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hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

dosto, CHETAN mera ik khiyali yaani imaginary dost hai, jo mere suphnia ch maitho vichad giya,, uss di yaad ch is kavita likhi,, uddo jado mera jaan da wela aa .....


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Old 03-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

dosto, CHETAN mera ik khiyali yaani imaginary dost hai, jo mere suphnia ch maitho vichad giya,, uss di yaad ch is kavita likhi,, uddo jado mera jaan da wela aa giya,,,plz sari pahdio ji,,,,,many thnxxxxxx




hun aa mil piyaria velda-e, laggi saanj vichode di taar chetan,
hosi jiondiyan fer na mail tera, jaandi wakhat aa de deedar chetan,

lagga teer firaak da wich seene, nikkal paar giya avaasaar chetan,
yamraaj dekh mere ser aan khalla, dainda lain na palak karaar chetan,

mud mud deh uthal puthal hoyee, liya jhamb andheri ne maar chetan,
naale gadda latha kisse kehar da, khaave bijli da chamkaar chetan,
musse waang aayee yar raat kali, dhundkaar te abar gubaar chetan,
meri jaan azaab de mukh aayee, maula samajh liya menu gunehgaar chetan,

lai oye yar labh utte jaan aayee, hun deed taa de ik vaar chetan,
baaz azal de tez taraar khooni, kita menu wich palkaar shikaar chetan,
lamme vehan payee aa teri reshmi oye, hun aa lai aagosh ik vaar chetan,
meri jaan tarsandadi laye tarle, mil jaa oye piyaria yar chetan,

lakh kook aarshon langh paar gaiyan, diti daad na rab kahaar chetan,
kade v rajj na dekhiya mukh tera, aan banni mein yar lachaar chetan,
mere karam sawalade dhuron naahi, menu diti bhaag naseeb ne haar chetan,
aap aa ke mukh vikhaa sohna, mardi vaar tera karaan shukar gujar chetan,

moyee hoyee v payee pukar sa gi, keekur bhulaangi na tera pyar chetan,
payee dhad ajj gaib di taad ke te, raahon luttiya-e mere yar chetan,
apninder nu yar piyaria tu laa shati, gamkhaar mere dildaar chetan,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 03-05-2007
jimmi
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

Originally Posted by reshmi_garrare_wali View Post
dosto, CHETAN mera ik khiyali yaani imaginary dost hai, jo mere suphnia ch maitho vichad giya,, uss di yaad ch is kavita likhi,, uddo jado mera jaan da wela aa giya,,,plz sari pahdio ji,,,,,many thnxxxxxx




hun aa mil piyaria velda-e, laggi saanj vichode di taar chetan,
hosi jiondiyan fer na mail tera, jaandi wakhat aa de deedar chetan,
lagga teer firaak da wich seene, nikkal paar giya avaasaar chetan,
yamraaj dekh mere ser aan khalla, dainda lain na palak karaar chetan,

mud mud deh uthal puthal hoyee, liya jhamb andheri ne maar chetan,
naale gadda latha kisse kehar da, khaave bijli da chamkaar chetan,
musse waang aayee yar raat kali, dhundkaar te abar gubaar chetan,
meri jaan azaab de mukh aayee, maula samajh liya menu gunehgaar chetan,

lai oye yar labh utte jaan aayee, hun deed taa de ik vaar chetan,
baaz azal de tez taraar khooni, kita menu wich palkaar shikaar chetan,
lamme vehan payee aa teri reshmi oye, hun aa lai aagosh ik vaar chetan,
meri jaan tarsandadi laye tarle, mil jaa oye piyaria yar chetan,

lakh kook aarshon langh paar gaiyan, diti daad na rab kahaar chetan,
kade v rajj na dekhiya mukh tera, aan banni mein yar lachaar chetan,
mere karam sawalade dhuron naahi, menu diti bhaag naseeb ne haar chetan,
aap aa ke mukh vikhaa sohna, mardi vaar tera karaan shukar gujar chetan,

moyee hoyee v payee pukar sa gi, keekur bhulaangi na tera pyar chetan,
payee dhad ajj gaib di taad ke te, raahon luttiya-e mere yar chetan,
apninder nu yar piyaria tu laa shati, gamkhaar mere dildaar chetan,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
wah ji wah chak ditte phatte tussi te .
very nice thnx

 
Old 03-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

Originally Posted by jimmi View Post
wah ji wah chak ditte phatte tussi te .
very nice thnx
thnxx again jimmi ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 04-05-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

wahh...sohna likheya...n do you believe in imaginary dost

 
Old 04-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

Originally Posted by kudi_patole_wargi View Post
wahh...sohna likheya...n do you believe in imaginary dost
ssa kudi ji, thnx 4 your response,,, and the answer to your question is my this imaginary dost looked so real to me, thats why i won't let him go, he remains in my thoughts,

as my nazam has it, he didn't leave me at all, i gave him a reason to disown me,,, he is a perfact gentleman, i mistreated him, so he stopped coming into my dreams again,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 08-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
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Old 11-05-2007
Niki_Grewal
 
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hey.........for a sec....i thot i m reading some poem from ny punjabi/urdu professional poet of 70s or 80s....how do u knw urdu tht well :O.........koooooooollllll.....u r definitely not less than any pro.....

 
Old 11-05-2007
arpita
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

nice sis g....keep it up

 
Old 11-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

Originally Posted by Niki_Grewal View Post
hey.........for a sec....i thot i m reading some poem from ny punjabi/urdu professional poet of 70s or 80s....how do u knw urdu tht well :O.........koooooooollllll.....u r definitely not less than any pro.....
hahahahaahahha,,,, thnx dear, i'll take it as a compliment,,, A PRO POET OF 70s and 80s,,,,THNX FOR THAT,,, for calling me young,,,,,,just so you know dear,, i will be 93 years young on june 22nd,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,remember 2 wish me happy birthday dear

 
Old 11-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

Originally Posted by arpita View Post
nice sis g....keep it up
thnxxx alot dearest,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 
Old 24-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

Originally Posted by Niki_Grewal View Post
hey.........for a sec....i thot i m reading some poem from ny punjabi/urdu professional poet of 70s or 80s....how do u knw urdu tht well :O.........koooooooollllll.....u r definitely not less than any pro.....
I'M A LITTLE 1

 
Old 24-05-2007
Kav
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

Very good RM.................... bahut achha likheya hai............. ................ bahut sohne words ditte hai tuseen aapni feelings noo......................

 
Old 24-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

Originally Posted by Kav View Post
Very good RM.................... bahut achha likheya hai............. ................ bahut sohne words ditte hai tuseen aapni feelings noo......................
thnx dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,suphne ch milli c ih feelings,, suphne kade v sakaar ni hunde

 
Old 24-05-2007
Kav
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

Originally Posted by reshmi_mutiyar View Post
thnx dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,suphne ch milli c ih feelings,, suphne kade v sakaar ni hunde

Those who dare to dream, make them come true..............
rab bhali karain.....................

 
Old 24-05-2007
reshmi_mutiyar
 
Re: hye oye yaar vichod ke suut ditta

Originally Posted by Kav View Post
Those who dare to dream, make them come true..............
rab bhali karain.....................
thnxxxxxxx 4 your wish dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


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