haseyaa ....

smilly

VIP

• Oct 24, 2008

• #1

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kade kuj gava ke hasyaa,
kade kuj paa ke hasyaa,
eh meri kismat hai yaroo,
Ki main yaraan nu gal la ke hasyaa...


Duniyaa vich rang bade ne ,
Te main kaal rang pa ke haseyaa,
loki labde yaar gavacheyaa nu,
te main labe yaar gava ke hasyaa....


Dard-e-dil vi hun nasoor hoya,
Te main dardan nu gal la ke hasyaa,
Chad khusiyaa rangli duniyaa diyaan,
main shamshaan vich ghar pa ke hasyaa...


Akhaan chon hanju na muke kade,
main hanjuaan nu gal la ke hasya,
kabraan te supneyaa di baitha aaj 'jas'
Pher tute supneyaa nu gal la ke haseyaa ...

 

amanwadhwa

Prime VIP

• Oct 24, 2008

• #2

wah ji wah maza aa gaya.really good.

 

smilly

VIP

• Oct 24, 2008

• #3

amanwadhwa1986 said:

wah ji wah maza aa gaya.really good.

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thanx dear..

 

Gentleboy

The Punjabi Rocker

• Oct 24, 2008

• #4

Akhaan chon hanju na muke kade,
main hanjuaan nu gal la ke hasya..

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Very Nyc g..
tfs

 

V

V € € R

~Badmassha Vich Shareef~

• Oct 24, 2008

• #5

bahot vadiyaa 22 ji..............

 

Royal_Jatti

Elite

• Oct 25, 2008

• #6

bahut hi vadia....

 

harrykool

VIP

• Oct 26, 2008

• #7

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grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Oct 27, 2008

• #8

Jas veere SSA...

Barhe dina baad aaye ho dear... kithe rehnde ho...

aw... bakamaal likhea hai as always.. par ena sad na likhea karo yaar... khush reha karo...

 

smilly

VIP

• Oct 27, 2008

• #9

Gentleboy said:

Very Nyc g..
tfs

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thanx dear

 

smilly

VIP

• Oct 27, 2008

• #10

veer said:

bahot vadiyaa 22 ji..............

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thanx dear

 

smilly

VIP

• Oct 27, 2008

• #11

royal jatti said:

bahut hi vadia....

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thanx dear..

 

smilly

VIP

• Oct 27, 2008

• #12

harrykool said:

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thanx dear

 

smilly

VIP

• Oct 27, 2008

• #13

grewalsandy said:

Jas veere SSA...

Barhe dina baad aaye ho dear... kithe rehnde ho...

aw... bakamaal likhea hai as always.. par ena sad na likhea karo yaar... khush reha karo...

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Ssa dear , Uljeyaa si zindagi diyaan uljhna vich... tusi daso hor hi haal hai...

thanx dear... par ki kariye veer koshish taan karda haan ki sad na likhaan par kalam likh hi jandi hai eh taan chand lines he ne actually eh main kafi vadi likhi si , pher sochay sub bor ho jaan ge...

 

dev2123

Member

• Oct 27, 2008

• #14

nahi veer bht hi vadiya likhi hai meri ehi benti hai ki tusi puri kavita likho.. bht hi acha lageya tuhadi kavita padh ke thanksss 4 sharing with us...

 

Royal_Punjaban

»»K@mli!««

• Oct 27, 2008

• #15

bhout vadiya..........

 

sunny240

Elite

• Oct 28, 2008

• #16

bahut wadyiea jas veer hamesha wang,,,,,,,
khush raho hamesha.........

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Oct 29, 2008

• #17

Jas veere puri poem likho yaar... I realy want to read puri....

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 11, 2008

• #18

Royal_Punjaban said:

bhout vadiya..........

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thanx dear

 

smilly

VIP

• Nov 11, 2008

• #19

dev2123 said:

nahi veer bht hi vadiya likhi hai meri ehi benti hai ki tusi puri kavita likho.. bht hi acha lageya tuhadi kavita padh ke thanksss 4 sharing with us...

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thanx dear enna maan den layi...

 

amanNBN

VIP

• Jan 14, 2009

• #20

nice ......tfs...