bagaawat...

gorakhnathdatilla

BIRHA TU SULTAN

• May 8, 2007

• #1

ohna dian...
hikaarat bhariyan nazraan nu,
main aapas wich -
dabbi awaaz wich galaan karde,
badi waar sunya hai!
jado oh aakh rahe hunde ne,
mere wall sainnat karke -
"eh ajj kal,
hauli-hauli, khaamosh...
bagaawat kar riha hai!
zindagi nu zindagi na aakhke..."

ohna nu lagda hai...
ke main,
kavita nahi likhda...
balke -
zindagi di katha da...
maut di bhaasha wich anuwaad karda ha!

main jaanda ha!
ehna nazraan de darr nu...
main samjhda ha...
keon namkeen khaamoshi wich,
ek laash wangu pal pal sadd rahe...
insaan de saahan di dhuni nu-
'kavita' aakh ditta janda hai!
- har waar...

mainu pata hai,
meri ikallta...
mere naalo zyaada,
ohna nazraan nu keon khattakdi hai!

mere lai...
'shor' kade 'kavita' nai banya!
te ohna lai...
'kavita' sada to hi 'shor' rahi hai...

ta hi ta shayad...
ohna nu bada bura lagda hai-
jado main khaamoshi ch liptya...
ohna de saaf-shafaaf,
korey kaaghzan,
ya makhhmali gaddeyan jahe chehrian ton...
guzr jaanda ha!
pichhe kujh shikan de lafzaan dian...
paidaan chhad da!

ta hi ta...
ohna nu ajj kal,
meri khaamoshi...
meri 'bagaawat' ton -

bada bhae aunda hai!!!​

 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy

• May 8, 2007

• #2

...................

 

gorakhnathdatilla

BIRHA TU SULTAN

• May 9, 2007

• #3

thanks sandoz..

 

grewalsandy

Jatt Jalandhary

• Dec 10, 2007

• #4

Ki kaha es bare,
Mashaallah kyaa likhea hai. Rooh di khurak bandia ne eho jehia rachnava.
Lafza di thurh hai mere kol es di tareef karan vaste.

samajh lena kharaha ho khud tarhiya maar reha ha.

 

smilly

VIP

• Dec 10, 2007

• #5

Bohat sohna likhay dear......

 

jaggi633725

***********

• Feb 16, 2009

• #6

nice.