hasana khedna sub ruk jaana

smilly

VIP
Safar zindagi da jadon muk jaana,
Hasana khedna sub ruk jaana,
Chaar bandeyaan ne chuk ke fuk aana...
Jadon saah mera ruk jaana...........

Fer labna sub ne mainu is jag vich...
Jadon main rabb di bukal vich luk jaan..
Ethe saahan da saara khed yaaro..
Ki pataa saahan ne kadon muk jaana.. :tear

Aaj hanju ne inhaan akhaan vich..
Kal hanjuaan ne vi suk jaan..
Pher milana ni mela jag valaa..
Jadon saahan mereyaan ne rok jaana..... :((

Mera hasana khedna sub ruk jaana..
Jadoon safar zindagi da muk jaana..

:n
 

smilly

VIP
thuda kee g
ik nah ik din saaria da ruk jana:yes

ssa ji.........
Eh taan gal 100 ane sach hai dear...
Par kuj mere varge vi ne ethe vi dukh hi bogde ne ....
te changi bhali zindagi nu dukhaan de saagar vich bassi rakhde ne...

Ese layi likha ..... Saah taan ruk jaan jas.... Pher has khed lai...
 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy
ssa ji.........
Eh taan gal 100 ane sach hai dear...
Par kuj mere varge vi ne ethe vi dukh hi bogde ne ....
te changi bhali zindagi nu dukhaan de saagar vich bassi rakhde ne...

Ese layi likha ..... Saah taan ruk jaan jas.... Pher has khed lai...
avve nahi sochi da hunda
oops


jina time aa haso khedo
kal ho nah ho:cutie
 

smilly

VIP
avve nahi sochi da hunda
oops


jina time aa haso khedo
kal ho nah ho:cutie

Dear roj sochda haan par amal ni kar paunda...

Melaa duniyaa da.. Ethe baar baar ni ayuna..

par shaam hote hi chiragon ko bujaa deta hon..
Pata ni kyon phir ek aag sinne mein jala leta hon..
Kab khatam honge ye ranjo gam mere...
Dard ko hi yaaro dava main bana leta hoon....
 

smilly

VIP
VERRY NICE JASS BROTHER
BAHUT VADIA
MAIN VI YAAR KOI VI NAZM LIKHAN LAGDA TAAN MAUT DA JIKAR JARUR HO JANDA

thanx dear .....

Ravi veer mera vi thuvade vaal hi haal hai..Pata ni lag reha ki har nazam da anth gum ...dard ... ya maut te hi khun honda hai... Jina inha ton door jana chahunda haan unaa hi jayaada inha vich painda janda hai......

apna aap taan hun
EK SUKHE DARKHAT VARGA LAGANA LAG PEYAA HAI..
JIS DE AAS PAAS BAS RAIT HAI.... TE GUMAAN TE PARCHAVEIN NE...

KOI HAL NI ..... SIRF JADO RAAB VAL DHAYAAN REHNDA HAI TAAN THOODA CHANGA LAGDA HAI.......
 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN
very nice jass dear,,,,,,,,,,thnx for this kavita,,,,,,,,,,

assin har roj kehnde aa,,,,, "SAT SIRI AKAAL",,,,,,,,,,,,LORD OF DEATH IS TRUE,,,,,,,,sirf maut da baadshah sach hai,, baki sabh jhooth
 

smilly

VIP
thanx dear .....

Ravi veer mera vi thuvade vaal hi haal hai..Pata ni lag reha ki har nazam da anth gum ...dard ... ya maut te hi khun honda hai... Jina inha ton door jana chahunda haan unaa hi jayaada inha vich painda janda hai......

apna aap taan hun
EK SUKHE DARKHAT VARGA LAGANA LAG PEYAA HAI..
JIS DE AAS PAAS BAS RAIT HAI.... TE GUMAAN TE PARCHAVEIN NE...

KOI HAL NI ..... SIRF JADO RAAB VAL DHAYAAN REHNDA HAI TAAN THOODA CHANGA LAGDA HAI.......
RAVI VEER AISA KHUN HAI PATA NI .....
 

smilly

VIP
very nice jass dear,,,,,,,,,,thnx for this kavita,,,,,,,,,,

assin har roj kehnde aa,,,,, "SAT SIRI AKAAL",,,,,,,,,,,,LORD OF DEATH IS TRUE,,,,,,,,sirf maut da baadshahsach hai,, baki sabh jhooth

SSA DEAR.........
THANX,,,, TUSIN SACH KEHA...

LORD OF DEATH IS TRUE.......

JEENA JHUTH TE MARNA SACH......
 

smilly

VIP
Dear roj sochda haan par amal ni kar paunda...

Melaa duniyaa da.. Ethe baar baar ni ayuna..

par shaam hote hi chiragon ko bujaa deta hon..
Pata ni kyon phir ek aag sinne mein jala leta hon..
Kab khatam honge ye ranjo gam mere...
Dard ko hi yaaro dava main bana leta hoon....

POSTIVE TE HAAN ...... ROJ CHANGE DIN DE AAUN DA INTEZAAR TAAN KARDA HAAN.....:baby :baby
 
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