bahaane naye haiN (4u)

smilly

VIP

• Jun 2, 2007

• #1

naye Dhang haiN ab, zamaane naye haiN
na aane ke un ke, bahaane naye haiN

nahiN kuch hai badla riwaaj-e-muhabbat
hai qissa wahi par, diwaane naye haiN

nigaahoN ki aadat wahi hai puraani
nishaana wahi par, nishaane naye haiN

agar aik bichDa nasheman to kya gham
banaane hameN aashiyaane naye haiN

Shayar naya hai Dard ae bhi gum naye hai .
Shayri vohi hai , likh jo fasaane naye haiN !

 

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Whisky-d-botal

Sohni-kuri

• Jun 11, 2007

• #2

good one i really like it

 

kudi_patole_wargi

Ki Zor Gareeba Da

• Jun 11, 2007

• #3

wow tusi ta kamal hi kiti payi aa..bahut sohna likhde ho

 

smilly

VIP

• Jun 11, 2007

• #4

Whisky-d-botal said:

good one i really like it

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thanx ... for appreciatation

 

smilly

VIP

• Jun 11, 2007

• #5

kudi_patole_wargi said:

wow tusi ta kamal hi kiti payi aa..bahut sohna likhde ho

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thanku ji ........... for appreciatation .....

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Jun 11, 2007

• #6

very nice aa g
mainu vi apne vaang likhana sikha dioo

 

smilly

VIP

• Jun 11, 2007

• #7

Pardesan Punjaban said:

very nice aa g
mainu vi apne vaang likhana sikha dioo

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thanks ji..... Tusin taan pehlaan hi vadiyaa likhde ho ...... Mere Sohne veer te..... , maama ji te latest likhaya........ , tusin bhut achaa likde ho.....

thankx.. manu maan dain layi.......

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• Jun 11, 2007

• #8

smilly said:

thanks ji..... Tusin taan pehlaan hi vadiyaa likhde ho ...... Mere Sohne veer te..... , maama ji te latest likhaya........ , tusin bhut achaa likde ho.....

thankx.. manu maan dain layi.......

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oh te main kamal kutia si
vaase thudia wording nice hundia saaria

 

smilly

VIP

• Jun 11, 2007

• #9

Pardesan Punjaban said:

oh te main kamal kutia si
vaase thudia wording nice hundia saaria

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oh kamal ni nahi si ek behtarin kosish si nave tarikee di.
ate veer te taan bhut vadiyaa si.....

main te bass sad hi likda haan.. tusi taan some think new likde ho....

agar shayri sikhni hai taan
reshmi_mutiyar ( APNINDER ) ton sikhana bhut vadiyaa ate enna vadiya likhde haan ki akhar nahi honde taarif nu....

tusi mainu taan avin hi aeena maan de rahe ho........

 

jaggi633725

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• Feb 17, 2009

• #10

nice.