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'*Heer ranjhe di......*'

eh meri pehli poem aa heer te ranjhey de pyaar bare...te ohna loka de pyaar bare jina di koi arz nai sunda..na koi ohna da apna te na rabb.... sare .....


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Old 19-04-2008
sohni_sunakhi_naar
 
Arrow '*Heer ranjhe di......*'

eh meri pehli poem aa heer te ranjhey de pyaar bare...te ohna loka de pyaar bare jina di koi arz nai sunda..na koi ohna da apna te na rabb....

sare apni reply karo te dasso eh kina ku sahi aa te mai sahi likheya ki nai...


kahani suni c mai v ik.....
ik heer te ranjhe di......
lakh minta kar k v.....
na hoi heer ranjhe di......


kaisa kehr dhaya ve rabba....
roi ankh ik ranjhe di......
heer c us di jaan ve rabba...
kad lai tu jaan ranjhe di.....


oh din chandra kehda c....
jad vichhdi heer c ranjhe di....
kis zalm ne eh sulam kamaya....
kio tuti pyaar wali dor ranjhe di....


roi kio na ankh rabba tairi....
kio heer ranjhe di roi ve....
kar kar minta mangi c.....
ranjhe di heer to kio khoi ve....


aaj vi koi rohnda e rabba....
kise ranjhe di heer ve....
paa de palle ranjhe nu.....
aj kardi minta heer ve....

 
Old 19-04-2008
SHauKeeN GaBRu
 
Re: ****......Heer ranjhe di......****

hmmmmmmmmmm...ae v sohna likheya

 
Old 19-04-2008
sohni_sunakhi_naar
 
Re: ****......Heer ranjhe di......****

Originally Posted by SHauKeeN GaBRu View Post
hmmmmmmmmmm...ae v sohna likheya
shukriya sp ji....

 
Old 19-04-2008
yugi
 
Re: '*Heer ranjhe di......*'

bohat khoob tfs

 
Old 19-04-2008
sohni_sunakhi_naar
 
Re: '*Heer ranjhe di......*'

Originally Posted by yugi View Post
bohat khoob tfs
shukriya yugi ji...

 
Old 19-04-2008
HoneY
 
Re: '*Heer ranjhe di......*'

bahut vadhiya

 
Old 20-04-2008
V € € R
 
Re: '*Heer ranjhe di......*'

Bahot hi vadiyaa likheya sohni_sunakhi_naar ji tussi.........
te kuch mera khayal bhi par lavo.......


Leyo ji ik khyaal jo ik heer apne raanjhe di judai wich baithi ohndi judai vich pareshaan te duniya di rasma to mazboor hoke enz sochdi hai..vivash he je kuch nahi kar sakdi enna ki apne khayaala nu v enz hi vahandi he hanzua vich enz hi..jo twadi nazer hai..ohndi haalat paish kiti hai..

Kade - kade mainu lagda je..
je tu mainu khilona samajhda hai..

kade -kade mainu lagda he..
je tainu meri koi lor (jarurat) koini..

kyu me aa gayi si teri galla vich..
kyu me dil tere te haar baithi..

kyu mainu lagya k tu sahara banega..
kyu main patthhra naal dil laga baithi..

jado v tu magroor honda hai..
tainu ki pata..dil zar-zar ronda hai..

jado vi teri chaah kardi ha.n
tu do naava vich vandya(devided) hoya lagda hai..

kade sochdi ha.n tenu chhad deva..
dardi ha.n tere bagair saa na nikal jaave..

tere khayala vich din-o-rat dubi rehndi ha.n
dardi ha.n kithe paagal na ho jaavaa.

badi door tere naal main nikal chali..
hun picchho mur dekhya nahi jaunda..

teri mainu inni aadat ho gayi je..
tere bagair jeen da sochya nahi janda..

 
Old 21-04-2008
P-a-r-d-e-s-i
 
Re: '*Heer ranjhe di......*'

bohut hi badiya likhya tusiiii.....

 
Old 21-04-2008
smilly
 
Re: '*Heer ranjhe di......*'

vadiyaa likhaya dear.......



Pyaar paan layi mitro,main apna app gavaya...
Duniyaan de main rabb nu bulaya, Jadon Yaar nu rabb banaya......

 
Old 08-02-2009
amanNBN
 
Re: '*Heer ranjhe di......*'

nice....tfs....

 
Old 08-02-2009
Rajat
 
Re: '*Heer ranjhe di......*'

tfs...

 
Old 08-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: '*Heer ranjhe di......*'

nice.


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