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***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

jalwe aadawan te naazo nazaaqat, raahan wich fir fir dikhaunde kyon ho, dandaan de hethan honth dabaa ke, minha minha muskraunde kyon ho, sutde ho teer zamaane de utte, launde .....


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Old 21-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***





jalwe aadawan te naazo nazaaqat, raahan wich fir fir dikhaunde kyon ho,
dandaan de hethan honth dabaa ke,
minha minha muskraunde kyon ho,
sutde ho teer zamaane de utte, launde ho tohmat zamaane de utte,
manniya ki duniya zaalim badi hai,
khud v ta shurriyan chalaunde kyon ho,

moh nal naina de bhar ke paimaane, keete ne lakhan hazaaran deewane,
masti ch aa ke koyee kinjh na jhoome,
bhar bhar ke jaam pilaunde kyon ho,
patli kammar jad maare hullaare, dillan de andar maghde angiyaare,
je kar tussan to bujhaayee nahi jaandi,
la la ke teehl jalaunde kyon ho,

pareshaan hoyee hai saari lokayee, duniya de andar mach gayee duhayee,
bijli de waangar painda hai jhatka,
chehre te zulfaan giraunde kyon ho,
kad tak saanu sataunde rahoge, kad tak palkaan jhukaunde rahoge,
jekar nahi hai tuhadi koyee marzi,
naina de baan chalaunde kyon ho,,

jad tak rahegi reshmi, sade dil de andar, seene ch saade wajjange khanjjar,
kinjh keh daiye, mashooqa nu jaa ke,
injh sajj dhajj ke roj aaunde kyon ho,,,

 
Old 21-06-2007
Swashbuckling
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

as always bahut vadiya .......oh kehnde aa na bayee
PERFECTION NU IMPROVE KARNA MUSHKIL HUNDA
eh gall thode te poori taran laagu hundi aa

 
Old 21-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

thnxxxxxxxxxxxx sukhbir singh ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,enni jada siftaan na karo,, mein uddan lag jaandi aaa, siftaan suun ke,,,, thalle diggi te satt lagge gi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,hahahaha

 
Old 21-06-2007
Swashbuckling
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

TAAN KI HO GEYA, PERFECTION TON UPPAR UDDAN DI KOSHISH KARDE HOYE JE DIGG V PAYE TAAN V PERFECTION TE HI DIGGONGE ........... HAHAHAHAH

 
Old 21-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

hahhahahahahaha,,, interesting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thnxxx dear

 
Old 21-06-2007
jas_sandhu
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

nice one reshu ji..

 
Old 21-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

Ssa Apninder ji.......Bhut vadiya....

Eh gall taan hai ki...........

Jo Naina de teeran da pateya.....
Us nu thaan koi ni lab di jag uthe.......


Jihne yaar de naina chu peeti......
ohnu hor nasaa ki hona........


 
Old 21-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

thnxxxxxxx jas sandhu dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 21-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

haha, ik hor jass,,,,,,,,,,,thnxxx g

 
Old 24-06-2007
killerd
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

moh nal naina de bhar ke paimaane, keete ne lakhan hazaaran deewane,
masti ch aa ke koyee kinjh na jhoome,
bhar bhar ke jaam pilaunde kyon ho,
patli kammar jad maare hullaare, dillan de andar maghde angiyaare,
je kar tussan to bujhaayee nahi jaandi,
la la ke teehl jalaunde kyon ho

bahut wadia g

 
Old 24-06-2007
killerd
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

jad tak rahegi reshmi, sade dil de andar, seene ch saade wajjange khanjjar

................oye hoye.


par aa celina de photo kyon layi hai



 
Old 24-06-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

kamal kiti payi aa shayara ne unp te ....bahut sohna likheya aa reshu

 
Old 24-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

par aa celina de photo kyon layi hai


]chandan dear ji sabh to pehlaan tuhada thnxxxxxxxxx compliments da,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, uss to baad,,,, shiry 2 tarah kiti jaandi aa,,,,,,,,,, silent, chere ch jo hundi aa,,, te alfaazan naal likh ke,, CALINA JI DA CHEHRA DEKHO,, tuhanu meri ih sari nazam disse gi,,,,,,,,,,,,
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pareshaan hoyee hai saari lokayee, duniya de andar mach gayee duhayee,
bijli de waangar painda hai jhatka,

chehre te zulfaan giraunde kyon ho,



shiry ch zaroori hunda aa, ki 2 aarth naal samjhayee jayeee,,,,

 
Old 24-06-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

thnxxxxxxxxxx a lot KPW didi ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 24-06-2007
Johal
 
Re: ***jalwe-aadaawan te naazo-nazaaqat***

wah wah wah kamal kite paii haiiii..

bhaut wadiya .


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