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Jaswinder Singh Baidwan

Akhran da mureed

Staff member

• May 8, 2010

• #1

Eh lines ohna lyi ne, jo horan de words copy karde ne, jo horan de geetan, kavitaawan ch apna NAAM paa dinde ne,

Sorry, i don't want to hurt anybody. but its not right, & just sharing a thought process of a writer.

please share your view through poll.

 

H4RVI SINGH

Prime VIP

• May 8, 2010

• #2

kise hadh tak theek hai, ..... je banda inspire ho ke challe taan .

 

H4RVI SINGH

Prime VIP

• May 8, 2010

• #3

awesome ............ picturisation is awesome ... samjho duniya

 

Pardeep

๑۩۩๑┼●ℛŐŶ

• May 8, 2010

• #4

Awesome ...

 

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P-_-u-_-n-_-j-_-a-_-b

Well-known member

• May 8, 2010

• #5

balle 22 ji bilkul theek keha

 

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♛Princess

Prime VIP

• May 8, 2010

• #6

Nice tfs

 

*nAkHrO*

JaTTi NaKhRiYa PaTTi....

• May 8, 2010

• #7

kese de words copy karke k kese nal share karne ta thik aa....
par kese de words,poetries nu apna name dena bilkul galat hai......
je tusi kese diyan poetries,geet nd words copy karde v ho ta os vich apna name na dawo...oh jis de hai os de hi rehn dao....

 

_Gifty_

I am a Joker

• May 8, 2010

• #8

bahut vadia bol si ge ...

i guess its totally wrong .. dujyan de bolan ch apna nau pana ..

 

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$hokeen J@tt

Prime VIP

• May 8, 2010

• #9

kya baat hai 22g....... bhaut sohni poetry si te us to v sohna msg si.......
poetry de word banda dil di kis dungaai to le ke anda isdi kadar kite bina loki apna naa paa dinde ne usde wich....... its totally wrong....... good work..........

 

sweetprincess

ultimate drug

• May 9, 2010

• #10

es gal te aahi keh sakde aa ki jo words touching lagge ya fer inspire karan saanu oo aapan share kar sakde aa per eh keh k nai k eh aapan likhya....eh billkul galat hai ji

 

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userid50966

Well-known member

• May 9, 2010

• #11

galh tan theek hai baii gg nam nahi pauna chahida kissea v poery ya geet ch but jhedea lok geet nea yan lokboliyian ohna ch eh sabh chalda hai , but share karna kissea naal bura nahi , kyunki shre karn nal jisnu nahi ptah os shayri ya geet barrea may came to know abt tht .

 

JUGGY D

BACK TO BASIC

• May 10, 2010

• #12

ਸਤਿ ਸ੍ਰੀ ਅਕਾਲ ਵੀਰ ਜੀ !!
ਸਹੀ ਗੱਲ ਹੈ ਜੇ. ਬੀ. ਯਾਰਾ ਕਿਸੇ ਦੇ ਅਖਰਾ ਵਿਚ "ਨਾ" ਕਦੇ ਆਪਣਾ ਪਾਈਏ ਨਾ !!
ਬਹਤੁ ਵਧਿਆ ਵੀਰ ਜੀ !! ਅੱਗ ਲਾ ਛਾਡਿ ਜੁ !!
ਵੀਰ ਮੈਂ ਸਚ ਦਸਾਂ ਤੇਰੀ ਆਵਾਜ ਮੈਂ ਅੱਜ ਪਹਲੇ ਦਿਨ ਸੁਣੀ ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧਿਆ ਵੀਰ ਨਜਾਰਾ ਹੀ ਆ ਗਿਆ !!
ਮੇਰੇ ਕੋਲ ਮੋਬਾਇਲ ਨੇਟ ਹੋਣ ਕਰਨ ਵੀਡੀਓ ਨਹੀ ਚਲਦਿਆ !!
ਅੱਜ ਮੈਂ ਕਿਸੇ ਦੇ ਘਰ ਗਿਆ ਸੀ ਉਥੇ ਦੇਖੀ ਇਹ ਵੀਡੀਓ !!
ਸਚ ਵਿਚ ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧਿਆ !!
ਬਾਕੀ ਗੱਲ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਦੀ ਓਹ ਤਾ ਬਿਲਕੁਲ ਸਚ ਹੈ !!
ਤੇ ਸਚ ਹਮੇਸਾ ਕੋੜਾ ਹੁੰਦਾ !!
ਚਲੋ ਇਹ ਸੁਨ ਕਿਸੇ ਨੂ ਤਾ ਅਕਲ ਆਉ !!

 

JUGGY D

BACK TO BASIC

• May 10, 2010

• #13

ਸਚ ਵਿਚ ਵੀਰ ਜੀ ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧਿਆ ਲਿਖਿਆ !!

 

Jaswinder Singh Baidwan

Akhran da mureed

Staff member

• May 11, 2010

• #14

jd420 said:

ਸਚ ਵਿਚ ਵੀਰ ਜੀ ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧਿਆ ਲਿਖਿਆ !!

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sir mathe janaab, eh satkar tuhada
reejh tuhadi, pyar tuhada,
JB di tan tyaari si chad jaan di duniya,, par moh gya eh sansaar tuhada

 

miss punjaban

Elite

• May 16, 2010

• #15

tuc ta bhut vade writer a
mein ta tuhade sahmne ek nimani jahi lagdi a
tuhanu kuch v kehna chnga nai lagda par ttuhadi tarriff to bina reha nai janda
ur collection is wonderful..........hav no words
bilkul theek keha ke kise de name di jagah te aapna name nai use karna chahida but jado koi poetry tuhade dil te lagdi a ta tuc usnu aapni life di kahani wang samjde hon ...............is lai lokk eda karde ne .......
take care

 

Jaswinder Singh Baidwan

Akhran da mureed

Staff member

• May 16, 2010

• #16

ameet bajwa said:

tuc ta bhut vade writer a
mein ta tuhade sahmne ek nimani jahi lagdi a
tuhanu kuch v kehna chnga nai lagda par ttuhadi tarriff to bina reha nai janda
ur collection is wonderful..........hav no words
bilkul theek keha ke kise de name di jagah te aapna name nai use karna chahida but jado koi poetry tuhade dil te lagdi a ta tuc usnu aapni life di kahani wang samjde hon ...............is lai lokk eda karde ne .......
take care

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Bewafayi, ajjkal ISHQ da dastoor ho gya,
jehda jinaa pyaara, rabba oh onna door ho gya,
kise ne kitti man aaiyaa, koi majboor ho gya,
Likhe dard dil de, tan JB kamlaa mashoor ho gya

 

Ravivir

VIP

• Jun 8, 2010

• #17

unp te bahut wadia wadia shayari dekhi aa
tusi jis user di shayari parde ho taan tusi imagine karan lag pende ho
ki eh insaan eho jiha hovega
par jado pata lagda 22 eh taan copy paste hi c
taan bada dukh lagda
unp te hi ik VIP USER ne mera likhya geet apne naam te post kita
when i asked about this she just ignored

 

Jaswinder Singh Baidwan

Akhran da mureed

Staff member

• Jun 8, 2010

• #18

Ravivir said:

unp te bahut wadia wadia shayari dekhi aa
tusi jis user di shayari parde ho taan tusi imagine karan lag pende ho
ki eh insaan eho jiha hovega
par jado pata lagda 22 eh taan copy paste hi c
taan bada dukh lagda
unp te hi ik VIP USER ne mera likhya geet apne naam te post kita
when i asked about this she just ignored

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veer eh sab gallan nu dekhde hoye hi, mein eh poem likhi si,
mein tuhada jazbaat samjh sakda haan

 

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ketan chadha

Member

• Jun 9, 2010

• #19

chori kar ka likhna wala liya do line lakh kar koshish mitara sadi pachan chhupan di lakh kar koshish awaz davaon di a ta maalak di waksh hai ek din jaror jamana samna ahh java gya ja ajj nahi sadi kadar pai ek din jaror pa java gai

 

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Palang Tod

VIP

• Jun 14, 2010

• #20

sikho kuj sartaj to