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naye Dhang haiN ab, zamaane naye haiN na aane ke un ke, bahaane naye haiN nahiN kuch hai badla riwaaj-e-muhabbat hai qissa wahi par, diwaane naye haiN nigaahoN ki aadat .....


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Old 02-06-2007
smilly
 
bahaane naye haiN (4u)

naye Dhang haiN ab, zamaane naye haiN
na aane ke un ke, bahaane naye haiN

nahiN kuch hai badla riwaaj-e-muhabbat
hai qissa wahi par, diwaane naye haiN

nigaahoN ki aadat wahi hai puraani
nishaana wahi par, nishaane naye haiN

agar aik bichDa nasheman to kya gham
banaane hameN aashiyaane naye haiN

Shayar naya hai Dard ae bhi gum naye hai .
Shayri vohi hai , likh jo fasaane naye haiN !

 
Old 11-06-2007
Whisky-d-botal
 
Re: bahaane naye haiN (4u)

good one i really like it

 
Old 11-06-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: bahaane naye haiN (4u)

wow tusi ta kamal hi kiti payi aa..bahut sohna likhde ho

 
Old 11-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: bahaane naye haiN (4u)

Originally Posted by Whisky-d-botal View Post
good one i really like it
thanx ... for appreciatation

 
Old 11-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: bahaane naye haiN (4u)

Originally Posted by kudi_patole_wargi View Post
wow tusi ta kamal hi kiti payi aa..bahut sohna likhde ho
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thanku ji ........... for appreciatation .....

 
Old 11-06-2007
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: bahaane naye haiN (4u)

very nice aa g
mainu vi apne vaang likhana sikha dioo

 
Old 11-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: bahaane naye haiN (4u)

Originally Posted by Pardesan Punjaban View Post
very nice aa g
mainu vi apne vaang likhana sikha dioo


thanks ji..... Tusin taan pehlaan hi vadiyaa likhde ho ...... Mere Sohne veer te..... , maama ji te latest likhaya........ , tusin bhut achaa likde ho.....

thankx.. manu maan dain layi.......

 
Old 11-06-2007
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: bahaane naye haiN (4u)

Originally Posted by smilly View Post

thanks ji..... Tusin taan pehlaan hi vadiyaa likhde ho ...... Mere Sohne veer te..... , maama ji te latest likhaya........ , tusin bhut achaa likde ho.....

thankx.. manu maan dain layi.......
oh te main kamal kutia si
vaase thudia wording nice hundia saaria

 
Old 11-06-2007
smilly
 
Re: bahaane naye haiN (4u)

Originally Posted by Pardesan Punjaban View Post
oh te main kamal kutia si
vaase thudia wording nice hundia saaria
oh kamal ni nahi si ek behtarin kosish si nave tarikee di.
ate veer te taan bhut vadiyaa si.....

main te bass sad hi likda haan.. tusi taan some think new likde ho....

agar shayri sikhni hai taan
reshmi_mutiyar ( APNINDER ) ton sikhana bhut vadiyaa ate enna vadiya likhde haan ki akhar nahi honde taarif nu....

tusi mainu taan avin hi aeena maan de rahe ho........


 
Old 17-02-2009
jaggi633725
 
Re: bahaane naye haiN (4u)

nice.


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