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JAD JAD MAINU OHDI YAAD AUNDI E AKHIYAAN CH ASHQ HAZAAR LIYAAUNDI E KARDA E DIL MERA TARLE HAZAAR, SISAK SISAK MERI JAAN JAUNDI E SAJAYE SI JO SAPNE TU .....


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Old 16-08-2007
roop@punjaban
 
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JAD JAD MAINU OHDI YAAD AUNDI E
AKHIYAAN CH ASHQ HAZAAR LIYAAUNDI E
KARDA E DIL MERA TARLE HAZAAR,
SISAK SISAK MERI JAAN JAUNDI E

SAJAYE SI JO SAPNE TU AKHIYAAN DE VICH
ROOP AJ OHNA NU MITAAYI JAUNDI E
RONA SI MAIN BHULLI TAINU MILAN TO BAAD,
AJJ TERI BEWAFAI HI RUVAAYI JAUNDI E

KEETA KYUN TU INJ ZARA MAINU VI DASS
NAZAR-ANDAAZGI DE ROOP JAWAAB CHAUNDI E
KHELKE MERE NAAL MERE DIL NU JUDA KARTA
KEHDI MAJBOORI EH JUDAAI PAYI JAUNDI E

KHAADI SI TU KASAMM HAR RAAH TE NAAL CHALLAN DI
PHIR KYUN ROOP HAR MOD TE HUN KALLEYAAN NAZAR AUNDI E
DO GALLAAN TERIYAAN THAND PA JAUNDIYAA SI SEENE VICH
AJJ BOONDA EH BARSAAT DIYAN VI AGG LAYI JAUNDI E

KOSHISHA KARDI HAAN LAKH TAINU BHULLAN DIYAAN
HAR SHAI VICH NAZAR TERI HI PARCHAAYI AUNDI E
MASTAK HI NAHI SI LIKHAYA CHANGA TE DOSH KIS NU DENDI
MERI TE KISMAT HI MAINU KHED KHIDAAYI JAUNDI......E..............

 
Old 16-08-2007
SherDil™
 
Re: Do Gallaan

bahut nice likhiya aa ji
tuhadi pic laggi aa avi ch sachhi roop @ punjaban aa

 
Old 16-08-2007
roop@punjaban
 
Re: Do Gallaan

ssa sherdil ji
thnks ji
jo tusi enna maan basheya mainu

 
Old 16-08-2007
smilly
 
Re: Do Gallaan

Dear ki kahan eh taan bhut vadiyaa likhaya tusi......

Yaadan nu piroyii jaandi ae...
Kalam de raahi roop vi royi jandi ae...

Dardan ne lagda gheraya mere vang..
Tanhiyoon askaan di maala piroyi jandi ae..

Purane ristayaan di yaadan de zakhmaan nu..
Akharaan rahin ,Gazal ch sanjoyi jandi ae...

....... Smile dear...............


 
Old 16-08-2007
navjot singh
 
Re: Do Gallaan

nice 1


thax for sharing

 
Old 16-08-2007
roop@punjaban
 
Re: Do Gallaan

ssa ji
thnks simmi ji te navjot ji
eh dard tan ohhi samj sakda aa
jis te bitti hovve
eh dard te vala dugga aa simmi ji
jinna bharan di khosish kardi haan
una hor badh da janda aa

 
Old 17-08-2007
SherDil™
 
Re: Do Gallaan

tusi kihre dard pale hoye aa
aapa vall dekho dard vi hunde sanu par asi khush hi enna rahida
ke dard agge aaun nu rasta labde rehnde par aa ni sakde

 
Old 17-08-2007
❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤
 
Re: Do Gallaan

bohat vadiaaa ah ji..........thxxxxxxxxxxx

 
Old 17-08-2007
roop@punjaban
 
Re: Do Gallaan

ssa ji
thnks tuhada
sher dil ji main bhut apne aap nu khush rakhan di khoshish kardi haan
but ethe india ch mere naal de
kayyi cheezan us naal juriyan ne
te mainu na chahundeyan v yaad aa jandiyan ne puraniyan gallan te dil fer dukhi ho janda aa
but i will try to track this
take care
rab rakha

 
Old 18-08-2007
SherDil™
 
Re: Do Gallaan

aahi te main kehna si take kare rakho aapni :D
enve bahle dukha ch ni payida
Dukh khushi to bahut darda aa

 
Old 18-08-2007
smilly
 
Re: Do Gallaan

Originally Posted by roop@punjaban View Post
ssa ji
thnks simmi ji te navjot ji
eh dard tan ohhi samj sakda aa
jis te bitti hovve
eh dard te vala dugga aa simmi ji
jinna bharan di khosish kardi haan
una hor badh da janda aa
I agree with u roop ji.. Jis tan laage oh hi jaane Kaun jaane peed parayi..

Enna dard nu zindagi vich ek sabak di tarah samjhana.. Te pher eh galti na ho jave.. Kyun ki jinaah rahaan te manzil di thaa dard mile... Oh raah mudh ni jaana chida dear...

EH DARD AVALE NE..
JINA DUR JAANDE HAI AAPAN , UNE NEEDE AUNDE NE...

 
Old 31-08-2007
roop@punjaban
 
Re: Do Gallaan

ssa simmily ji
haanji hun te hogi galti hun dubara karn di kadde v galti nhi karni ji
thnks ji tuhada
take care g

 
Old 31-08-2007
Panjaban
 
Re: Do Gallaan

Roop sis ji
Bahut sohna likheya tusi.

 
Old 31-08-2007
roop@punjaban
 
Re: Do Gallaan

ssa ji
thnks tuhada dear

 
Old 31-08-2007
Konvicted_Jatt
 
Re: Do Gallaan

dard-e-dil...... dard-e-jigar....
nice poetry...... khush raho roop ji.....


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