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babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

aaj mai karke sab nu paryean ,, chad ditta jo ve se payea,, dunyiea ne jo reet banyee os nu niba gaye aa,, babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea tere .....


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Old 15-12-2007
sunny240
 
babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........


aaj mai karke sab nu paryean ,,
chad ditta jo ve se payea,,
dunyiea ne jo reet banyee os nu niba gaye aa,,
babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea tere nal mai aa gaye aa..


maat pita de lad ve chad aaye,chad aaye sab khed purane,,
bachpan diyea oh saryiea galla veer bhenna sang pal jo manne..
aapne vehre diya oh yadda aaj sab hi bhulla gaye aa,,
babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea tere nal mai aa gaye aa..


kehnde ne change bhaag kudi de do do maa baap jo milde ne,,
ik ghar vich supne oh bije duje ghar ja oh kihrde ne,,
chad ke aaj sab aapne riste tere ristyea nu aapna gaye aa,,
babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea tere nal mai aa gaye aa..


dukh sukh ki aapna sab kuj tere naal hi jod layea,,
mann ke bas tainu hi aapna aaj mukh sab to mod layea..
sunny aaj to naal tere jeen maran diya kasma kha gaye aa,,
babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea tere nal mai aa gaye aa..








kade hass ly da kade ro ly da,,
jehda hass k bulawe ohde ho ly da..

 
Old 15-12-2007
Preeto
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

awwwwwww that's very nic...thanks for sharing!! bohat vadiya likhiya...........

 
Old 15-12-2007
sunny240
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

Originally Posted by Namani View Post
awwwwwww that's very nic...thanks for sharing!! bohat vadiya likhiya...........
thnx ji bhaut bhaut thuhada...mere close frnd de di de mrrrige to wapas aayea se hune ohna de pind to bas dil ch aayea jo kuj oh likh ta.......

 
Old 15-12-2007
Preeto
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

Originally Posted by sunny240 View Post
thnx ji bhaut bhaut thuhada...mere close frnd de di de mrrrige to wapas aayea se hune ohna de pind to bas dil ch aayea jo kuj oh likh ta.......
ya it's written very nicely!! gud job

 
Old 15-12-2007
sunny240
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

Originally Posted by Namani View Post
ya it's written very nicely!! gud job

thnx ji bhaut bhaut..........

 
Old 15-12-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

bahut dil nu choon wali gallan likhiya ne sunny paaji...eh sabh kuch padh ke bahut hi acha lageya..te je tusi mind na karo main kuch lines apne signature ch likh layiya ne ....tfs

 
Old 15-12-2007
Pardesan Punjaban
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

bahut nice aa

 
Old 15-12-2007
sunny240
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

Originally Posted by kudi_patole_wargi View Post
bahut dil nu choon wali gallan likhiya ne sunny paaji...eh sabh kuch padh ke bahut hi acha lageya..te je tusi mind na karo main kuch lines apne signature ch likh layiya ne ....tfs


thnx ji bhaut bhaut ena mann den ly........ji tusi jaroor use karo ji eh lines eh mere ly khusi de gal hai thnx 4 that..............

 
Old 15-12-2007
sunny240
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

Originally Posted by Pardesan Punjaban View Post
bahut nice aa
thnx ji bhaut bhaut thuhada..........

 
Old 15-12-2007
kudi_patole_wargi
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

thankju

 
Old 15-12-2007
THE GODFATHER
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

very nice!!

 
Old 16-12-2007
Johal
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

bhaut sohnaaa likhiaaaa dearrrrr

 
Old 16-12-2007
sunny240
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

Originally Posted by THE GODFATHER View Post
very nice!!
thnx ji bhaut bhaut.............

 
Old 16-12-2007
sunny240
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

Originally Posted by johal View Post
bhaut sohnaaa likhiaaaa dearrrrr

bhaut bhaut thnxx dearrr...........

 
Old 17-12-2007
smilly
 
Re: babul da ghar chad ve mahyiea ..........

Bhot Bhot Sohna likhaya dear......


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