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Unp de Dostaan layi shiv kumar batalvi ji di behtarin gazal ....... 'de ja meri qalam nu ik hor haadsaa' Aj pher dil gareeb Ik paaNda hae vaasta, De ja .....


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Old 31-08-2007
smilly
 
gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

Unp de Dostaan layi shiv kumar batalvi ji di behtarin gazal .......

'de ja meri qalam nu ik hor haadsaa'



Aj pher dil gareeb Ik paaNda hae vaasta,
De ja meri kalam nu Ik hor haadisa.


Muddat hoii hae dard da Koi jaam peeteyaaN,
PeeRaaN ‘ch haNju ghol ke,De ja do aatasha.


Kaagaz di kori reejh hae Chup chaap vekhdi,
ShabdaaN de thal ‘ch bhaTakda GeetaaN da kaafila.


TurnaaN maeN chaahuNda Per 'ch kaNDe di lae ke peeR,
Dukh toN kabar da dosta Jinna vi faasala.


Aa bahuR Shiv nu peeR vi Hae kaND de chali,
Rakhi si jihdi oas ne Mudat toN daashtaa.
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Old 31-08-2007
simar
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

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Old 31-08-2007
shy
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

Shiv kumar batalvi da taan koi jawaab ni.......

 
Old 31-08-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

koi doosra nahi jamna shiv varga dobara......

 
Old 01-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

Originally Posted by simar View Post
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thanx simar dear.......

Say thanx to shiv kumar batalvi jinah enha sohna likhaya

 
Old 01-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

Originally Posted by shy View Post
Shiv kumar batalvi da taan koi jawaab ni.......
thanx dear.....

Unha da vaake hi jawab ni....

 
Old 01-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

Originally Posted by Konvicted_Jatt View Post
koi doosra nahi jamna shiv varga dobara......
Sahi keha ronny veer enna dard koi ni likh sakda ...... Te ek ek akhar bolda hai shiv da......

Say thanx to shiv kumar batalvi .....

 
Old 03-09-2007
jimmi
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

bahut hi sachi te acchi nazm thnx for sharing

 
Old 07-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

Ek Ek Akhar piroya hai shiv ne taan eni khoobsurati hai enha diyaa
gazaalan vich.......

 
Old 09-09-2007
jimmi
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

bahut hi vadhiya jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii . thnx for sharing .

 
Old 11-09-2007
smilly
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

Originally Posted by jimmi View Post
bahut hi vadhiya jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii . thnx for sharing .
Haanji thanx taan shiv da jisne enna vadiyaa likhaya ......

 
Old 16-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: gazal (Shiv kumar batalvi)

nice.


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