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~Jawani~

Jehde yar da yar na kol hove, Ki karna ohne rut mastani nu, 10 yaraan di ungali ch payee jehri, Ki karna ditti oss nishani nu, Jiss de apne sirran .....


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Old 18-04-2007
Preeto
 
~Jawani~

Jehde yar da yar na kol hove,
Ki karna ohne rut mastani nu,

10 yaraan di ungali ch payee jehri,
Ki karna ditti oss nishani nu,
Jiss de apne sirran te lakh peedan,
Ki karna ohne khushi begani nu,
Jehri yar da pyar nahi mod sakdi,
Ki karna yar di oss jawani nu!

 
Old 18-04-2007
Angel_Eyes
 
Re: ~Jawani~

bahut sohna likhya namani penji , so true too.

 
Old 18-04-2007
J_Pannu
 
Re: ~Jawani~

tussi bikul sach likhieya namani

 
Old 18-04-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: ~Jawani~

bhene gud aaa,,,,,,,

 
Old 19-04-2007
Preeto
 
Re: ~Jawani~

Thank you aa ji thuada saryia da bohat bohat per likhan vali main ni..likhyia kise hor ne main tan sirf labke post kita ethe....bas enu post karan da credit dedo..likhan lakhoun vale apan kithe....hehe

 
Old 19-04-2007
jas_sandhu
 
Re: ~Jawani~

vadya ji......gud gud

 
Old 19-04-2007
Gabru_Gulab_Varga
 
Re: ~Jawani~

2 gud mitro! keep it up..........

dj

 
Old 19-04-2007
jaspreetdandiwal
 
Re: ~Jawani~

bai ji bhakwas hai bilkul , apni jindagi sawaro ehna kama vich kujh vi nahi milna ,, jado daangan khark payian ta tuhde cho ik vi nahi labhna

 
Old 20-04-2007
Preeto
 
Re: ~Jawani~

Originally Posted by jaspreetdandiwal View Post
bai ji bhakwas hai bilkul , apni jindagi sawaro ehna kama vich kujh vi nahi milna ,, jado daangan khark payian ta tuhde cho ik vi nahi labhna
o hello.......thuanu ki hogyia??? ........vese main koyi galat kamm ni kardi............te han rabb da naa bhi lenni aa.........bas iko changa kamm aa jo ki most important aa te main nahi kita and that is Guru vale banana...rabb kare oho bhi kirpa shetti hoje...other than that...apan sudare aa..nale what u mean by jad daangan khark payia??? ethe sab kitho aagyia???????????

 
Old 20-04-2007
jimmi
 
Re: ~Jawani~

bahut sohna te vadhiya likhiya jiiiiiiiiiii thnx for sharing

 
Old 20-04-2007
•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤°
 
Re: ~Jawani~

bott wadiya ae

fo sharing


 
Old 21-04-2007
Preeto
 
Re: ~Jawani~

thanks guys...........

 
Old 17-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: ~Jawani~

nice.

 
Old 19-02-2009
Rajat
 
Re: ~Jawani~

tfs..


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