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>> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

kayi waar main sochiya zindagi vich ki hai karna jinne marji kar lao kam ik din tan hai mitra marna rab ne diti sanu zindagi ohda v naam yaad rakhna .....


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Old 10-05-2007
nav-3
 
>> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

kayi waar main sochiya
zindagi vich ki hai karna
jinne marji kar lao kam
ik din tan hai mitra marna
rab ne diti sanu zindagi
ohda v naam yaad rakhna
maa te pio nu na bhul jaiyo
jinna ne kita pyaar makhna
menu taras aunda ohna te
jehde gaye apne mape bhul
ik din ohne ne v jana rul
mape ki nahi karde sade lai
garmi sardi sab jhalde sade lai
bache hunde wadde jande bahar
jande bhul apna ghar baar
eh na bhulio mere mitro
koi hale v karda tuhanu othe yaad
ohna dab ditta dukhan da gala
sada kita ohna sada bhala
hun tusi aap hi ho samajhdaar
apni zindagi hai ohne di karzdaar
kade na bhulio apne maape yaaro
ehi hai tuhade is nimane ni ardass


 
Old 10-05-2007
SHauKeeN GaBRu
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

good koshish.....yeay

 
Old 10-05-2007
❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

bohat vadiaaaaaaaaa navuuuuuuuu ...........

 
Old 10-05-2007
beautiful
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

soooo true for brown ppl.




 
Old 10-05-2007
jattpunjabi
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

good 1 veer.....par thodi dhendi kala lagdi 22 di........chardhi kala ch rea karo

 
Old 14-05-2007
Gabru_Gulab_Varga
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

Originally Posted by nav-3 View Post
kayi waar main sochiya

zindagi vich ki hai karna
jinne marji kar lao kam
ik din tan hai mitra marna
rab ne diti sanu zindagi
ohda v naam yaad rakhna
maa te pio nu na bhul jaiyo
jinna ne kita pyaar makhna
menu taras aunda ohna te
jehde gaye apne mape bhul
ik din ohne ne v jana rul
mape ki nahi karde sade lai
garmi sardi sab jhalde sade lai
bache hunde wadde jande bahar
jande bhul apna ghar baar
eh na bhulio mere mitro
koi hale v karda tuhanu othe yaad
ohna dab ditta dukhan da gala
sada kita ohna sada bhala
hun tusi aap hi ho samajhdaar
apni zindagi hai ohne di karzdaar
kade na bhulio apne maape yaaro
ehi hai tuhade is nimane ni ardass
Vah oye shera! Ki sifat karan, kuch patta nahi lagda. te nahi alfaaz labh rehe ne. Its 2 damn solid 22! Keep it up........

DJ


 
Old 14-05-2007
nav-3
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

Originally Posted by DangerouslyJatt View Post
Vah oye shera! Ki sifat karan, kuch patta nahi lagda. te nahi alfaaz labh rehe ne. Its 2 damn solid 22! Keep it up........

DJ

thnaku hai DJ veer ,thnx for ur appreciation ,tuhade sadke hi hor poems likhunga

 
Old 14-05-2007
Gabru_Gulab_Varga
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

thnx kadha mitra? sanu intezaar rehe ga tere agle piece da...

 
Old 14-05-2007
nav-3
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

Originally Posted by DangerouslyJatt View Post
thnx kadha mitra? sanu intezaar rehe ga tere agle piece da...
hanji jarur bas huni wehla hoiya aahi kam karna hun tan

 
Old 14-05-2007
karan4web
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

kya baat hai nav bhai..gaah hi pai jane o...

 
Old 14-05-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

kaim hai 22 chak te fatte.......

 
Old 14-05-2007
SherDil™
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

ik koshish fer hai kiti
dasso copy kitho kiti

 
Old 14-05-2007
Loveye
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

gud wrk....................

 
Old 14-05-2007
nav-3
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

Originally Posted by SherDil View Post
ik koshish fer hai kiti
dasso copy kitho kiti
kiton copy ni kita

 
Old 15-05-2007
MitaAnarkali
 
Re: >> ik koshish fer kiti jarur dekhiyo <<

luved this...bravo Nav : rose


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