Maa

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 10, 2007

• #1

THIS POEM IS TRIBUTE MY LATE MOM.



Honkia de bas eh pe gayi jind meri
Yaad aave khet te oh khooh wali beri
Maye meriye ni jado yaad aave teri
Maye meriye ni jado...................

Yaad aave jado teri akhri oh rain ni
aap muhare ronnn lag pende nain ni
Hoyia sab ghaata puriya, ik ghaat rah gayi teri
Maye meriye ni jado..................

sochan diya jangla ch raha main taaan gumda,
Hik na lave na koi matha mera chumda,
Harr gaya vich main taan gama di haneri,
Maye mariye ni jado.....................

Changa und si jado hunde si niyane ni,
Befikari si tere sonde si sirhane ni,
Deve na koi tere wangu pyaar wali lori,
Maye meriye ni jado....................

Ik-ik pal mera beete ik saal ni,
Tere bina hoya mera mandra hai haal ni,
Supne ch kai din pai kiyun na pheri,
Maye meriye ni jado....................

Bhar aave akh jado teri gall koi karda,
RAVI tera maye nit navi maut marda
Nasihata triya te hun jind chalu meri
Maye meriye ni jado........................

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Jul 10, 2007

• #2

Ravivir said:

THIS POEM IS TRIBUTE MY LATE MOM.

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beautiful tribute, LOVED ONES ARE ALWAYS MISSED,,,,,,,,,,,,, but life goes on nevertheless,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 

❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤

Prime VIP

• Jul 10, 2007

• #3

vadiaa ah ji....tankuuu

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Jul 10, 2007

• #4

thanks 4 sharing dear....n sorry...

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 11, 2007

• #5

THANKS FOR UR COMPLIMENTS. ALWAYS RESPECT UR MOM .............



.

 

smilly

VIP

• Jul 11, 2007

• #6

Bhut Sona likhaya dear.......
Bhut nice hai ae....


Maa hundi hai maa ....
Oh duniyaa valeyoo....
Maa di puja rabb di puja ...
Maa ton vada roop na duja...

 

Johal

ChArDi KaLaN

• Jul 11, 2007

• #7

Bhaut Sohna likhya gggg

thxsss for sharing

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 12, 2007

• #8

kudi_patole_wargi said:

thanks 4 sharing dear....n sorry...

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BIBI SIMRAN why r u write this sorry.....

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Jul 13, 2007

• #9

MAA is a person who seeing there are only four pieces of pie for 5 people inc. her, promptly announces she never did care for pie, that she has already eaten, ​

 

smilly

VIP

• Jul 13, 2007

• #10

Sahi keha apninder dear.......

Maa varga avar na koi......

Sub khusiyaan mil janiyaa jag valiyaa yaaro paise naal...
Par maa mul ni mil sakdi....

Maavan thandiyaan chaavaan......

Maa da kaleja us bache layi vi roonda jo usdi kadar ni karda..

maa taan maa hai 3 akhar ne maa vich par is da matlab te ehsaa bhut vadaa te changa haan....

Kisi bache di maa nu kuch na hoye......
Maa varga koi ni ban sakda ......

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 13, 2007

• #11

Thanks to Aapninder JI, Jass, Jasmina

kIHRE DESH TU GAYI NI MAYE
KITHE NU CHITHIYA PAVA,
MAA JINA DI SIR TE HAI NAHI,
LOKAN RAKH LIYA SADA SIRNAVA,

Hun taan je koi pind aake meera naam leke pata puchade ne taan lok pehla ehi kehnde ne ohi jihi maa hai nahi.

 

Jass-DS

Hooked And Addicted™

• Jul 13, 2007

• #12

Bahut Wadiya Ji.................

 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

• Jul 13, 2007

• #13

UR VERY WELCOME RAVI DEAR,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,​

 

SherDil™

naNOX9™ Hardcore

• Jul 13, 2007

• #14

thanxxxxxxxxxxx

 

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young_punjabi

Member

• Jul 13, 2007

• #15

very well wrote ravi bhaji. but we should also remember our maa boli "PUNJABI". that is why i m writing my most of posts in PUNJABI and this post is my tribute to PUNJABI.

ਮਾਂ ਬੋਲੀ ਨੂੰ ਸਦਾ ਰੱਖੋ ਯਾਦ,
ਮੇਰੀ ਤਾਂ ਬਸ ਇਹ ਫਰਿਆਦ
ਜਿਸ ਮਾਂ ਦੀ ਹਾਂ ਅਸੀਂ ਔਲਾਦ,
ਉਸ ਨੂੰ ਰਹਿਣ ਦਿਓ ਆਬਾਦ
ਆਪਣੇ ਹੱਥੀਂ ਮਾਂ ਦੀ ਮਿੱਟੀ,
ਪੁੱਤਰੋ ਕਿਉਂ ਕਰਦੇ ਬਰਬਾਦ ?
ਮਾਖਿਓਂ ਮਿੱਠੀ ਬੋਲੀ ਛੱਡ ਕੇ,
ਗੈਰਾਂ ਦੀ ਤੇ ਕਰਦੇ ਨਾਜ਼ ?
ਊੜੇ ਐੜੇ ਨੂੰ ਕਿਉਂ ਭੁੱਲ ਕੇ,
ਏ ਬੀ ਸੀ ਦੇ ਛੇੜੇ ਸਾਜ਼ ?

 

shy

Member

• Jul 14, 2007

• #16

Mainu likhna ni aunda ...... Bas anaa keha haa....

Maa ......... di bukal vich sare jag da sukh hai......

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 14, 2007

• #17

[quote=young_punjabi;285610]very well wrote ravi bhaji. but we should also remember our maa boli "PUNJABI". that is why i m writing my most of posts in PUNJABI and this post is my tribute to PUNJABI.

ਮਾਂ ਬੋਲੀ ਨੂੰ ਸਦਾ ਰੱਖੋ ਯਾਦ,
ਮੇਰੀ ਤਾਂ ਬਸ ਇਹ ਫਰਿਆਦ
ਜਿਸ ਮਾਂ ਦੀ ਹਾਂ ਅਸੀਂ ਔਲਾਦ,
ਉਸ ਨੂੰ ਰਹਿਣ ਦਿਓ ਆਬਾਦ
ਆਪਣੇ ਹੱਥੀਂ ਮਾਂ ਦੀ ਮਿੱਟੀ,
ਪੁੱਤਰੋ ਕਿਉਂ ਕਰਦੇ ਬਰਬਾਦ ?
ਮਾਖਿਓਂ ਮਿੱਠੀ ਬੋਲੀ ਛੱਡ ਕੇ,
ਗੈਰਾਂ ਦੀ ਤੇ ਕਰਦੇ ਨਾਜ਼ ?
ਊੜੇ ਐੜੇ ਨੂੰ ਕਿਉਂ ਭੁੱਲ ਕੇ,
ਏ ਬੀ ਸੀ ਦੇ ਛੇੜੇ ਸਾਜ਼ ?[/quote]

Really apni boli vargi boli kithre ho nahi sakdi, Har insan nu apni maa boli di kadar karni chahide hai,Bhaven oh gujrati hove Marathi hove,

LOKI DUNIYA TE VASDE BATHERE,
PUNJABIAN DI SHAAN VAKHARI,

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jul 15, 2007

• #18

kITHE GAYIA MAA SADE HISE DIYA LORIAN
JITHE SANU LAAD LADAYE
OH VIHRA TERE BAAZ NI MAYE
RABBA PNA ROOP AKHVAUNDA
PHIR MAVAAN NU KYUN LE JANDA

 

roopishwar kaur

Well-known member

• Jul 15, 2007

• #19

ssa ji
bhut vadiya likhi aa
dassan layyi labaz nhi aa
ma te rab da roop hundi haan
rab har jagah nhi ho sakda
es layi us ne ma bnayi

 

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young_punjabi

Member

• Jul 15, 2007

• #20

wow!
great thinking roop ji
ur right