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Just 2 lines..touching!

Dil dard ke samander mein doob gaya, magar in aankhon se roya na gaya.. Tha itna pyaar ess dil mein.. ke uske bagair kabar me bhi soya na gaya......


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Old 10-07-2008
Queensaj
 
Just 2 lines..touching!

Dil dard ke samander mein doob gaya,
magar in aankhon se roya na gaya..
Tha itna pyaar ess dil mein..
ke uske bagair kabar me bhi soya na gaya.

 
Old 10-07-2008
THE GODFATHER
 
Re: Just 2 lines..touching!

made 4 ..

this can have funny conotation too..

 
Old 10-07-2008
Queensaj
 
Re: Just 2 lines..touching!

made for... ask the person who made it

funny? care to explain

 
Old 10-07-2008
THE GODFATHER
 
Re: Just 2 lines..touching!

i meant..i made 4 lines..of the 2 u posted..

"ke uske bagair kabar me bhi soya na gaya."

use ur imagination on this one, i might sound kiddish or out of sync while explaining..

 
Old 11-07-2008
Queensaj
 
Re: Just 2 lines..touching!

lol, thanks for turning around the mood of this thread.. i was trying to be slightly in touch with my emotions..

 
Old 11-07-2008
THE GODFATHER
 
Re: Just 2 lines..touching!

laughing is a kind of emotion too...

 
Old 11-07-2008
Queensaj
 
Re: Just 2 lines..touching!

i knew that was coming, lol. im in touch with those emotions all the time..

 
Old 12-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: Just 2 lines..touching!

nice.


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