Kadon putta enna akhaan di payas bujavenga...


Vehda suna piya apne ghar da putara..
Kadon sune vehde vich aa khid khidaveinga..


Bapu tera hun ,budaa ho gaya putara..
Kadon usde bhudape di lathi ban aveinga....


Nit bhuhe te khadi bhain (sis) vi udeeke...
Kadon sang bhain de khusi manaveinga.....


Rakhi aayi taan ro-ro yaada kare..
Kadon tak chitiyaan vich rakhiyaan mangvain ga..


Tere Budhe mapeyaan da aya hun anth nede ..
Ki sade maran ton pehla ghar aveinga...


Paise taan pher vi mil jana .....
par mapeyaan nu kithon layaveinga .......


Bhudi maa di sun araj ve putra...
kadon putta pardesiyaa ghar aveinga...
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Old 14-11-2007
smilly
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Maa varga hor na koi .......

 
Old 14-11-2007
simar
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

nice one.......tfs

 
Old 14-11-2007
Swashbuckling
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

bahut vadhiya smily veere .......... very nice

 
Old 14-11-2007
SehaJ
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Thanks......... <>

 
Old 15-11-2007
smilly
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Originally Posted by SehaJ View Post
Thanks......... <>
thanx sehaj veer.....

 
Old 15-11-2007
smilly
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Originally Posted by Swashbuckling View Post
bahut vadhiya smily veere .......... very nice
thanx sukhbir 22 ji ..............

 
Old 15-11-2007
smilly
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Originally Posted by simar View Post
nice one.......tfs
thanx dear.......

 
Old 15-11-2007
smilly
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

thanx pp dear ....
Mere kol koi words ni ki kahan bas rabb sade veer nu apne charna vich jagah dave te thavanu te thuvade parivar nu bhana manan da hosla bakshe..
Dear apne parents da thayan rakho.khaas kar Mom da unha nu jo support es vele tusi de sakhde ho hor koi ni de sakhda...

We all with u .......

take care.....

 
Old 15-11-2007
grewalsandy
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Veer ji kyaa baat hai....
Bahoot khoob likhea hai I realy liked "Kadon tak chitiyaan vich rakhiyaan mangvain ga"

thanks for sharing.

 
Old 15-11-2007
smilly
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Originally Posted by grewalsandy View Post
Veer ji kyaa baat hai....
Bahoot khoob likhea hai I realy liked "Kadon tak chitiyaan vich rakhiyaan mangvain ga"

thanks for sharing.
thanx sandy dear......


 
Old 15-11-2007
shy
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Kya baat hai ..... Nice one.......

 
Old 15-11-2007
smilly
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

thanx dear....

 
Old 15-11-2007
sandeepsingh
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

"Maavan Hundia Thandia Shaavan,
Bhave Rishtey Jag te Hazaar Wasde"



sacha dard sunaya hai veere.....

 
Old 15-11-2007
gurinder_gidda
 
Re: Maa Udeeke putta pardesiyaa

Thanx dear. tuhadi post bahut soni aa. Really


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