Dil Vich Peedh Te Naini Paani......

smilly

VIP
DO RUHAAN DI AJAB KAHAANI,
DIL VICH PEEDH TE NAINI PAANI,
MUK GAYIN AASAAN MUK GAYIANN SADHARAAN,
NAHIN MUKDI EH JIND MARJAANI,

BADLYAA MAUSAM,
BADLIAAN RUTTAN
NA BADALI OH YAAD PURAANI ,
NA HONYIAAN KOI SADRAAN PURIYAA..
NA MILYA KADE ROOHAAN DA HAANI..,
KIJ KATIYE UMARAAN DA MELA ..,
HAR PAL YAAD AAVE MARJAANI....

BULI BAITHE SI JO EK ARSEE TON...
KYUN MUDH MUDH CHEETE AAVE KHAANI...
PYAAR KITA NAA TODH NIBHAYAA,
TAANHIYOON RUL GAYI EH JIND NIMAANI.....


:(( :tear :((
DO RUHAAN DI AJAB KAHAANI,
DIL VICH PEEDH TE NAINI PAANI
 

reshmi_mutiyar

LITTLE KITTEN

BADLYAA MAUSAM,
BADLIAAN RUTTAN
NA BADALI OH YAAD PURAANI ,,,,,,,,,,





wow,,ki kavva, tusi te meri v bolti band karra diti,,, enna sohna likhiya,,,,, :hug
 

smilly

VIP
BADLYAA MAUSAM,
BADLIAAN RUTTAN
NA BADALI OH YAAD PURAANI ,,,,,,,,,,






wow,,ki kavva, tusi te meri v bolti band karra diti,,, enna sohna likhiya,,,,, :hug


thanx.......

No dear tusi bhut vadiyaa likhde ho ..... ate eh thread vi inspired by your word (neer jo tusin mainu keha si)...(ki neer hove naina vich tanhiyoon vadiyaa likh sakde haan aapaan) eh gal sach hai.... es nu likhan layi thuvade ton prerit hoya haan......

thanx dear......

You are best poet ...... main kite vi stand ni kard in fron of u ......

sach kadva honda hai te main .... main is nu manda haan

But thanx u like that.......
 

Johal

ChArDi KaLaN
Chir ton rehnde dil cho ik dam kadne saukee nai
sajjan hunde nashia warge chadnee saukee nai

baii ggg bahut wadiya likhia tusi ............
ih likhan walla kam wi koi koi kar sakda hai har kise de wass di gal nai.
 

smilly

VIP
Chir ton rehnde dil cho ik dam kadne saukee nai

sajjan hunde nashia warge chadnee saukee nai

baii ggg bahut wadiya likhia tusi ............

ih likhan walla kam wi koi koi kar sakda hai har kise de wass di gal nai.


THANX DEAR...
BHUT JAYAADA MAAN DE DITA......


Chir ton rehnde dil cho ik dam kadne saukee nai

sajjan hunde nashia warge chadnee saukee nai

TUSIN VI VADIYAA LIKHYAA AE.....
 

SehaJ

Troublemaker
Thanks 22.... thanks a lot... bas kuch suitations eda de ho jandiyan ne... where u wanna get out of it but u cant... i m in same boat.. trying to get out... lets see whan i m able to do that fully..
 

smilly

VIP
Thanks 22.... thanks a lot... bas kuch suitations eda de ho jandiyan ne... where u wanna get out of it but u cant... i m in same boat.. trying to get out... lets see whan i m able to do that fully..


MERIYAA DUAAVAAN 22 TERE NAAL AE.... RABB SADAA TERE ANG SANG SAHYI HOVEGA..

KHUSH REHA KAR CHANGA NI LAGDA UDAAS EH KAM MERE VARGIYAAN DA HAI....
 

W3LLY

Vehla
DO RUHAAN DI AJAB KAHAANI,
DIL VICH PEEDH TE NAINI PAANI

Wah Ji Wah Bai ji Bhaut Sohna Likheya

Kini Der Sahu Peedh Eh Jind Nimani
Ik Din Rondea Dhondea Muk Jaani
Eh Ik Tarfi Pyar Di Kahani
 

smilly

VIP
DO RUHAAN DI AJAB KAHAANI,

DIL VICH PEEDH TE NAINI PAANI

Wah Ji Wah Bai ji Bhaut Sohna Likheya

Kini Der Sahu Peedh Eh Jind Nimani
Ik Din Rondea Dhondea Muk Jaani
Eh Ik Tarfi Pyar Di Kahani


thanx 22 ji......

pyaar di khaani ethe vi aa gayi.....

ki gal 22 .........

BHUTA PYAAR PYAAR NA KAREYA KAR.....
ES PYAAR NE PAYE POVAADE ....
KAYIAAN NU ENAA JOGI KITA....
KAYIN GAYE ETHE MARE ..........

ESNU PHER COMPLETE KARANGA.......
 
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