'*Heer ranjhe di......*'

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sohni_sunakhi_naar

Member

• Apr 19, 2008

• #1

eh meri pehli poem aa heer te ranjhey de pyaar bare...te ohna loka de pyaar bare jina di koi arz nai sunda..na koi ohna da apna te na rabb....​

sare apni reply karo te dasso eh kina ku sahi aa te mai sahi likheya ki nai...​

kahani suni c mai v ik.....
ik heer te ranjhe di......
lakh minta kar k v.....
na hoi heer ranjhe di......​

kaisa kehr dhaya ve rabba....
roi ankh ik ranjhe di......
heer c us di jaan ve rabba...
kad lai tu jaan ranjhe di.....​

oh din chandra kehda c....
jad vichhdi heer c ranjhe di....
kis zalm ne eh sulam kamaya....
kio tuti pyaar wali dor ranjhe di....​

roi kio na ankh rabba tairi....
kio heer ranjhe di roi ve....
kar kar minta mangi c.....
ranjhe di heer to kio khoi ve....​

aaj vi koi rohnda e rabba....
kise ranjhe di heer ve....
paa de palle ranjhe nu.....
aj kardi minta heer ve....​

 

SHauKeeN GaBRu

Chardi Kala

• Apr 19, 2008

• #2

Re: ****......Heer ranjhe di......****

hmmmmmmmmmm...ae v sohna likheya

 

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sohni_sunakhi_naar

Member

• Apr 19, 2008

• #3

Re: ****......Heer ranjhe di......****

SHauKeeN GaBRu said:

hmmmmmmmmmm...ae v sohna likheya

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shukriya sp ji....

 

yugi

Elite

• Apr 19, 2008

• #4

bohat khoob tfs

 

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sohni_sunakhi_naar

Member

• Apr 19, 2008

• #5

yugi said:

bohat khoob tfs

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shukriya yugi ji...

 

HoneY

MaaPeya Da LaaDLa

• Apr 19, 2008

• #6

bahut vadhiya

 

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~Badmassha Vich Shareef~

• Apr 20, 2008

• #7

Bahot hi vadiyaa likheya sohni_sunakhi_naar ji tussi.........
te kuch mera khayal bhi par lavo.......
https://www.unp.me/members/sohni_sunakhi_naar/
Leyo ji ik khyaal jo ik heer apne raanjhe di judai wich baithi ohndi judai vich pareshaan te duniya di rasma to mazboor hoke enz sochdi hai..vivash he je kuch nahi kar sakdi enna ki apne khayaala nu v enz hi vahandi he hanzua vich enz hi..jo twadi nazer hai..ohndi haalat paish kiti hai..

Kade - kade mainu lagda je..
je tu mainu khilona samajhda hai..

kade -kade mainu lagda he..
je tainu meri koi lor (jarurat) koini..

kyu me aa gayi si teri galla vich..
kyu me dil tere te haar baithi..

kyu mainu lagya k tu sahara banega..
kyu main patthhra naal dil laga baithi..

jado v tu magroor honda hai..
tainu ki pata..dil zar-zar ronda hai..

jado vi teri chaah kardi ha.n
tu do naava vich vandya(devided) hoya lagda hai..

kade sochdi ha.n tenu chhad deva..
dardi ha.n tere bagair saa na nikal jaave..

tere khayala vich din-o-rat dubi rehndi ha.n
dardi ha.n kithe paagal na ho jaavaa.

badi door tere naal main nikal chali..
hun picchho mur dekhya nahi jaunda..

teri mainu inni aadat ho gayi je..
tere bagair jeen da sochya nahi janda..

 

P-a-r-d-e-s-i

Ranja

• Apr 21, 2008

• #8

bohut hi badiya likhya tusiiii.....

 

smilly

VIP

• Apr 21, 2008

• #9

vadiyaa likhaya dear.......



Pyaar paan layi mitro,main apna app gavaya...
Duniyaan de main rabb nu bulaya, Jadon Yaar nu rabb banaya......

 

amanNBN

VIP

• Feb 8, 2009

• #10

nice....tfs....

 

Rajat

Prime VIP

• Feb 8, 2009

• #11

tfs...

 

jaggi633725

***********

• Feb 8, 2009

• #12

nice.