Dil De Kareeb

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 12, 2008

• #1

SSA ji sab nu...

Barhe dina da soch reha c eh thread shuru karn da par time nahi milda c.... kujh busy c...

Tusi ethe oh special Shairy, Gaane, etc post karo jehre tohade dil de kareeb ne, ya jo tohanu kise di yaad karaunde ne, ya kise incident di yaad karaunde ne...

Chahe fer tusi os naal jurhi kahani dasso ya na, par shairy ya gane ta dass hi sakde ho..

Chalo fer ho javo shuru....

Hope to hear a lot from you guys....

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grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 12, 2008

• #2

Pehla shair mere walon:

Pyaar wafa bin husn ki karna,
Beshak dil ne bhawe....
Bhath pave oh sona yaro,
Jo kanna nu khave....

 

MAVERICK

Member

• Jan 12, 2008

• #3

Veer main contribute karan de layak te hai nahi...par i can say..nice thread...

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 12, 2008

• #4

THE GODFATHER said:

Veer main contribute karan de layak te hai nahi...par i can say..nice thread...

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Shukriya veer ji...

te tusi kis tara di gall karti veer, tusi jo v likho sanu sir mathe kabool hai...

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Jan 12, 2008

• #5

thread bahut wadiya banaya aa but mainu ta app kuch nahin aunda

 

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desi _kuri

Member

• Jan 12, 2008

• #6

good jobkeep it up

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 14, 2008

• #7

Koi kujh dasso v k thread nu hi salahi javoge....

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Jan 14, 2008

• #8

ah ganna mere dil de bahut kareeb aa so ohi share kar laindi aa..poetry ta aundi nahin....


tak lava tenu kite sohneya ve mere rukk jande pair...chit karda ve mera ghut bhar lava tera..aukhi ho gayi katni ve satho raat..sadii tere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichley janam di...rabb di sau tenu kite mili aa jarur ve..tanhi ruk jaan pair hoke majbur ve..kiddan tenu main bhulava ghut sine naal lava kahto raab ne banayi vakh jaat ve koi pichley janam di...sadi tere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichley janam di ...i just love this song

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Jan 14, 2008

• #9

layo ji main ta is thread ch contribute kar dita

 

P-a-r-d-e-s-i

Ranja

• Jan 14, 2008

• #10

Try... Ssa ji me mob to try kr reha

 

P-a-r-d-e-s-i

Ranja

• Jan 14, 2008

• #11

Bohut hi badya thread banai hai a tusi
me bhi whn comp te auga apna jogdaan pauga

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 14, 2008

• #12

kudi_patole_wargi said:

ah ganna mere dil de bahut kareeb aa so ohi share kar laindi aa..poetry ta aundi nahin....


tak lava tenu kite sohneya ve mere rukk jande pair...chit karda ve mera ghut bhar lava tera..aukhi ho gayi katni ve satho raat..sadii tere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichley janam di...rabb di sau tenu kite mili aa jarur ve..tanhi ruk jaan pair hoke majbur ve..kiddan tenu main bhulava ghut sine naal lava kahto raab ne banayi vakh jaat ve koi pichley janam di...sadi tere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichley janam di ...i just love this song

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Such a lovely song, too good

kudi_patole_wargi said:

layo ji main ta is thread ch contribute kar dita

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Shukriya ji contribute karn vaste

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 14, 2008

• #13

P-a-r-d-e-s-i said:

Bohut hi badya thread banai hai a tusi
me bhi whn comp te auga apna jogdaan pauga

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Jaroor ji jaroor..
Always Welcome

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 14, 2008

• #14

Eh jehri rubai likhan ja reha oh kise khas di yaad nu taza kar dindi hai:

Vichhar geya mere dil da jani,
Te main kakhaa.N vangu rul gayi..
Phulla vangu nazuk jindarhi,
Meri vich kandeya de tull gayi..
Gham sajjna de mar mukaya,
Te main athru ban k dhull gayi...
Ik mahiya teri yaad na bhuldi,
Baki har shai jagg di bhull gayi...

 

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~Badmassha Vich Shareef~

• Jan 14, 2008

• #15

bahut hi vadiyaa thread aa........... main kuch try karda aa.........

Tu aap KHUDA de naa warga
sade pind nu jande rah warga
das tenu kiwe bhula deva
tu aunde jande rah warga.......

 

P-a-r-d-e-s-i

Ranja

• Jan 14, 2008

• #16

Dis song menu bohut wadya lagda Gurdaas Maan bhaji da "tere mere pyaar de taare gwah ne"

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 15, 2008

• #17

Aah wala v bahoot changa lagda hai mainu:

Dil de rishte tutde dhunge jhakham laga jande,
Peerh sehn di uukt ta hauli hauli aaundi e..
Takna chhaddeya tainu vekhi bhull v javange,
Jaan nikalde aakhir thorha chir ta laundi e...

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 18, 2008

• #18

Asi kharhe c paharh ban jihna piche ret di deewar dasde,
Yaari khoon nalo sanghni c ajj jo mamuli jaankar dasde,
Aap pittal to sona ban baithe, phulla to asi khaar ho gaye....
Hun sanu nahio chajj nal balaunde o jado de star ho gaye...

 

smilly

VIP

• Jan 22, 2008

• #19

Mere dil de karib taan bhut sariyaan lines ne dear...... te unha de bade ghude meaning ne.....


Waaris shah na rakhiyaan rehn sada ...
Jinah diyaan pataan rabb utariyaa ne.....

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Aise jivan bhi hai jo jiye he nahi...
Jinko jeene se pehle hi maut aa gayi....
Fhool aise bhi hai jo khile hi nahi .....
Jinko khil ne se pehle khiza kha gayi.....

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Ek din bik jayega maati ke mol...
Jag mein reh jayege pyare tere bol....
Duje ke honthon pe deke apne geet....
Koi nishani chod phir duniya gol......

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Zindagi ka safar hai yeh
Kaisa sa safar...........

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Pani da bul bula hai ......
Eh jivan dosto........
Pata ni kado kis ne muk jana.......

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grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Jan 22, 2008

• #20

Vake hi bahoot khoobsoorat ne veer ji...

Te tusi har line sanjhi kar sakde ho, if you feel like